Optipus [2016-06-16 03:40:59 +0000 UTC]
I really like this picture!
However...
Critiques:
- I would like a bit more detail on the face. The face can tell emotion and is usually what most people look at. A lil more detail would add a nice touch (also the head is a bit big).
- You may want to add a more distinct light source.
- Also, a bit more detail on the suit, as it's the main focus
Things I loved:
- The atmosphere is absolutely PERFECT! The quiet glow of small galaxies around her, the simple reflection of water. It really is a nice touch for her to be in a dark, eerily calm place. I love it!
- Her position is on point. It's calm, it's graceful, elegant, and she looks happy.
MY FAVORITE THING:
- This drawing has so much personality. I can look at it and know exactly what emotion and feel you're going for. She looks calm, sad, but happy all at once. Like she's in a place that's so... peaceful.
IT'S...
IT'S...
Excellent!
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SoraSamaSeme In reply to Optipus [2016-06-28 19:18:20 +0000 UTC]
omg, first of all you are so damn sweet, thank you so much for taking your time and leaving this comment, it really makes me so happy <33! i totally agree with you, I spend to much time drawing the outlines that I rushed a lot of things here. Originally I planned to make her have a different pose and have her in a different setting, but I couldn't do it in the end and tried to make her umm "dance" like she did in her room, in the beginning of the show. But in space. Thank you so much again, I really need to work on anatomy tho haha uwu!
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