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SnoringFrog — No Time Left
Published: 2007-11-16 23:46:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 229; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 7
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Description The dams are broken
And fear floods in
It fills your lungs
You gasp for breath
Crushed by the weight
Of it all around you
You'll suffocate
Your end has found you
Gasp gasp, gasp for breath
There's no more air
You have no time left
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Comments: 6

laura-beth467 [2007-11-30 03:25:24 +0000 UTC]

yes the correlation works.. its a very good piece.

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doby900 [2007-11-16 23:50:58 +0000 UTC]

nice

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SnoringFrog In reply to doby900 [2007-11-17 00:30:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, it's good to hear something on my newer work finally.

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doby900 In reply to SnoringFrog [2007-11-17 01:10:04 +0000 UTC]

but its the best ive ever herd

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SnoringFrog In reply to doby900 [2007-11-17 01:18:16 +0000 UTC]

Well, nobody's left any comments on my newest 10 or so poems, and I've been trying not to update them too quickly. I just don't get alot of traffic around here.

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doby900 In reply to SnoringFrog [2007-11-18 04:15:46 +0000 UTC]

ya it sucks

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