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SouLXposed — All I want
Published: 2008-01-17 22:02:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 126; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description What do I feel?
I really don't know.
My heart still is pounding,
My face is all red,
My stomach is hurting,
I just curl up in my bed.
There's pain filling in my eyes,
Dripping slowly down my face,
I don't know what to say,
It's just a mistake.
I try to avoid it,
But I'm too easily moved.
My heart isn't ready,
For what I'm going through.
Love is just too much,
For me to handle now.
I'm not sure how it happened,
Because I never saw it coming.
Everyone else seemed to know,
But I didn't know this could happen,
If I forgot to shield my heart.
I'm too easily taken,
Because I get attatched so fast.
I love until it's too late,
The harm will already be done.
I don't know how to chose,
Or make the right descision,
All I know is my heart,
Which still is so confusing.
How can something like this,
Turn into so much more?
I'm not sure what to do,
But all I want is you.
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Comments: 7

W8ing-4-Him-2-Lov-Me [2008-01-20 02:28:12 +0000 UTC]

I love this. I know exactly what that feeling is like. And I also know that it's the most painful thing in the world.

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SouLXposed In reply to W8ing-4-Him-2-Lov-Me [2008-01-20 03:32:13 +0000 UTC]

It really is.. I've been very confused lately and I've gotten a lot of it out in writting... To bad it doesn't completely take the feelings away..

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W8ing-4-Him-2-Lov-Me In reply to SouLXposed [2008-01-20 04:09:48 +0000 UTC]

Don't you wish that with every word you write, the pain diminishes a little? Like the ink leaving the pen, you want your feelings to spill from your body onto the paper. Your tears no longer falling. Your head no longer spinning. Your heart no longer aching.

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SouLXposed In reply to W8ing-4-Him-2-Lov-Me [2008-01-20 04:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Well said.. Sometimes it's aleviated it somewhat.. Especially love ones or ones about my dad, but the feeling's still strong..

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InkSpirit [2008-01-17 22:21:34 +0000 UTC]

yeah. honetsly, your poetry is really good! I love how you wrote it!

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SouLXposed In reply to InkSpirit [2008-01-17 22:47:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you soo much!
I just wrote this...A little emotional... lol
And I am soooo MAD!! I was just writting, this REALLY good poem, in my opinion, and the internet stopped. I lost my poem!!! Well, I've got the idea, so I'll try and rewrite it...

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InkSpirit In reply to SouLXposed [2008-01-17 23:07:49 +0000 UTC]

it was lovely and deserved a
lol...just a little Good luck writing again~

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