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Published: 2012-07-17 04:21:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 5851; Favourites: 119; Downloads: 161
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EDIT 11|23|15: i have disabled comments, because i am tired of continuously getting comments about how i should change this character to make her better; i honestly think she's fine and so did a lot of other people. if you have anything you want to tell me about how i can change this character i will simply ignore your comment because i will not take your opinion into consideration because i do not care at all. i will not change this character. i am no longer into homestuck so it does not matter anymore.ok so i meant to post her a LONG TIME AGO, but my computer froze while i was finishing up, so i had to turn it off and then when i got back on i did not feel like retyping all that i had wrote , and i hadn't saved into my microsoft word yet...sooooooo here you go!!!!
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Name Sarene Turask
Title Seer of Breath
Age 6 Alternian solar sweeps (13 earth years)
Screen name incorruptibleIridescence
Typing style uses bird puns whenever possible, smiles are suppose to look as if it's a bird :>
Constellation Pavo
Strife Specibi fankind
Fetch Modus Urn
Relations Papa Peacock- Lusus/Sprite (Deceased)
The Immortal- Ancestor
Angora Leiten- Moirail
Planet Land of Breeze and Spirits (LOBAS)
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Sarene Turask, also known by her Trollian handle incorupptibleIridescence, is a troll on Alternia. Her associated constellation is Pavo and her horns wrap around her head. She types in a sky blue with a regular syntax, along with a couple small quirks.
Sarene is Serbian for the word "colorful", her surname/lastname comes from the Bengali word for "Pavo" "Turaska", minus one letter. Her name could also be a pun on the word "serene".
Her weapon of choice is a hand fan. This is most likely a reference to a peacock's tail/train, which resembles a fan. In the beginning her fan(s) are small and handheld, but later on they become larger.
Sarene is a very flamboyant troll, which is a pun to her constellation sign.
Personality
Sarene is a very gentle troll, unlike most of them. She is a very kind, somewhat motherly like troll, with a open-mind and kind heart. Being blunt about things is one of her flaws, that she strongly dislikes about herself. She also strongly dislikes being bossed around and yelled at, she also doesn't like troll/humans who are very misbehaved/ no manners.
Since she is of a high rank on the hemospectrum, she is very elegant and well-mannered, but she does have her little mishaps. Because of her motherly nature, she does not look down upon the low bloods.
Lusus/Sprite
Sarene's lusus is a giant albino peacock, who is referred to as PapaPeacock. Sarene loved PapaPeacock dearly, even though she did dislike his long lectures, him giving his "words" of wisdom, and him being highly protective. When he died Sarene was very upset, but she knew he was accepted into the "Paradise". Because of her lusus's guidance and watchfulness, Sarene is the caring kind troll she is today.
Trivia
Sarene's hive resembles the Taj Mahal, along with two large statues of peacocks in the front "guarding" her hive
Sarene is a high-ranked midblood: her blood color is a peacock blue Although fashion isn't very important to the trolls, because of her peacock like nature, she "peacocks" around with her somewhat colorful attire Originally Sarene was suppose to wear many bangles of blues and greens upon her wrists, but the artist was forgetful and didn't remember to add them Sarene's ancestor, the Immortal, is obviously still alive. Since the peacock is a sign of immortality, the Immortal has phoenix like abilities, being reborn and such Sarene is prospit dreamer--
Homestuck© Andrew Hussie
Sarene Turask© Me
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Comments: 40
Hey there 
I think the blood color is a little too high for her personality, I mean, blue is a nice color, but the personality doesn't really fit with it, higher blood color means a tougher, colder and meaner attitude. Her personality fits better with a jade blood like Kanaya, or a copper blood like Tavros
So I recommend this; put a lower blood color, or if you don't want to, change her personality a little so the color and personality go in harmony
But I think you did it well anyways 
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go read my comment on the other person who said i should change my troll
i understand you're not trying to be bitchy or rude or mean, but for the love of god please read the other comments before typing out one
because i hate having to REPEAT MYSELF OVER AND OVER
she is not meant to be inserted into andrew hussie's homestuck; she was one of the many trolls my friends and i created for our own spin off homestuck (so basically an alternate universe)
she is suppose to be like the kanaya of our homestuck
and i'm not going to change my character because 1. i don't care and 2. i don't care about your opinion on my character if i did i would take it into consideration lastly 3. i'm not into homestuck anymore, so their is no reason to change the character
i would apologize for being a bitch, but i'm not, because you should (as i said) read the other comments before commenting yourself
you honestly shouldn't even have left a comment
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I just want to say, she's looks alright. But I'm not convinced that she is a good character. She's leaning more towards the mary-sue side, but from what I see most things are fine. But here are the major issues.
Name-Planet ;; Okay No issues here, ignore relations, I'll talk about them in a minute
For the fan as weapon, okay you knew to describe the fan more. Because from what I see it's just a plain old fan. Not going to lie, but I've been in my karate class for a around 5 years now, and we receive weapons at our green belts, but our fans have blades of them that actually do something, you know as in lethal. Just a plain fan, sounds uh, you know very passive and stupid. Fans are creative though. ^^ I've been just seeing scythes everywhere. However be careful, fans might be over-used from what I see there not. ^^
Okay wait wut. Flamboyant? Pavo? Flamboyant? How is this pun? I don't get it. But all I know is she better not be flamboyant. We have Terezi, Nepeta, Vriska, and Feferi. They can be pretty flamboyant, so none of that, please.
Her personality is too much like Kanayas. (<--- Major flaw there)
Also nearly was gonna completely rage on your troll, because I thought her skirt was the same color as her blood, as then she would have a been a mutant. Then I googled peacock blue and it's around Vriska's blood color so never mind that fine.
Lusus is fine, great idea. ^^ No idea albino peacocks even were real, but they are beautiful.
Now for the relationships.
She seems so motherly, but has no friends? She has a lovable personality? Why are there no friends? '<' Who is Angora? ((Smart for using another fantroll)) The only thing that really bothered me was the ancestor, the immortal. I know you said the stuff about the peacock being the symbol of immorality, but why? I mean the fact that she is immortal, makes me think is a big mary-sue. I mean her ancestor just bothers me. And also no dancestor? Why have a fan-kind, and a fetch modus with no dancestor? In order for these things she needs to play sburb, which involves dancestors.
She's a low class for highbloods so why does she have a huge hive? And mid-blood? Her blood color is similar to Mindfang, she's a lowclass highblood. '<'
Once again another trait she shares with Kanaya, fashion.
Why bangles? I think only seadwellers are allowed to wear jewelry, not sure only seen royalty wear them, and how would this be made? But can't really say much due to jewelry being mostly fanon, and headcanon. <-- You may ignore this part.
Sorry that I typed like a whole fucking story. But I really want to know more about this OC. Like how did her ancestor's matesprit die, who is her matresprit, etc. I need more information before I can tell whether this is a good character of not. '<'
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ok wOW so um it looks you honestly did NOT read very deep into this at all or bother to look up anything i've said or used
so now i'm going to rant
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i didn't feel like describing everything about her weapon at that moment, and i never went back to add more to it
i was talking about her appearance, not her attitude or personality when i said flamboyant
do you not know the constellation pavo?? did you even bother to look it up?? because that's where the entire flamboyance thing comes in for this character; her sign is a peacock, therefore her appearance will be flamboyant. i don't see how you could miss that??
flamboyant has more than one meaning depending on what you're talking about
ok the fact that her personality is TOO MUCH like kanaya's is not a flaw; the reason i created this character was because me and a couple of friends were going to create our own homestuck universe; this character was never meant to go into andrew hussie's actual world of homestuck and that is why she has NO RELATIONS to any of the canon homestuck characters; in other words she is the KANAYA of our homestuck universe
angora is my best friends fantroll, the two were moirails; and we hadn't gotten around to creating other characters at the time, so therefore she hadn't had any other relations yet
ok this absolutely pissed me off, my fancharacters are NEVER EVER MARY-SUE (i try to avoid it as MUCH as possible) and the fact that you had the AUDACITY to call my character that, threw me into a complete rage; i honestly only focused more on sarene herself, not her ancestor at that time, sarene was the only thing that mattered to me, i was going to go into more depth about her ancestor, i just never did
the reason she doesn't have a dancestor is because the dancestors did not exist when i created her, the dancestors were like introduced in 2013 this character was created in 2012
she's a HIGH-CLASS MIDBLOOD BECAUSE HER FUCKING COLOR WOULD BE BETWEEN TEREZI AND VRISKA
OH WHY IS THAT BECAUSE PEACOCK BLUE IS A BLUE GREEN COLOR, WAIT WHAT IS TEAL, A SHADE OF CYAN (AQUA A BLUEISH GREEN) AND WHAT IS COBALT, A BLUE; i know what the fuck i'm talking about, like i stated before i put A LOT of thought into this character
/why bangles/ did you not read anything i typed or even bothered to look more closely at it; i mean honestly the TAJ MAHAL should have been aHUGE sign that she was inspired by indian culture, hence all the symbolism of immortality; i mean peacocks are india's national bird; and traditional indian clothing, they were many sheer, chiffon, silk, fabrics, and lots of dangling jewelry and guess what else - bangles
and i said in the little trivia section down there she was ORIGINALLY, ORIGINALLY, suppose to have bangles, but because i forgot, i literally just forgot about it, meaning if i ever drew her again she wouldn't even have bangles because i dropped the idea
honestly i don't see how you could not see that this character practically screams i-would-be-from-india-if-i-were-a-human-fucking-being
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sorry if i come off harsh, but i will not stand for ignorance, especially when i put a lot of time and thought into this character; i knew exactly what i was doing when i created this character
and i'm also sorry for the fact that you will not be finding out more information about this character, because if you couldn't tell by looking through my stuff; i dropped homestuck a long time ago
so this explains why i never added more relationships, why she doesn't have a dancestor, and why i never went back to add or fix anything
because i left the fandom
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oh i don't remember seeing your comment!!
thank you so much!! > u <
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i love the way you designed her ^ v ^ do you mind checking out my fantroll [link] im just trying to get some feed back so i can make her better since she my first fantroll ; v ;
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I've an avian fantroll too. :0c
Yours looks great.
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oh cool!! i love birds
thank you! > u <
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Yes, love birds so much. <3
You're welcome.
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Sarene is very cute! I love her design, and how much thought you put into the peacock symbology.
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Wow! I like her horns ^^ And the symbol too.
The only thing I don't like very much is her actitude: she seems to be too kind and motherly; remember that Alternia isn't a peaceful place, and the trolls are quite hostiles, or even dangerous! She must be prepared to fight and she must be able to defend herself. For the rest, I think it's good : )
Well, that's just a suggestion. I haven't roleplayed with her, so I don't know how she is; this is the reaction I had after reading her description. Take it, or leave it ^^
(Her Antecesor has phoenix powers... O.O That's cool!!)
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thank you!!
yes i can understand what you mean, that completely slipped my mind x n x i guess i was to focused about comparing her to a peacock that i forgot to add the troll like nature so THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!! :33
(why yes her ancestor does have phoenix like abilities)
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Ok; I don't mean she has to be a monster or a killing machine (look at Tavros; he's a good troll but he can take a weapon and attack a possible opponent). I've seen some fantrolls who wouldn't hrt a fly, and that's the worst thing a troll could have in their profile, just because they would be culled really soon.
By the way, comparing a troll with a peacock... I would never have though about that; it's original ^^ (I'm not very original making fan characters, though u.u)
A Prospir Dreamer... Mine is a Derse Dreamer, but in the MUGEN version, her moon is Prospit too ^^
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oh don't worry i understood what you meant being able to take care/defending of themselves, i'll have to add that . u .
oh thank you!!!
oh cool!!! wait what do you mean by MUGEN thought?? i am now curious!! > u <
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If I were good at spriting, I would make Homestuck characters for this programme; this is my biggest problem, but for the rest, I can do it easily ^^
No one has made them, and I though "I could do it, if I found sprites of these characters, humans or trolls". I don't know anybody who can make the sprites sheet, so I can't do it u.u
It would be awesome!!
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Well, MUGEN is an engine used for making 2D fighting games, like Street Fighter. The good thing of this is that you can put the characters, stages and even the aspect you want! For example, you can put Link and Sonic vs Miku Hatsune and Ronald Mcdonald to fight in The World That Never Was, for example. You just need the character to use it in the programme. If you don't like any of them, make your very own character!
Do you see my icon? That's Sanako Takanashi, my first character for this engine (and I hope she won't be the ñast one!). Next, I'm planning on making a char of my fantroll, Lagoon Sadnes. However, if you read the descriptions of the image, you'll se that I've made two versions: one for roleplaying (the REAL ONE), and other for this programme, which breaks some essential rules, but for need; otherwise, the character is too boring. I'm plenty conscious that the second version of Lagoon is a "Mary Sue" (alias canon breaker), but that's because I won't ropleplay with her, but with the one who hears the cap.
Search MUGEN fights on youtube, or watch this video; it's my character's move show, where she beats some opponents:
[link]
I make some changes between the real Lagoon and the Lagoon for MUGEN, like her moon, her personality, the story of her Antecesor, and the fact that she meets (well, she sees them from a long distance) some canon trolls. I repeat: THIS IS NOT THE REAL LAGOON. The real one will NEVER know about them. Sorry if I repeat the same too many times, but I want to leave it clear, so I don't have to face a lot of angry and violent fans who come to kill me and paint the walls with my blood ¬ ¬
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OK cool!!!
egad..ikr > - >
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really great job!
your fantroll seems pretty well balanced to me :3
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you're welcome :3 but, i hope you don't mind me askin.Does she have four horns?
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oh no, she only has two horns, but she has like spikes coming off them???
i don't really know how to explain it
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oh i get it like prongs on the base!
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oh lord not that icon!!!D:*huddles into corner*
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hehe i'll just go to a cuter john giggle!! like this one!!!
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This is the first FanTroll that I've seen following the rule of six letters in their name and twelve altogether. Well done.
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