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Description She's a barbarian warrioress who won't take your shit.
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Comments: 22

Aivyr [2018-08-05 10:09:23 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


I've seen some of your previous works, and you execute lighting and shading here as well as you have in all of them! detailing is also good: I like the tattoos, as well as the jewellery and the dragon-like pattern in the background. I have yet to do shading as well as you have, especially with pencil, but hopefully I will be able to in future.

the character's expression is also well-done. you pull off the stern character well with the narrowed eyes, tight jaw and clenched fists: the eyes are particularly striking, and of course this ties back into the lighting and how that was pulled off well in its own right.

if I am to give anything in the way of critique, I think the jawline and ear could be moved slightly to the left: this way the jaw hinges onto the side of the neck, as it does, and further from the back. (that probably doesn't explain very much, so here 's a link to a better demonstration.) if you're interested, I generally use the Reilly method as an anatomy guide for the head: this Youtube video explains the method quite well, and a quick image search for "Reilly method" shows how it applies to heads at different angles and with different proportions. there are a number of others, but this is the one I've used for a while.

anyhow: anatomical nitpicking aside, this is a neat piece! hope to see more from you in future, and keep it up :]

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Spacegryphon In reply to Aivyr [2018-08-16 05:59:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch for the nice critique! Especially redlining the head was a very helpful advice!

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Shirkee [2018-08-05 16:20:31 +0000 UTC]

Hi, I'm Shirkee from and I'm amazed by your skills!


I spend a quite some time to find positive and negative things in your picture and while I can say a lot about the first, I had hardships to find the second. I love the idea of the character - strong, confident female warrior and what is more !not! in the bikini armor Those eyes are telling straight – don't try it! Similarly in the technical aspect. Your shapes, lanes, proportions, shading are very good. The only one thing I would ask you to consider is to make more contrast between light and dark. Maybe it is just mine taste, but I think it needs more darker shadows like in this pieceΒ LINK .Try to use some 6B or 7B pencils. Also I think you should work a little bit more on the background or at least blur it. I think it would look better. Here is a sample of what I have in mind LINK .You can use normal tissue for this. In the other hand you can keep the background white like here LINK or hereΒ LINK

I love how you designed the ornaments and how you could keep them clear, not merging/mess with each other. I always have problem with it!


Anyway I'm looking forward for your new drawings

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Spacegryphon In reply to Shirkee [2018-08-05 16:48:25 +0000 UTC]

Hello Shirkee, thank you very much for your comment. I really like the pictures you've mentioned, they look so crisp and refined. The darkest pencil I use is 4B, I use it for countours and the darkest (i.e. black) places. Other than that, I will keep in mind what you said

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Shirkee In reply to Spacegryphon [2018-08-05 17:03:21 +0000 UTC]

Welcome! And as I said try to 6B! Β 

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HalanLore [2018-08-03 02:29:46 +0000 UTC]

I love the design in the background. I'm a suckle for "tribal" designs.

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Spacegryphon In reply to HalanLore [2018-08-03 18:47:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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theJfluffy [2018-08-02 02:09:37 +0000 UTC]

Super Cool!

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Spacegryphon In reply to theJfluffy [2018-08-03 18:46:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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DarrielArtwork [2018-08-02 01:42:43 +0000 UTC]

Hello I found your artwork through Project Comment

This character definitely looks like a badass barbarian warrior which I love. For example the way she standing and looking directly into your soul and crossing her arms makes it so no man ever wants to cross paths with her again. The tattoos man they are beautiful very clean and having it cover both of her arms makes look imitating.

The clothing is very good choices, since she doesn't have much armor on I feel like it makes her look confident for example she doesn't need a whole armor to protect herself which can tell a lot about her skills in battle. the tooths around her necklace could at like trophy from the monsters she's faced and won.Β 

Overall its a very good piece and highly detailed, good shading, beautiful character design <3

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Spacegryphon In reply to DarrielArtwork [2018-08-03 18:13:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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Blondbraid [2018-05-04 22:52:57 +0000 UTC]

Nice tattoos.

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Spacegryphon In reply to Blondbraid [2018-05-06 09:45:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Peace-In-Violence [2018-04-30 06:07:36 +0000 UTC]

looks great

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Spacegryphon In reply to Peace-In-Violence [2018-05-06 09:45:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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MariaEnzianiaKober [2018-04-29 14:51:41 +0000 UTC]

I really like the many ornaments in this work of yours .
I think you also did a quite good job with the anatomy and shading here!

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Spacegryphon In reply to MariaEnzianiaKober [2018-05-06 09:44:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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MariaEnzianiaKober In reply to Spacegryphon [2018-05-07 17:40:48 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Randommode [2018-03-14 18:55:09 +0000 UTC]

It looks cool Β 

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Spacegryphon In reply to Randommode [2018-03-16 07:24:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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jaythemagicdragon [2018-03-04 19:32:27 +0000 UTC]

I don't feel up to writing a critique right now, but what a piece it is. I love the amount of detail you put in there. I'm very impressed by how you did the tribal tatoos, I always mess those up.

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Spacegryphon In reply to jaythemagicdragon [2018-03-05 19:40:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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