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SpaciiReii — Julie Copters [RP]

Published: 2017-08-05 17:50:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 181; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 0
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Description A character I wanted to make a real design for from a roleplay I'm doing with A-Rose-By-Any-Name

Things I've 'fixed' or tried to work on form orginal upload: -hand shape, the backpack does exist and the boot has been pointed out but it's too late to fix
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Comments: 5

ClaudeTriesToDraw [2017-08-05 17:59:55 +0000 UTC]

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The piece is good, I really like the colours you used and the little details you added.

Now, I think you should practice drawing hands since, instead of looking like you're seeing her palm, it looks like the back of her hand.
Also, i noticed that the right boot doesn't make sense, her leg gets cut off, and even in this position you would still be able to see a bit of the top part of the backpack.

A part from that,it's a really piece and i love the character design.
I hope this critique somewhat helps.

3 more words
<3

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13eni [2017-08-07 15:45:21 +0000 UTC]

She's pretty cool indeed

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A-Rose-By-Any-Name [2017-08-05 18:54:40 +0000 UTC]

She looks so pretty!

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SpaciiReii In reply to A-Rose-By-Any-Name [2017-08-05 18:55:17 +0000 UTC]

Ty! Figured I wanted a better sense of what she looked like

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A-Rose-By-Any-Name In reply to SpaciiReii [2017-08-06 05:24:57 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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