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ronmarz1 [2017-07-02 20:05:56 +0000 UTC]
Nice story.
I believe the proper nickname for Jane's Smith as American Hero is American Reaper or American Slayer. After such brutal slaughter that she did to those poor Russians soldiers. Which, who knows how many of them had families.
Besides, John Smith's fate was well deserved it for all the atrocities he did. Because, her father not only invaded in a foreign country and killed inhumanly so many innocent lives but attempted to assassinate their leader, resulting in the 3rd World War.
PS: I simply wonder. I never seen a confrontation between American Hero and Ultrawoman. Ιf Jane Smith met and fought Ultrawoman who would won?
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to ronmarz1 [2017-07-03 14:01:22 +0000 UTC]
No Ultrawoman never fought Jane but I imagine Ultrawoman would win given her Velorian strength and invulnerability.
Jane has been trying her best to repent for her bloody past, with mixed results at times. Still, she's a great deal less bloodthirsty and revenge-driven since she made peace with her father's suicide.
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CE-Rap [2013-03-15 21:54:13 +0000 UTC]
From the comments it seems she's a major player in later stories. I look forward to the confrontation with Olga---and...oooh, I'll be up to that part soon it seems.
Solid costume. Very solid design. Only thing is, are the glowing parts supposed to be green? Shouldn't that be the "white" that is described as part of her uniform in the text?
I know the fluid pumped into her was green, so maybe that's what that is?
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to CE-Rap [2013-03-16 03:24:21 +0000 UTC]
They are white, I think the lighting the artist used is giving them a greenish hue.
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nekolab [2011-08-08 22:34:49 +0000 UTC]
Yeah amazing character design!!!
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nekolab In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2011-08-09 04:00:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah...ty buddy! And too for the Llama^^
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Skaramine [2011-05-22 18:09:01 +0000 UTC]
Behind great beauty hides insidious, ugly hatred. Man!
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Levia-the-Dragon [2011-05-21 08:10:46 +0000 UTC]
Ohhh... sadism and racism bove all else, yep, that's her... and the scary thing is, many of her supporters in AF itself wouldn't have their opinions on her changed at all if they knew about or even saw this brutality...
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darkc3po [2011-05-21 05:35:38 +0000 UTC]
you did an excellent job my friend.
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andrewr255 [2011-05-21 05:35:18 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh, the first Jane Smith flashback.
She seems to be the perfect "heroine" for the government of the US in this reality, the two are in perfect sync.
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cooltime17 [2011-05-21 04:44:22 +0000 UTC]
ouch, that's nasty.
very interesting story ^.=.^
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TwoSpaces [2011-05-21 01:16:57 +0000 UTC]
Great work there
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Knight3000 [2011-05-21 00:39:12 +0000 UTC]
Wow after reading this,I now have a better understanding of Jane.She really isn`t psychotic at all. In 1953 in her dimension she came in and retreived her dead father from a Russian lab which is completely understandable.
She wants revenge on Olga and would`ve confornted her however something else happened. Olga,Ilsa and Jane were thrown to OUR dimension.
I think the years between our dimensions kind of made Jane more confused than Olga and Ilsa but the only thing that is still in her mind is getting back at Olga. It`s what drives her now.
Thank you very much for this chapter my Dear1 it is great as always!
Cool render by thatbumzzz
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RedJoey1992 [2011-05-20 22:59:43 +0000 UTC]
impressive
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CerebralError [2011-05-20 22:19:56 +0000 UTC]
I must say, you are an amazing writer. <3
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backerman [2011-05-20 21:29:46 +0000 UTC]
awesome.
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to JamesE82 [2011-05-20 21:27:49 +0000 UTC]
Many thanks my friend! Yes that is something I really liked about this image as symbolically it was both iconic and ironic at the same time.
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vince3 [2011-05-20 21:22:19 +0000 UTC]
I take it that near that time was when Olga ended up being sent to Angel Falls? or did she not happen to get there in time?
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to vince3 [2011-05-20 21:23:46 +0000 UTC]
The alien invasion of her dimension is in 1955 so about two years off.
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vince3 In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2011-05-20 21:24:30 +0000 UTC]
So, Olga just wasn't around during Jane's raid, then?
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to vince3 [2011-05-20 21:25:39 +0000 UTC]
No, she was in Moscow helping Stalin who was still touch and go.
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vince3 In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2011-05-20 21:28:19 +0000 UTC]
Making sure that if that unknown headed his way to finish the job, she would prevent it, I imagine?
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to vince3 [2011-05-20 21:30:21 +0000 UTC]
Well in truth, no-one knew about Jane's massacre of the isolated scientific facility for several hours after the fact. Olga, seeing him as a father figure and being fiercely protective didn't want to be too far away (and yes she thought they might try again).
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