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Published: 2012-01-29 17:49:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 2029; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 7
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Description Chivalry
An Adventures of Tintin Fanfic by SouthernImagineer
(A Modern Retelling)
Prologue.

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"I want you to leave."

"What?"

"Go back to Belgium. To your life. Save your job. Go back to writing articles on crime lords and drug cartels and—"

"Annalise."

"What?"

"I'm not leaving."

"And why is that? You don't—"

"I saw the note, Anna. I saw what it said. I saw the threat they left you. And because of it, I'm even more resolved to stay here than before. I will uncover the murderer's identity, whether you like it or not."

"Tin…"

"They could kill you, Anna. I won't let that happen. You read the note. The only thing standing between you and the barrel of a gun is me, and it's going to stay like that. I'm not moving. I'm not leaving."

"… Tin… "

"You saw what they did to Noah."

"… Don't bring him up."

"You saw the blood. It was all over the bed."

"Tin, I'm serious. Please stop."

"He was tortured, Anna. Tortured. That can't happen to you. I won't let it. I did not come all this way to give up, to let my client throw in the towel. I did not come all this way to see you killed like he was. That was never part of our agreement."

"And what was? To have you slaughtered instead? You've already been shot in the leg for me, Tintin. You've traveled across America for me. Our agreement was to find my fiancé, to rescue him from whatever mayhem he'd gotten himself into. And guess what? We found him. We found him in my hotel room, bloodied and dead as a doornail. Isn't that enough for a story? Isn't that enough to satisfy your loyal fans?"

"My fans are not what's important, Anna. Bringing the murderer to justice is what matters. Uncovering the truth behind your fiancé's death is what matters. And now that they're going after you, you expect me to just walk away? What kind of a person do you take me for, Annalise?"

"You're a journalist, an objective writer, a man that has never been candid with his emotions until now. You've given me no reason to take you as anything but impartial, Tintin. What if this sudden dedication to my case is all a ploy?"

"You can't credit me with a bit of chivalry?"

"Chivalry is dead, Tintin. It's been that way for a long time. It's not a valid excuse."

"What, then, do you want me to say? If I begin broadcasting how I really feel, you'll accuse my emotions of being synthetic."

"Has it ever occurred to you that maybe I just don't want you here in the first place?"

"A false declaration to try and make me leave."

"What makes you think that?"

"You told Captain Haddock. You told him you had feelings for me. I'm not a fool, Annalise. We've spent an entire month together on this. You don't actually want me gone. You just don't want to see me hurt."

"… Tintin, I want you to leave."

"No, you don't."

"Yes, I do. I want you out of here, Tintin. I want you back in Belgium. I want you back to your job. I want you as far away from me as possible. Do you understand?"

"You're making a mistake, Anna."

"Am I now? Is this really the mistake I made? Or maybe it was a mistake to have even asked for your help in the first place."

"…"

"What?"

"You don't mean that."

"I do. Noah is dead. The other company took over his job. They won. There was no point in our efforts, Tintin. Nothing changed. I shouldn't have taken up your time with this."

"Don't say that."

"We didn't even make a dent in their plans. It was useless. Tintin, you need to go home. It's over."

"It's not—"

"It's over, Tintin. Go home."
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Comments: 27

Twilinden [2012-02-06 03:04:32 +0000 UTC]

*looks at the awsome story,
looks at own,
back to yours,
back to mine,
then back to yours....
Sadly mine isn't like that....*

*Rips it*

*Sigh*

Oh well...I was jelouse of Penelope anyways...!
OMG WANNA HEAR HOW I GOT INTO TINTIN?
It's stupid and has something to do with writng...

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SouthernImagineer In reply to Twilinden [2012-02-06 03:07:12 +0000 UTC]

Well thanks, but you shouldn't rip up your story!

And sure!

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Twilinden In reply to SouthernImagineer [2012-02-06 03:20:06 +0000 UTC]

WELL....
IT ALL STARTED......


*Twill is chilling
in chibi form in English class*

Teacher: OH GUYS! GUESS WHAT MOVIE
IS COMING OUT? \(^0^)/
Twillh! I know that's the new movie...!
I saw the commercials...! It sounds good!
Teacher:Titin of course!Oh I used to reas him back in Germany
and it was my childhood!
Twill: Is her awsome?^-^
Teacher: Ther awsomest! He's atheltic stron and smart
and amazing!
Twill: I bet his girlfriend is
so happy! I saw he's cute too!
Teacher: O.o....
Twill: Wha...?
Teacher: *BRUST INTO LAUGHTER*
Twill: What so funny?^-^
Teacher: HE HAS NO GIRLFRIEND!
I'T BE WIERD IF HER DID!
Twill: But every one needs
love in their life!
Teacher:Says the single lady...
Twill: *Damsel gasp* I love romance!
You know that~!
Teacher: Yeah...But Tintin has none
and won't get one...
*FIVE HOURS OF CURSING,
SCREAMING, FIGHTING, GLUES STICKS
AND ICE CREAM LATER*
Teacher: ALL RIGHT, my star witer
pupil...
Twill: STORYTELLER! S-T-O...
O...STORYTERLLER!
Teacher:Uh huh...YOU WILL WATCH THE MOVIE.
AND IF TINTIN FALLS IN LOVE, LOOKS, OR EVEN GIVE
INTREST IN A GIRL FOR 5 MEASLY SECONDS
YOU WIN...BUT IF HE DOESN'T...
YOU MUST WRITE AND UNCHESSY,
ADVERNTOURS AND GOOD
STORY THAT CAPTURES
MY ATTENTION, AND IF
YOU MEET MY STANDARDS
YOU GET THE PRIZE OF A LIFETIME...
Twill: Deal...!
Teacher:And since you don't write
adventour, this will help expand
your horizon!
*After the movie*
HE DIDN'T EVEN TALK
TO A GIRL!
(I don't count Ms. Finch as one...)
So I did research cause I didn't want to be like an apple that
just feel from the tree and
knows everything about the ground right there...
AND I FEEL IN
LOVE WITH TINTIN MYSELF...!
The prize ended up
being unlimited accsess
to her snack cabbinate and a test grade...^-^

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SouthernImagineer In reply to Twilinden [2012-02-06 03:23:32 +0000 UTC]

That's an epic, beautiful tale. I'm so glad you told me! And yes, Tintin has enough girls on his plate at the moment, what with all us new fans

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Twilinden In reply to SouthernImagineer [2012-02-06 03:29:31 +0000 UTC]

Had to throw that one in too...
Thanks...!
Well my story,
if you don't mind...
Was about a girl artist namded Peneople
who escaped America and her family
to avoid "Ladies Place" and Sexistism...(?)
and came to Europe.
She became known as an artist
and Tintin interviewed the famous artist.
Alot of other stuff happens,
but I'm a Storyteller, not a writer...
but a goon
is after her beacause only she can paint
the picture of the location of
a speacial place with disering fruit...
and I hate chessyness...
SO MUCH....
You know like when your watching a
t.v show and a "gamer girl"
says "LET'S ROCK THIS THING, NERDS!"
....Omg...can you relate?

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SouthernImagineer In reply to Twilinden [2012-02-06 03:33:06 +0000 UTC]

Haha I like your idea! Very creative! And yes, I can relate!

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Twilinden In reply to SouthernImagineer [2012-02-06 03:35:02 +0000 UTC]

YAY!
Oh, your a cool
person!
Wanna be friends on Facebook?^-^
I'm Twill Thurston!

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SouthernImagineer In reply to Twilinden [2012-02-06 03:35:43 +0000 UTC]

haha actually, I don't give out my private information to people... Sorry! Just something I do

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Twilinden In reply to SouthernImagineer [2012-02-06 03:37:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh, Sorry...Completely understand...~!
*Feels guilty*
I really like the story!

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SouthernImagineer In reply to Twilinden [2012-02-06 03:39:57 +0000 UTC]

Haha well thanks I'm glad you do! It's hard, competing with all of the awesome fics out there...

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Twilinden In reply to SouthernImagineer [2012-02-06 03:41:30 +0000 UTC]

I know. Right?
Your like
"I can't make it!"
But then Tintin
comes and smiles and say
"Go for it~!"
Or at least in my mind...>.<

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SouthernImagineer In reply to Twilinden [2012-02-06 20:09:35 +0000 UTC]

Exactly! Well, his character is really the whole reason I'm writing

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HylianGirlYami [2012-02-01 20:55:24 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaha so after seeing your Modern Tintin, I decided to poke about a bit
The first things I see is this lovely writing and my brain explodes as I scream
"OHMYGOSH IT'S YOU!"
Funny how dA works, aye?
Marvelous job on this, all the same

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SouthernImagineer In reply to HylianGirlYami [2012-02-01 21:03:06 +0000 UTC]

Haha why thank you! And it's amazing what you can find when you poke around

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HylianGirlYami In reply to SouthernImagineer [2012-02-01 21:07:59 +0000 UTC]

*poke poke*
Seriously!

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SouthernImagineer In reply to HylianGirlYami [2012-02-01 21:11:18 +0000 UTC]

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cherry12 [2012-01-31 02:50:08 +0000 UTC]

OMG hurry up with chapter one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...i loved it

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SouthernImagineer In reply to cherry12 [2012-01-31 02:57:06 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks! Chapter one is almost done!

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Stara-Aquila [2012-01-31 02:36:08 +0000 UTC]

There's something really grabbing about this story. I really, really want more please!

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SouthernImagineer In reply to Stara-Aquila [2012-01-31 02:46:34 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you! I'm glad you like it!

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inTAResting [2012-01-29 23:22:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm not usually a fan of made up characters cause they are boring and the stories are always... too... too... I don't know... there's just something about them.
But dang this is good!! You, my friend, are a great writer!!
I like how you used all dialogue for this C:

YAYAAA this is cool!

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SouthernImagineer In reply to inTAResting [2012-01-29 23:30:20 +0000 UTC]


Thank you!!! That's so wonderful to hear, that so far it's not 'boring.' Augh, I feel like weight has been lifted off my shoulders Hopefully the rest of the story is as appealing to you as the prologue!

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inTAResting In reply to SouthernImagineer [2012-01-30 03:42:49 +0000 UTC]

No problem, you really have a great style of writing! Keep it up, I'd like to read what you do with it. You're great with the drama XDD

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SouthernImagineer In reply to inTAResting [2012-01-30 22:23:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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PandaKiwiVic [2012-01-29 17:54:50 +0000 UTC]

wow! im hooked in already! really nice!

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SouthernImagineer In reply to PandaKiwiVic [2012-01-29 17:55:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It means a lot!

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PandaKiwiVic In reply to SouthernImagineer [2012-01-29 17:56:14 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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