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Published: 2011-06-11 18:24:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 150; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Let's blow an arteryEat plastic surgery
Cut my hair
Gag and bore me
Keep your apology
You run the company
And right here
Right now
I think we'd rather be
Burning your information
Make no apology
It's death or victory
On my authority
Pull this pin
Let this world explode...
Wanna try, wanna try, wanna try
Wanna try, wanna try, now!
Everybody wants to change the world
But no one,
No one wants to die
To every enemy
We're on your property
I'd rather go to hell
All the way in Battery City
The little children
Raise their open filthy palms
Like tiny daggers up to heaven
Love, gimme love, gimme love
I don't need it, but I'll take what I want from your heart
Gimme more, gimme more, gimme more
Shut up and sing it with me
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Comments: 17
I am not use what to say of this... I'm sorry to say I cannot allow this to be in Live-Write-Now. It may seem harsh, but this seems like plagiarism, using someone else's words to make poetry of your own. I fell it is unfair to post it and basically call it your own...
So, sorry, this is not allowed. And this will be a warning to you, please don't submit any more works that are copying a band.
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Okay..I'm sorry for wasting your time.
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No no, you're not wasting my time. It's a creative concept you have, but I'm afraid it goes against the rules I placed for the group. :/
I enjoyed reading it.
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oh okay, you really set me on edge there for a moment. Sorry I did not mean to go against your rules, being a founder myself I get that. I'll check next time hon, before I chose to submit. Oh and have a good time away, I got the journal. I would love to help, but i'm not sure I can manage three groups at once. If you ever need something i'll gladly step forward. But I can't this time
And thanks for reading.....glad you enjoyed it XD
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It's okay. You must be busy with your own groups, so you're not required to do anything. any help is appreciated, but not required.
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Thanks...I am. But if I can find time I will do what I can. How does that sound?
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Awesome....I'll talk to the co-founders and see if they need help later
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Wow... was this influenced by My Chemical Romance? This is just like that one song with them in the desert....
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yes it was
I call these my song poems. I only use MCR or 30 STM lyrics to make them. I'm glad you enjoyed it
I've made a bunch more too
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hehehe thank you!!
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No problem. I wanted to make some but school and my other writing pushed them back. But now i'm doing a balancing act with everything...so expect more song poems
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Yaay! i love your stories too! Dont forgt!
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Oh hon..I couldn't forget my storys..I'm writing three different ones at the same time. It consumes a lot of my time but it's worth it 'cause many people enjoy reading them and I like to see you guys happy
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WhOO!
So modest, arnt you? 
But do you enjoy writing, even though they comsume your precious time? 
Thanks!
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Well i'm very happy that you're happy that I write XD
I do enjoy writing, very much so. BUt sometimes it drives me up the wall XD That's mostly when I can't think of a plot or how to right the next chapter or part
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