flameskiss [2005-01-30 19:24:33 +0000 UTC]
lovely. Your poems are few but gooood. The lilting thing goes along well and the ending is great.
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randomoo [2005-01-30 01:27:12 +0000 UTC]
-stares- I love this. I can just imagine how to sing it, even, if it were a song. I don't get that. But it's real. I love the ending. fits the poem perfectly. I can't wait to see what you do for the picture. -squirms-
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sollunestraa In reply to randomoo [2005-01-30 01:56:53 +0000 UTC]
How would you sing it?
randomoo In reply to sollunestraa [2005-01-30 04:04:02 +0000 UTC]
sort of softly, with a lilting tune. I don't know exactly how to describe it over the internet also, when the girl speaks, I would go higher, and when the man speaks, I would go lower, so the narrative parts in between would be at the middle of the scale.