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Sokolas — Crying Luna
Published: 2013-05-17 23:39:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 3367; Favourites: 154; Downloads: 78
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Something really bad must've happened to her... I don't know. I just felt a sudden urge to draw this.Related content
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black star:"why are you crying?"
Luna:"we are all alone they all want tia,they don't want us nobody wants us nobody loves us"
Black Star:"Don't be stupid"*lightly bops her on head*"when you say that you mean me as well? don't presume to know whats in my head and you are Not alone, I'm here and I'll always be here"
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Black Star:"Now lets get out of the rain*It's flowing mane wraps around her shoulders and guides her to a small house*and wipe your tears,as beautiful as you look with them they don't suite you*as it brushes the tears from her eyes the contact causes the moon princess to blush*"now that looks suits you,now if you can't sleep I'll sing to you like i used to when we were young well younger I think i can still carry a tune"*as the black star pony sing just as it promised three words went through the princess mind just before she drifted off to sleep"we are loved"
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*As the sun slowly the Black Star returns to watching the sleeping moon princess,she mostly had a sound sleep but even the queen of the night has nightmares,the most resent one had lasted about 1000 years a failure on both his part and her sisters,but this time any restlessness was chased away by his song*I still need to tell you something"*the princess rises to answer*"why?"*the black star looks into her more rested but still reded aquamarine eyes*because your still uncertain which caused you to not sleep as soundly as i liked and that is my fault"*the princess argues*"you have done more than enough for us even though we don't deserve it"*Black Star shakes It's head*"And that why I'm at fault because you still feel that way because I haven't told you how much I care" "But you have it our own fault that we are still uneasy"*the princess is interrupted to which Black Star replies*"I have shown you by my actions but not by direct words three to be exact and i understand why,those words are spoken confirmation of my feelings and you haven't gotten that and i apologize it was not my intention.""But why us"*the princess asks*"what could we have have done to deserve you"*Black Star looks at her fondly,here she was his goddess saying she was undeserving of him*"If you could see your face,of course it was you how could it not be? and I will tell you the words help you be more at ease the three words you deserve to hear"*He looks into her eyes as he says this*"princess luna I.Love.You"
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thank you but this is something that came off the top of my head
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im sorry but i gotta write another one because the idea keeps buzzing around in my head
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and i'm trying to decide between luna and her new "friend" 
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well im thinking maybe you should write like a complete fic on fimfiction.net or post it here on DA.
Maybe writing is your super special talent that youre going to discover. Maybe all the time you just needed that little bit of encouragement
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and oh yeah heres the link to the tumblr askdarknebula.tumblr.com/page/... and could you give an opinion of what my character's new name should be?I can't call "him" black star because thats the name of "his" species but i want his name to still connect to stars, outer space or black holes
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Hmmm im not sure about a name either
maybe a Glossary of Astronomical Terms would help? burro.astr.cwru.edu/stu/extras...
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and thank you for the glossary by the way
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thanks but hes gonna need two names one when he was normal and one when he became a black star
list of names:black blazar,blue corona,dark equinox,event horizon,dark horizon,blue horizon,dark flare,blue flare,white flare,hadron wave,helio sphere,helio wave,kelvin wave,neutron wave neutron nova,blue photon,blue phase,dark proton,black quasar,crushing quasar,dark solstice,violet nova,
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black blazar, ,dark equinox, blue horizon
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alright how about this then he was a normal star pony his name was blue horizon but now as a black star pony he's called black blazar
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and i think King Sombra gonna be in this but i don't wanna make him too dramatic he had a normal life but was a little selfish but celestia say some good in him a made him her student but the reason he's so grrrrrr is because he's distantly related to a dragon,the dragon blood even though its diluted from many generations but its why hes so strong physically & magically but it also makes him unstable because dragons blood over loads him with strength and greed and it keeps him from what he really wants,he wants love like everybody else but that makes him seem weak so he replaces it with a need for gems and power but he really wants family a wife some brats running around thats what he really wants but he feels he can't have it because it make him look weak,but when he returns fluttershy & rainbow see that like when he see's a child crying and he has a doctor who moment when he sees a kid crying and says "crying silently and when children cry its for attention because they're scared or hurt but when cry silently it's cause they can't stop every parent knows that"or how fluttershy asks him"do you have children?" and sombra gets quiet then answers "no" then rainbow asks "have you ever had children?" sombra just looks off to the side for a bit
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look at this video but put Sombra in the doctor's place www.youtube.com/watch?v=WEoZh2... but even though my charater understands that he still hates sombra and discord because they inflicted the same kind of lonelinesson luna,discord planted the doubt and sombra made it grow with his dark magic which then created nightmaremoon, and another thing about sombra is that no child in the crystal empire has harmed in any way they were put in a happy dream state becaue he can't bring himself to harm a child,he even protected cutie mark cusaders from some timber wolves or the cakes from a dragon,sombra and discord are alot alike in this story because there both pretty powerful but inside their hearts there like children very lonely children their strength caused a lack of friends which then caused them to have stunted emotional maturity, they have an adult mind and body but they still think like children,combine that with the power they have its a bad mix,funny thing is that rainbow dash liked sombra the fastest,when she saw how much much he injoyed her performance,he laughed and clapped like a little kid having a good time or when he baby sat the cakes kids and didn't get bored he actually had fun playing little kid games,or how he got hurt fighting timberwolves and tried to hide the wound but dash saw the blood,his favorites are rainbow dash,derpy hooves,pinkie pie and the crusaders because they make him have have fun,zecora tells him stories,the cake family feed him when he stops by,fluttershy helps him when he's hurt,pinkie pie said to him once"You act like such a mr lonely pants but next to AJ you got the biggest family in ponyville."
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woow looks like you have the story well thought out.
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there a lot of events in between that i have to think of
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but first,any questions?like who and what blackstar is?
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well I suppose is an OC of yours? Who is he?
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It's based after a character from a tumblr so i would have to get the green light from him/her because they thought it up first,i just made up my own individual character, black star is a creature called a black star pony and they are technically genderless but their personality effects what they appear to be that and they shape shift but they always look like unicorns,they are black holes with a pony shaped shell around them,they were once normal star ponies created by princess luna and they sing for her and dance in the night sky but some feel neglected because luna sees to want the ponies of equestria to love her most and just like real life stars die so do star ponies and some come back to life as black stars and have to deal with a constant hunger which make them dangerous to everything so luna banishes them to the darkest reaches of space and that makes them all consumed with hate for her but when she was banished to the moon a black star named dark nebula mocked luna because she banished them for being monsters and then luna ended up becoming one herself ,now as for my character which im changing his name he is one of the few black stars never hated luna even when she banished "him" because he understood he was dangerous and he understood how lonely luna was so he still sang to her even after he became a black star pony and soon they got close but then she was sealed in the moon and because of that he almost destroyed canterlot, since he a living black hole he is very good at gravity spells and he's the reason discord is patch work,because discord couldn't grow back the pieces black star took from him
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awww Come here and have a HUG you cutie!
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ummm actually nvm just realised
:iconlunacry17plz:
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:iconlunacry17plz: <--- this doesnt work anymore
<----- use this
Hope that helps.
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T.T what was the difference
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How do you get your picture there *Q*
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Hnnng! No cry Luna plz! I liekz joo! T_T
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Poem complete...published...thank you for this artwork, I do so love when I am inspired!
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