NightmareRara [2019-09-06 22:27:28 +0000 UTC]
This is a cool piece! I'm gonna give some critique though, the eyes don't seem to fit the painting very well. They're too similar in colour to the teeth, maybe a lighter colour for the teeth and a darker colour for the eyes? Also about the eyes, they look like they've been shaded to look like they're glowing, but don't give off light, maybe a less intense tone or some shadow to make it look more natural? Or if you want them to glow, they should affect the lighting at least a little. And if the pupils were pointed at the ends but rounded in the middle slightly it might look more fitting. Those are just the main things I notice, I'm not a very good artist myself and I don't know the story behind this so if I'm offending you please forgive me. TwT
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sokoistrying In reply to NightmareRara [2019-09-08 09:51:38 +0000 UTC]
the eyes weren't meant to glow and the pupils aren't pointed at both ends cause they aren't fully visible, he's looking a tad down so he could stare at the viever so it shouldn't be pointed at that end, but thanks for the criticism, I don't mind people speaking what they think about my art 😊
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