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Published: 2011-06-29 16:22:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 1289; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 26
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:'Dpage two of the comic for . just a teeny tiny intro peek, more to come later on.
team Band-Aids app: [link]
previous: [link]
next: [link]
and it unfortunately took me much too long to finish this one.. it should've only taken me about 1-2 days, but i've slacked off a bit and finished this page within three days. UGH. i got all scared cuz my art consistency started to slip... (but then again.. despite all that, i technically wouldve finished this page yesterday, if not for that creepy spider crawling onto the keyboard late in the night and forcing me to retreat to my bed and dream about happier things...
)BUT GUYS, I'M GETTING LAZY. QUICK!!! EVERYONE SAY MOTIVATIONAL WORDS TO INSPIRE ME TO KEEP ON PUSHING ON!!!
i feel like trying to get in one more page for the comic by today... or by tomoro morning, early... i just wanna make up for all the slacking i've been doing. >.<
so yeah, anywho, here's page two, hope you guys enjoy! (tell me.... is the dialogue any bit awkward or just cliche? tell me now... i feel like the way Aurrik talks is just slipping between normal and cheesy. XD)
And what's this? my first cameo! woahwoahwoah! featuring ~SilverNight-Wolf 's team, Rapidfire. hope you're happy with it! i myself am only a little happy with how they turned out, actually... XD if you would like another cameo, i'll be very happy to do more of Rivet and Pastel.
other planned cameos:
- team Third Wheel [link]
- team NightShade [link]
- team Slack [link]
- team Baron Aces [link]
- TEAM NIGHT BASKERS [link]
if anyone else would like a cameo, i may consider it, but the list is starting to get a little too big for just 2 weeks of work, so... understand asking will not guarantee a cameo spot.
artwork done by me (in photoshop elements 5.0, might i add
)! do not steal or copy or any of that nasty art-thief shiz, or else i'll curse your brain implode when you least expect it. 
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Comments: 22
That Pixie is so adorable~ ID Keep going madam~!
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agreed, agreed. she's always so cute. XD
thanks! I SHALL! 8D
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Pixie is so precious!! and the Growlithes in this page
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teeheeee, i know, i know! soso cute! thanks! x3
also, i'm not sure if you know already, but there's already a mini-cameo of your team on the next page. more to come of third wheel in the pages in progress~ ;D
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OOOoo!! I thought so, but I didn't want to say anything if it was a secret or something xD
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The way you colored the big panel looks nice....
and now...YOU CAN DO ETTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!
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thank you!
and now... THANNNNNK YOUUUUUUU!!!
it's all about confidence!!! >8D
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YUSH! Confidence be key >x]
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Aurrik and Pixie seem like good friends with Rivet and Pastel :3
They both look so adorable, thank you <3 and if you ever have time or room and want to add them in just go for it. I won't impose. And just look how cute those two are running together(Pastel is rather cute too, but I must say Rivet is cuter). If it's all right, could they be possible friends for my cameo?
Sorry that's all jumbled up, I had no idea what to say so I just wrote down what I thought first. This also helped make me smile after such a long day, so thank you <3
Keep going! You can do it, this club must have more cute Growlithes!
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of course! i'd love it better if they were friends during the cameo scene, actually. XD have fun drawing!
and i'm glad you liked it! i'll definitely try to squeeze your team in whenever i've got time again. i'm sure that i will, but we'll see. I'M SO UP FOR IT THO!
glad this helped brighten your day! and Amen, PMD-explorers needs an army of cute growlithes. XD
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I agree, that would be better if they were friends in this cameo as well XD thanks!
Awesome, I'll have to do the same if I can!(I have a lot of cameos as well...)But I definitely know where I want to place your team in this mission.
Yes, it also inspired me to actually start drawing again(such a long day, so tired, but I must go on!). Time to round up all the Growlithes XD
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awesome! team band-aids has a spot in your comic! guwaaaa i dunno why, but that just makes me all bouncy and happy.
yeeeeh, keep drawing, keep drawing! i'll do the same. i've been a slave to photoshop ever since i started drawing this comic... we can do this. XD
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WHY AM I NOT ON THAT LIST? 8C
YOU FORGOT ABOUT MEEEEE!!!! DX DX DX
Naaaah, jk. XD Well, I'm not on the list, but I know I'm still in. :3
Anyway, I really love this page. Especially Panel 2 ^^ I love the shadow behind Aurrik there and the little drawings of the missions from Mission 1. C: Especially the one where he's wet. XD XD XD I also like the way you drew Aron. Looks so cute~! 8D
But yeah! :'D Awww....evil spider taking away your time. :c But as you said, make it up by working even harder on the next page! >8D >8D >8D
The only dialogue on this page that sounds a tiny bit cheesy and/or awkward (just a tiny bit. :3) to me is the third to last speech bubble. The last bubble for panel 2. I mean, its content is fine! It's just the way he says it. :3 Like, when I read it, it seems fine until I get to the "One miracle of a chance" line. In fact, if I delete that one sentence and read the speech bubble, then it sounds fine. I think it's just that there's a bit too much when he lists those beliefs. :3 So maybe delete one of the two sentences after the first sentence. Or maybe find a way to retype it. Just a suggestion~ :3
Other than that, everything else seems fine. ^^
But I see a typo~! : D In panel one when he says "I'm the leader..." and such, it should be "I'm the leader OF the Band-Aids Merchants". Forgot the "of". ;3 That's all~!
Anyway, KEEP GOING BUDDY! GO, GO, GO!!!! I want to see pages and story! >8D DO IIIIIT!!! I want to see more of cute Aurrik and Pixie~! : D And the cameos~! It's so interesting to see the cameos enter the comic pages. >:3
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HOLY---
HOW DID I FORGET????????
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sorry, i think i was sleepy while i was writing the artist's comments this morning. but that's still bad, cuz i had all of the teams i'd cameo on a little post-it note right here... i guess the keyboard was covering ur team. urs was on the bottom, in the extra-boxed in section...?
alright, alright, good point. i can't believe i made that typo. and i'll delete the sentence, too!.... so that was the cheezy part. XD
i'll keep going, i'll keep going~
but i'll be watching a movie at 6 30 tonight, so... i'll continue after i watch that. :'D
i've got the basic layout plan, tho!
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HOW COULD YOU?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? >8C I thought we were Man-buddies....D8> D8> D8>
XD It's fine~ ....why was mine in an extra-boxed section...? 
And I love how my team's name is in capital letters. XD XD XD DON'T CHANGE IT. XD
And you got it wrong! It's "THE Night Baskers". >:c BAD ALLISON.
No, it's fine.
XD Ick, when I see a typo on one of my pages, I have a little "GAH! D8>" attack. So don't worry, it happens to me too~ :'D
Ah, and okay~ It wasn't necessarily cheesy. I think it's just the way it was typed in that list. A list like that can only have two things before it starts to sound a little off and/or cheesy. :3 That's what I think at least, from how my mind is taking it. And I think experience too. XD
Actually, I think if you add "It's a miracle of a chance" at the beginning of that third sentence instead, it'll break away from that list and sound fine. ^^ "It's a miracle of a chance to do what your heart is telling you". And if you do that, maybe combine the last two sentences. So it'll be "Enjoy it while you've got it, and race to your heart's content". :3 I think that can work. To make it smoother, you can even add a "so" in front of "enjoy". "So enjoy it while you've got it, and race to your heart's content". Yeah. I think that'll sound perfectly fine without changing the content of the dialogue. ^^ Just more suggestions~ Choose what you want to do. ;3
But yeah! Keep going! And I hope you enjoyed your movie! >:3
GEWD! Good luck! ;D
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we are man-buddies. it's just that i'm a forgetful one. XD
you were extra-boxed in because as a very good friend of mine, it was required you were in the story at some point. maybe even with dialogue. yeah, probably. XD that, and we promised each other we'd cameo each other, soo... yeah. can't break a promise. XD
me too, me too... i look back on the page and i'm all, 'DANGITT.' i still have this page to edit, too... hmmmmmm i'll do that later. XD
and the movie WAS good! we watched 'Thor', and i wasn't expecting much cuz it looked like a movie for motor-cyclers (let alone the name THOR makes me think of motorcyclers, and mythological ppl), but no! it was a movie with excellent actors, excellent story, excellent humor, excellent graphics. probably one we'll get for our blu-ray player.
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Don't worry, maaaaaaan. We're both forgetful. XD
Awwwwwwww, I'm special~ C: PROMISE-BREAKER.
Jk. XD But yeah~! Yaaaay! : D No broken promises~ >:3
XD Fine, fine.
Oooooh, and that's awesome! 8D Yeah, when I see that title, I think "....mythology dude......boring....?" XD But that's great~ ;D
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MOTIVATIONAL WORDS MOTIVATIONAL WORDS MOTIVATIONAL WORDS.
YOU CAN DO IT MAN I BELIEVE IN YOU COME ON.
(in all serious-ness, I like your story so far! 
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OH THANK YUU FOR THE MOTIVATION. <3
and in all seriousness, thank you. gotta pick up the pace, though. xD
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