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SourTomato In reply to ??? [2018-02-20 17:21:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! have you read the next part, it explains more about Oliver ^^
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JustADeaviant [2016-05-22 21:40:51 +0000 UTC]
...
HES A COUNTRY FROM ANOTHER UNIVERSEEE
DUNDUNDUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNN
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JustADeaviant In reply to SourTomato [2016-05-22 22:29:55 +0000 UTC]
OH RIGHT
NOW IM READING THE REST..
SENPAI... FORGIVE MA PAST SELF AND TAKE THIS CUPCAKE
HUEHUEHUE
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SourTomato In reply to JustADeaviant [2016-05-23 01:33:15 +0000 UTC]
Ha ha, thank you for calling me Senpai ^^
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CanadianDoritos [2016-02-08 00:56:03 +0000 UTC]
What the fuck was going on there
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SourTomato In reply to CanadianDoritos [2016-02-08 01:05:18 +0000 UTC]
Theres more of an explanation in the next chapter XD
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YetNeverAlone [2015-02-03 06:01:41 +0000 UTC]
This is really good I hope you continue this series
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SourTomato In reply to YetNeverAlone [2015-02-03 13:20:39 +0000 UTC]
I did ^^ Theres a link to the next chapter in the description!
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MythicIceWolf [2014-11-23 16:25:20 +0000 UTC]
This was amazing! Well created and built up! I like the pictures drawn, not only were they very well drawn, but they also gave the reader a better pictures of the story! Amazing!
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SourTomato In reply to MythicIceWolf [2014-11-23 19:28:12 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thank you very much ^^ That means a lot to me! Did you read the next chapter on this?
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MythicIceWolf In reply to SourTomato [2014-11-23 19:32:54 +0000 UTC]
Yes and 2P Italy's! (Well, in the process of reading it anyway XD)
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TheNightWarrior [2014-09-23 02:32:07 +0000 UTC]
I like it, you should continue this~
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SourTomato In reply to TheNightWarrior [2014-09-23 11:54:28 +0000 UTC]
I did! ^^ Look in the description there's chapter two ^^
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RedHeadFred2000 [2014-05-09 02:13:34 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE IT!!! I thought she had exaggerated on it, but no way!!! (Anti-CosmoFangirl by the way) It is so amazing!!!
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5British1Kitty5 [2014-04-26 03:18:46 +0000 UTC]
HOLLY SHIT HE IS A MONSTER! Let it be knowned that I am now officialy scared and disturbed! o~o" -hides under the blanket-
But I will continue reading ^^
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BloodLily16 [2014-04-22 23:18:13 +0000 UTC]
Yeep. O.O
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AspenIsDead [2014-03-25 22:09:07 +0000 UTC]
all through the story i was just like "I DON'T WANNA BE HERE ANY MORE" hahaha great story my friend ^-^
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SourTomato In reply to AspenIsDead [2014-03-25 22:42:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! Gave ya the creepy crawlies did I?
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KairiStar728 [2013-11-17 03:22:21 +0000 UTC]
Ooooooooooooooooooo~~~~~~ I love it!!!!! X{D Just watch the typos. I know I have a few that I need to go back and fix but... I don't know where they are! ^^"
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SourTomato In reply to KairiStar728 [2013-11-17 03:33:01 +0000 UTC]
Oh! where are my mistakes? I never noticed them before, and I've re-read this often. where are they so I may fix them?
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KairiStar728 In reply to SourTomato [2013-11-17 04:50:05 +0000 UTC]
Okay. quite commonly you confuse "afterwards" with afterwords. see the difference? And it's little things from that point out. Just re-read it very very carefully, like you didn't write them to begin with and they should be easier to notice... Or I hope they do... because that works for me... yeah...
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SourTomato In reply to KairiStar728 [2013-11-17 04:56:46 +0000 UTC]
OOOOOOooooohhhhhh, to be honest, I wouldn't have every guessed that one. my proof reader is on a mission in NY right now...
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KairiStar728 In reply to SourTomato [2013-11-17 05:04:30 +0000 UTC]
lol It's okay. i tend to go back and reread what I post to be my own proof reader. ^^" I don't exactly have at the moment so...
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SourTomato In reply to KairiStar728 [2013-11-17 05:07:22 +0000 UTC]
I re-read all the time cause I love it~
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KairiStar728 In reply to SourTomato [2013-11-18 03:15:18 +0000 UTC]
Right? Plus, re-reading your own stuff is fun too! X{D
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SourTomato In reply to SupremeAnimeNinja [2013-08-16 18:03:33 +0000 UTC]
what, you can't believe you know someone who can write stories that awesome?
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SourTomato In reply to SupremeAnimeNinja [2013-08-16 20:53:20 +0000 UTC]
I thought the same thing about you when I saw all of your new stuff you post~
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