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Ipundertale [2016-04-15 16:47:17 +0000 UTC]
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Frisk stood still, wearing her usual blank expresion. She bearly seemed to notice the enraged skelleton standing before them, nor did she notice the question being asked of them. She just stood there, sielent... "ANSWER ME!" papyrus shouted, more enraged than before. Frisk couldent help but shake violently, as her orange cheeks grew a deep red-pink color. She could feel her heart snaping in two. Her face grew hot. Moisture seeped from her closed eyes as she collapsed onto the golden floors of the last coridor. The kife sliped out of frisks palms as she clutched her stomach with her dust covered arms. Papyrus stared at frisk, confused. Why was she acting like this? Was she scared? Did frisk feel regret? Both? Papyrus couldent tell. He dident know what to do. He wanted to hurt her. He wanted to make her suffer for what she did. Somthing Papyrus had never felt before. Papyrus stared, and frisk whaled. This continued on for several minutes. That was to much for Frisk to handle. She was losing control of herself. She could feel her mind sliping away as chara slowly took control. No. She wouldent allow this to happen. Not again. She crawled to her knees, still not making eye contact with papyrus. She reached out her arm to grab the knife she had used to kill everyone in sight. Papyrus pulled out a gaster blaster, expecting the human to try and attack him again. Still on her knees, Frisk clutched the knife in her hand, raising it above her head. Frisk wasted no more time, sending the knife straight through her head. Papyrus frooze. He peered at the dieing child before him, and could swear her saw her... smile at him.
GAME OVER
You cannot give up just yet!
CHARA! Stey determined!
CONTINUE
>RESET
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Lovli323 In reply to Ipundertale [2016-08-22 00:03:59 +0000 UTC]
Do u make fanfics? If not you should.
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SoruMegane13 In reply to MechanicOrga [2015-11-29 15:59:05 +0000 UTC]
I realized! But the moment I did it was already posted x"D! Imagine how bad I flipped because of that one incorrect grammar there! I'll be sure to repost if I have time! But for now my wifi's going to kaputs in a few minutes xD. Aside that I would like to say thank you for both the compliment and the critic! OuO
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SoruMegane13 In reply to MechanicOrga [2015-11-29 18:25:44 +0000 UTC]
... pffft backbone. No really I'm sorry! I remembered when Papyrus tried to do puns!! X"D!! And yeah Criticism sometimes may be harsh and cruel but there will never be improvements if you keep getting praises for being perfect all the time. A valuable lesson my mother taught me when she taught me art! Take the good ignore the bad! The benefits from it will is for you to keep
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