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Published: 2005-10-31 09:22:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 374; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 10
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Dejected thoughts of abstract moments,Thoughts a clutter,
Intricies of minds emotion,
Mass of inner pyche,
Though mass of mind,
with thoughts a clutter,
Narrow is the path we seek to find,
Willingness is never enough....
Enough is enough,
It's never enough,
Tomorrow I'll sleep,
Tomorrow I'll weep,
Tomorrow is never enough.
I live I breath,
I glare I seeth,
My anger is never enough.
Resentment and hurt seeps through,
I want so much, I guess it's too much,
Love is never enough.
Nothing adds up,
It all contradicts,
Who can I trust?
I guess belief just isn't enough.
It hurts,
But I can't put it into words
Is it all in my head?
Then why is my heart tearing under pressure?
I guess my understanding just isn't enough.
Persistantly competing.
Prize of consideration,
Assumingly easy?
Patience is never enough
Shooting sensation through my heart,
It's surely not just a saying,
Break my heart - go on,
My strength is never enough.
I am a monster,
Or so I'm told,
I just just want understanding,
I just want consideration,
I am never enough...
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Comments: 3
That was really touching and is definitely something that can be easily related to if you've been in a long relationship. Even though things start out happy and peachy, it's very easy for feelings of dissatisfaction and resentment to build up over time. Especially if adequate communication isn't maintained and your expectations for each other aren't kept in check.
Anyway, thank you for writing this poem. It has given me some food for thought.
PS You should definitely write more poems.
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hey hey Kerri, it's been a little while hey. That's awesome, and I can totally relate to that myself. It's pretty easy to feel self doubt creeping in, and low self worth telling you nothing you do will ever satify. I guess in the context of relationships it's especially true, and it's easy to feel like you need someone a lot more than they need you, thus after a while, everything you do seems to be worthless in their eyes, and you keep on going hoping that they might be satified with you, the way that you are.
...Or maybe, I'm just rambling and it's getting late.
Catchya round
-Andrew
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Thankyou so much. Your comment means alot!
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