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You know, like the underwear? ;DRelated content
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Brilliant, gentle shot! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="20" height="20" alt="
I think this shot indicates your improvements clearly. You do very well on the way to making breathtaking bokeh shots!
What I do love about this shot is the harmonious unity of swirling dynamics of the background and clear lines of the foreground. This is a very strong and appealing compositional point.
Bokeh is simply fantastic. It looks just like a water colour, very gentle, very mild and having variety.
The weal point is that focus appears to be a little bit soft on those buds that should have been more sharp as central objects of the composition (any photo should have a main character!).
Well done! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="
Nice feature to #iBokeh !
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P.S.S. - I also am thinking that maybe I should crop out a bit of the bottom of the photo to bring the subject flowers a bit lower.
What do you think?
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Awww
I'm glad you like it. (And that you think it's okay for iBokeh. xD)
I know that the focus on the buds is a little soft. 
Next time I'll know to double-check!
Thank you so much for your critique. I don't receive them very often and I appreciate your input on this as well as my other works. (Even if we don't always agree. 
P.S. - Please come back to iBokeh! *tugs on*
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I think the bokeh brighter than the object so that dimention of the object does not show up.
I like this picture anyway
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I'm not quite sure I understand.
Do you mean that the bokeh is too bright and taking away from the flowers; or that the picture as a whole is too bright?
Thanks :]
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oops sorry,
bokeh too bright than the object
therefor the object less of shadow then the color feels too flat
but honestly i loved the color and bokeh also
hope you don't mind
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no, it was an honest critique and I appreciate it.
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