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soulmammapolo — House of Crimson Corpses

Published: 2006-07-31 05:45:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 222; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description My hands are stained red--
This has gone too far--
I can't control myself--
          They should have listened...
          It's not your fault you blacked out...
But they did listen--
          They listened with fear...
          They never understood you...
          Not like me...
But--
Why is there crimson?
Everywhere?
What happened?
          They should have listened...
          It's not your fault...
I can't control myself--
I have to tell someone--
          No! You'll be in deeper...
          You have to end it now...
But I can't anymore--
          Now YOU aren't listening...
Ok--
I'll make it stop--
Everything is stained red now--
Because no one would listen--
And I couldn't control myself--
         That's right...
         But they listened to you now...
         This House of Crimson Corpses...
They'll never forget this message--
Now written on this crimson tiled floor--
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Comments: 29

killer-mind7 [2008-10-21 02:14:28 +0000 UTC]

wicked.......

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soulmammapolo In reply to killer-mind7 [2008-10-25 00:14:51 +0000 UTC]

oh wow....i havent gotten a comment on anything in a while..thanks! you like that one you should check out my other ones i have on here...but thanks!
--Hettie G.

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killer-mind7 In reply to soulmammapolo [2008-10-26 21:04:00 +0000 UTC]

ooooo! must..... check out..... ^_^

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soulmammapolo In reply to killer-mind7 [2008-10-27 21:20:55 +0000 UTC]

i hope you do! i really hope so!
--Hettie G.

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killer-mind7 In reply to soulmammapolo [2008-10-27 21:25:49 +0000 UTC]

and thanks for replying to that coz i lost your link. XD

~~killer-mind7~~
( lol i stole your idea)

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soulmammapolo In reply to killer-mind7 [2008-11-02 02:46:36 +0000 UTC]

ah...lol..it's gotten to be a habit for me...(the --Hettie G. thing right? i hope....lol)

i signed it ever since i got married and became a 'G'...lol..i was a 'W' and hated it...hehehehe...
--Hettie G.

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killer-mind7 In reply to soulmammapolo [2008-11-04 02:38:29 +0000 UTC]

fair enough.... lol

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vintagelaughter [2006-08-04 04:14:07 +0000 UTC]

awesome work darling.
and you found inspiration just out of a name.. crazy, but amazing.

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soulmammapolo In reply to vintagelaughter [2006-08-04 05:13:55 +0000 UTC]

lol...thanks!!!

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gia64 [2006-08-01 20:53:56 +0000 UTC]

I really like so much your works! Thank you!!!!!!!!

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soulmammapolo In reply to gia64 [2006-08-02 04:55:25 +0000 UTC]

no no no...thank you!

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gia64 In reply to soulmammapolo [2006-08-02 09:55:04 +0000 UTC]

he he he ok!!!

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before-life [2006-07-31 17:53:57 +0000 UTC]

brilliant you realy got the emotion i felt like i was there ..wow... awsome! i it ! its realy great... got goose bumps! haha
mwa...

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soulmammapolo In reply to before-life [2006-07-31 19:35:55 +0000 UTC]

^^ thank you!!!

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ShadowWolf3117 [2006-07-31 14:39:52 +0000 UTC]

AAIIIIIIEEE!!!!!!!

Awesome, yet very scary.

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soulmammapolo In reply to ShadowWolf3117 [2006-07-31 17:11:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you...

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SpatterArtist [2006-07-31 13:57:43 +0000 UTC]

Ahh....I love this!

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soulmammapolo In reply to SpatterArtist [2006-07-31 17:09:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!! and thanks for the fave btw

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SpatterArtist In reply to soulmammapolo [2006-07-31 19:01:50 +0000 UTC]

No problem, I really love how this turned out...and I'm surprised you used a simple name as your inspiration.

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soulmammapolo In reply to SpatterArtist [2006-07-31 19:40:47 +0000 UTC]

lol...me too...i saw one of their deviations on the home page, it was literature, so i clicked on it and i noted their name...and so...i was like...o_o...i brought up word pad in 2 seconds...lol...then brain stormed...haha...i wrote down phrases...like if you try t sing a song in your head and then type the words while you sing then you skip a WHOLE lot of stuff...haha...thats what i did...plus i was doing like...4000 things...im glad you like it! and i am so gald at how it turned out...haha...i liked how ihave it set up too...but yay!! thank you!!

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SpatterArtist In reply to soulmammapolo [2006-07-31 19:42:05 +0000 UTC]

That's awesome, no problem.

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soulmammapolo In reply to SpatterArtist [2006-07-31 19:46:53 +0000 UTC]

D D D

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soulmammapolo In reply to soulmammapolo [2006-07-31 19:47:09 +0000 UTC]

x5

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SpatterArtist In reply to soulmammapolo [2006-07-31 19:51:05 +0000 UTC]

Heheh

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soulmammapolo In reply to SpatterArtist [2006-07-31 19:58:02 +0000 UTC]

well...i forgot the damn spaces...lol...

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SpatterArtist In reply to soulmammapolo [2006-07-31 20:02:52 +0000 UTC]

No big deal, it was kind of funny.

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soulmammapolo In reply to SpatterArtist [2006-07-31 20:05:33 +0000 UTC]

lol...

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Seage [2006-07-31 05:48:05 +0000 UTC]

ok...scary....very scary...
still good tho! lol

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soulmammapolo In reply to Seage [2006-07-31 06:00:16 +0000 UTC]

haha...thanks!! ^^

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