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God5877 [2015-01-10 23:34:22 +0000 UTC]

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For a start, the lighting used on the pony is very fair and balanced. The hair and tail kinda blend with the light shining on it, and it gives it a really cool colour on parts. The fur colour is fantastic, it makes me think he is more of a human than a pony, with the shade, and the beard. The only thing I dislike with this is that the beard isn't big enough, but that is probable the design anyway, and the belly button looks a bit weird to me personally. The hoodie, we can't really see the hood, so I'd say you could change that if you go over it again, maybe have it hanging down at the back.

Overall I'd say this is a brilliant piece of art, but really to me the belly button could be drawn differently, keep on doing what you do.

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NavelColt [2015-01-03 10:16:55 +0000 UTC]

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Hey dude e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> You mentioned you were looking for critique, so I figure I'll give it a shot myself. I really should get back into doing more critiquing, anyway.

e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="210" title="Bullet; Red"/> Looking back on it from earlier, I do find the tip highlights in his hair to be a little too on the orange side for my liking, at least in the one or two front portions. Looks borderline inserted hair highlight as opposed to being lighting.

e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="210" title="Bullet; Red"/> Since the goal was to have his hoodie being slightly ridden up as to show his belly button, I think it might have been beneficial to have drawn the lower portion of his hoodie scrunched up a bit. As it is, the hoodie goes upwards on the right side but has no visible build-up/scrunches, so it looks a little off when you focus on it.

This relatively minor feedback aside, compared to the sketch you showed me months back, the dynamic pose, expression and even the basic anatomy are all far superior across the board, here. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> You even vectored and inserted the cutie mark really well. Belly button stallion has not looked so well-drawn and cute for a while, and you have rectified this, truly. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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flakyfan19 [2015-01-10 18:05:17 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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eramthgin-1027501 [2015-01-03 13:59:29 +0000 UTC]

Could i get a commission? I got the points for it.

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H-StallionWolf [2015-01-03 12:06:57 +0000 UTC]

omg, this is so cute and awesome XD

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VazquezG19 [2015-01-03 10:48:06 +0000 UTC]

Aww, he's so cute! Great job!

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ShinodaGE [2015-01-03 04:44:01 +0000 UTC]

Cute :3

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NavelColt [2015-01-03 03:59:01 +0000 UTC]

It turned out soooooo adorabwy :3333 Thanks man. We gotta talk more often from now on as well

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TJ0001 [2015-01-03 03:49:46 +0000 UTC]

That's a really belly buttontastic picture you got there heat :3.

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