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Sophie-The-Skunk — Jackals VS a Bunny

Published: 2009-12-17 20:36:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 2691; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 29
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Description Another Flash I made using the school's Adobe Flash CS3.
I love how this one turned out
Introducing Geoffrey The Edible Multiplying Bunny Rabbit thingy!
And now you get to see Tyger's color scheme also.

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Comments: 19

Sonic-Guardian [2010-01-11 13:15:12 +0000 UTC]

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Okay, the over all animation is excellent, but, if I could help you with anything I would just say work on the arm movement, as it kind of looks Unnatural e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" /> I know your just starting Flash, that's fine XD, just work with some other techniques, watch some tutorials, etc, and you'll be an expert. The tail movement is great, it looks natural, (unlike others I have seen - an obvious loop). Also practice by studying the arm movement with your OWN arm, that helps a lot as you can see how it works. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />
This was a great little animation for your first few tries, and perfect looping of the animation. Great job! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />

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InvertTails [2009-12-19 01:16:36 +0000 UTC]

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Wow a very nice animation you got there. You seem to have gotten motion tweening down and you did a great job with the tail swishing. Though I'm sorta guessing you used the shape tweening for their tails. And, I like how well you drew these two. I see this flash almost as if it was a piece of a cartoon.

But, speaking of a piece of a cartoon, yes I know your just starting flash though gotta mention it was a bit on the short side. But it was finny so ill give you that.

Another tip though just to make sure. If you did have the frame rate of your flash at 30 fps than that's good but if not I recommend it, because it makes the flash more smoother but you might have to move around keyframes. I also noticed how exact you do frame by frame action with the head of the black jackal to the left. But it does seem a little choppy.

Overall though, I say you did an excellent job on this and I think you will very well with CS3 and i hope to see a full length flash movie soon.

~Invert

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Sophie-The-Skunk In reply to InvertTails [2009-12-19 01:24:49 +0000 UTC]

No the tails were frame-by-frame and I made them in movie clips.
And I don't know if I should change the frame rate cause the school computer can barely run the thing as it is :/
Thanks

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opalthewolffox [2010-01-19 01:57:23 +0000 UTC]

LOL ENDLESS BUNNIES

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UnderhillX [2009-12-23 18:43:35 +0000 UTC]

cool i like it

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BlueberrytheDog [2009-12-21 02:07:40 +0000 UTC]

*GASP there's a bunneh

*GASP Another one

*stares at the flash for a month.

Cool Animation

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Mysticwriter50 [2009-12-19 23:29:23 +0000 UTC]

i like the black jackal it looks like shadow kinda

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Taylorthetiger [2009-12-19 17:42:02 +0000 UTC]

awsome :3

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sophiethewolf-fox [2009-12-18 03:56:20 +0000 UTC]

awwww i like the black wolf ^^

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Sophie-The-Skunk In reply to sophiethewolf-fox [2009-12-18 23:51:12 +0000 UTC]

He's a jackal, both of them are LOL

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sophiethewolf-fox In reply to Sophie-The-Skunk [2009-12-19 05:10:13 +0000 UTC]

ohoooh sory but i still like them

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the-nuclear-wolf [2009-12-18 03:26:10 +0000 UTC]

Excelent. That's the first word to come into my head when I saw this animation. Also the one on the left he's my favorite. :3

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AshleyCarreno [2009-12-17 23:07:44 +0000 UTC]

I love the tail animation! Its just so....AMAZING!!!! *__*

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shadowthehedgiehog03 [2009-12-17 20:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow! That's amazing!

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GLaDOS-Woody [2009-12-17 20:43:47 +0000 UTC]

Awww thats really cute! The tail wagging is adorable!

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ColourPaw [2009-12-17 20:42:54 +0000 UTC]

That rabbit has a lot of kids. >:U

Very cute. And strange. But that makes it better.

Also, great job on the tail animation. :3

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Bestie-Boo [2009-12-17 20:39:55 +0000 UTC]

KOOL^^ do you mind me asking what animation program you use?

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Sophie-The-Skunk In reply to Bestie-Boo [2009-12-17 21:06:53 +0000 UTC]

This was Flash but I can only use Flash at school

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Bestie-Boo In reply to Sophie-The-Skunk [2009-12-17 21:07:42 +0000 UTC]

oohhh... i see.... koool^^

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