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Published: 2006-12-05 04:31:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description I say he needs some payback
I say it needs to be from me
I want to see him cry his eyes out
I want to see him bleed

My heart can't take this stabbing
My heart will never be free
My head's confused, my mind's a wreck
He won't get off scottfree

I won't be satisfied until he's hurt
That's how he left me here
No feeling, no thought, no hope
All he ever does is sneer.

No I won't let him get away
With his so-called "accident"
For what he's done there is no crime
But there is punishment.
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Comments: 9

awsmdragonqueen [2007-01-02 05:22:56 +0000 UTC]

so do you still love him? and hes just being an ass or what? hmm...

i really do like youre words. very emotional and strong. they would make a good song. too bad deviantart doesnt have music capabilities. that would be kick butt.

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SpaceSamuraiKelsey In reply to awsmdragonqueen [2007-01-03 02:51:07 +0000 UTC]

no, he's just my friend now.... I was kindov angry at him.... and I was looking thru some things.... I dunno, I just kind of wrote it! Oh man it would be so awesome if you could share music, BELIEVE ME I would be the first to upload a song here. It would be so awesome!

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awsmdragonqueen In reply to SpaceSamuraiKelsey [2007-01-04 02:51:42 +0000 UTC]

hey its cool. i was just curious. ive only gotten bits and pieces of the story and was...a little lost. but anyway...yes. deviantart and music. i can see it now...

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SpaceSamuraiKelsey In reply to awsmdragonqueen [2007-01-04 23:27:30 +0000 UTC]

sorry, our story is easy to be lost in! lol stupid boy.... but it's great having him as a friend... now. oh man.... I wanna start recording to upload if they ever do decide to do that!!!!! I could get so famous..... lol jk jk.

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awsmdragonqueen In reply to SpaceSamuraiKelsey [2007-01-06 16:54:31 +0000 UTC]

yah, dean and i's story is pretty...confusing too. (all better now just no one understands...lol) but thats good. do you play any instruments, or would you just sing? i bet theres a place out there somewhere on the internet where you could do something like that...or there should be anyway.

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SpaceSamuraiKelsey In reply to awsmdragonqueen [2007-01-07 12:39:44 +0000 UTC]

yeah, AKA Myspace! lol all I would be doing would be singing... and you can't get far on voice alone! so I would have to find music for my songs. BLEH, that's hard work.

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awsmdragonqueen In reply to SpaceSamuraiKelsey [2007-01-07 16:17:31 +0000 UTC]

i thought myspace did that...

i play guitar. and violin...but do you know how long its been since i even touched that thing? id like to play it more...but... *tear* ..i dont. (thats probally a time issue too. maybe when i get old and have too much time...lol) Dean also plays some killer guitar

Anyway.........

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BlackJack313 [2006-12-07 02:21:03 +0000 UTC]

wow, this is a very interesting piece of writing i must say, very emotional. all in all a very gripping and solid ideas for maybe a possible song.
great work

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SpaceSamuraiKelsey In reply to BlackJack313 [2006-12-07 02:35:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks!!! I'm hoping to use it in a song some day.

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