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snuder β€” Worthless Help

Published: 2005-03-15 16:43:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 140; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description My minds ways,
A force of mystery,
Destruct of wandering,
Alone in the desolate,
My shield of protection long since past,
Running around as a part of the cast,
Disliking rhymes,
But rhyme I do,
Attempting to stop I do declare,
Is a must for me,
For rhyming is an easy way out,
A border of writing,
Any borders added,
I never seem to follow,
For if I do they writing dulls,
And too much thought is put into it,
Castled away,
By teachers who tell,
How I should write,
When I do what I must do,
I loose the points,
And am given worthless help,
Even though it won’t do anything,
Ignoring the worthless help.
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Comments: 13

Pure-Dax [2005-04-03 16:37:20 +0000 UTC]

Great piece of work, Cred to deviantArt.com

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snuder In reply to Pure-Dax [2005-04-03 16:58:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^-^

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torturebyartist [2005-03-16 16:59:27 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmns. I dunno what to says.

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snuder In reply to torturebyartist [2005-03-16 19:59:13 +0000 UTC]

me neather.......

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Gnomeofdoom [2005-03-16 03:12:20 +0000 UTC]

a wise man once said: "I can be right, or I can get a degree." he chose the degree so he could be right later in life. So, be right, but make sure it doesn't screw you over.

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snuder In reply to Gnomeofdoom [2005-03-16 19:54:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you jesus my most trusted advisor......
but you see if i try writing they're way it comes out incredibly crappy and horrable.......
cause i get 100s nonstop in ELA lab but i cant get above a 3/6 in the regulare class......
maby ms marion just hates me?

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sparkythewonderdog [2005-03-16 02:56:48 +0000 UTC]

hmmm... this had a really strange effect on me. Mix this poem with Dave Matthews band playing in the background and it gave me very mixed feelings.

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snuder In reply to sparkythewonderdog [2005-03-16 19:55:57 +0000 UTC]

lol ^-^

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sparkythewonderdog In reply to snuder [2005-03-19 03:45:33 +0000 UTC]

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1066613 [2005-03-16 01:15:05 +0000 UTC]

very nice
school does have a way of repressing inspiration and individuality

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snuder In reply to 1066613 [2005-03-16 19:49:45 +0000 UTC]

it does....::shakes fist at school::

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PhantomofthePyramid [2005-03-15 21:42:24 +0000 UTC]

awww jared , I like it.

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snuder In reply to PhantomofthePyramid [2005-03-15 21:43:44 +0000 UTC]

i dont like this poem it came out so crappy in my oppinion.......

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