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Aivyr [2018-08-05 10:09:23 +0000 UTC]
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I've seen some of your previous works, and you execute lighting and shading here as well as you have in all of them! detailing is also good: I like the tattoos, as well as the jewellery and the dragon-like pattern in the background. I have yet to do shading as well as you have, especially with pencil, but hopefully I will be able to in future.
the character's expression is also well-done. you pull off the stern character well with the narrowed eyes, tight jaw and clenched fists: the eyes are particularly striking, and of course this ties back into the lighting and how that was pulled off well in its own right.
if I am to give anything in the way of critique, I think the jawline and ear could be moved slightly to the left: this way the jaw hinges onto the side of the neck, as it does, and further from the back. (that probably doesn't explain very much, so here 's a link to a better demonstration.) if you're interested, I generally use the Reilly method as an anatomy guide for the head: this Youtube video explains the method quite well, and a quick image search for "Reilly method" shows how it applies to heads at different angles and with different proportions. there are a number of others, but this is the one I've used for a while.
anyhow: anatomical nitpicking aside, this is a neat piece! hope to see more from you in future, and keep it up :]
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Spacegryphon In reply to Aivyr [2018-08-16 05:59:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a bunch for the nice critique! Especially redlining the head was a very helpful advice!
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Shirkee In reply to Spacegryphon [2018-08-05 17:03:21 +0000 UTC]
Welcome! And as I said try to 6B! Β
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HalanLore [2018-08-03 02:29:46 +0000 UTC]
I love the design in the background. I'm a suckle for "tribal" designs.
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theJfluffy [2018-08-02 02:09:37 +0000 UTC]
Super Cool!
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DarrielArtwork [2018-08-02 01:42:43 +0000 UTC]
Hello I found your artwork through Project Comment
This character definitely looks like a badass barbarian warrior which I love. For example the way she standing and looking directly into your soul and crossing her arms makes it so no man ever wants to cross paths with her again. The tattoos man they are beautiful very clean and having it cover both of her arms makes look imitating.
The clothing is very good choices, since she doesn't have much armor on I feel like it makes her look confident for example she doesn't need a whole armor to protect herself which can tell a lot about her skills in battle. the tooths around her necklace could at like trophy from the monsters she's faced and won.Β
Overall its a very good piece and highly detailed, good shading, beautiful character design <3
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Blondbraid [2018-05-04 22:52:57 +0000 UTC]
Nice tattoos.
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jaythemagicdragon [2018-03-04 19:32:27 +0000 UTC]
I don't feel up to writing a critique right now, but what a piece it is. I love the amount of detail you put in there. I'm very impressed by how you did the tribal tatoos, I always mess those up.
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