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Serinji [2014-02-09 04:20:01 +0000 UTC]
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Wow! You've Ichigo sure is handsome and you didn't do a bad job on this! However, I do see some room for improvements. You need to work on the the eyes and and mouth, no offense, but the eyes look lopsided and uneven. While one is suppose to be bigger than the other, the case is backwards on this drawing and the bigger eye is on the wrong side. The smile is kind of creeping me out as well, I'm not sure why really, but it just does. His smile should be a bit wider, it'll look more like a genuine smile then. If you were doing a smirk, then I would suggest not showing the teeth. And the shading, I have to admit, you've improved alot with the skin shading and the shading of the clothing! But as for the hair, you still need practice, I'm not sure if it's the texture or the shine, but something is off. Other than that, this pic is great and you did good and with a little more practice you'll be even better!
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Serinji In reply to Soul-Helper [2014-02-09 10:41:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you're very welcome!
And I feel yeah. redoing the eyes can be tricky and it's something I always do. But I'm a perfectionist lol! As for the smirk-smile, you really should go for the mouth closed, the smile you got right now would've worked better if his head was tilted looking downwards.
Yeah, the clothes were great! And as for the hair, you were great with his dark shadows, those were perfect! But when it came to the light shadows or the hair shine, I really think you should look up some anime pictures. It's not that hard though, most people just swipe a curve into the hair, others add their own personal touches of how they portray light. Either way,it does help alot.
And again, you're welcome! Good luck on improving and I hope I was a big help!
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Soul-Helper In reply to Serinji [2014-02-11 18:39:45 +0000 UTC]
TRUE ! Improvement comes with critics, it's normal.
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L-MASTER [2014-02-04 05:24:46 +0000 UTC]
cool
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Espada-Kitsuki [2014-02-04 01:27:14 +0000 UTC]
I remember seeing this on your livestream! It was from that long ago? O.O
Ichigo needs to keep his dangai hair. He looked so mature with it... a lot handsomer, too.
But with his short hair, he's plain adorable. .w.
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Soul-Helper In reply to Espada-Kitsuki [2014-02-04 11:20:53 +0000 UTC]
Yes it was o: !!
I know riiiight
With longer hair he was just so incredibly good looking :'D yet with hair like he has now, he's so fckin handsome too..
Ichigo is really THE Man.
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Espada-Kitsuki In reply to Soul-Helper [2014-02-06 05:16:48 +0000 UTC]
Ichigo's just sexy all around.
... Although I have to say as much for my Aizen-dono.
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Sorosoro [2014-02-03 23:49:01 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome. And for your Hair joke I hereby give you the CSI Glasses!
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Soul-Helper In reply to Sorosoro [2014-02-04 11:21:42 +0000 UTC]
Owyeah thaaaaanks !!
You inspired me with yours hahaha
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Sorosoro In reply to Soul-Helper [2014-02-04 14:50:19 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.
It was my honour.
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