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Description For ~esoteric-memories 's fanfic "HinaSasuIno" [link] -- I hope you like it!

This is the best team overhaul story I've ever come across. And funny as all get out--with Sasuke being the lone male on his team (his Jounin sensei is Kurenai), you almost feel bad for him. Then you realize it's actually GOOD for him because he's such an angry, vengeful little boy. If he had supportive teammates like Ino and Hinata, he wouldn't leave Konoha.

Anyways, I recommend reading the story. It focuses much more on the kids, and how they grow up with each other, unlike the canon story.

As for the actual piece...it started out with flat colors. Then it picked up a bit of cel-shading because I thought it'd look nifty. Then, after I did that ShikaHina banner, I completely re-did the shading to look a bit softer. And Hinata's hair...I tried doing so many things to it to show shininess similar to what they do in the anime, but that block look wasn't working well with everything else in the picture. I think I figured out something that works well though...

Top picture is the initial team picture that everyone takes, but I omitted Kurenai. Hinata's intimidated about being put on a team with the top kunoichi and the top rookie of her class; Ino is just in-your-face, with a bit of a forced, aggressive grin; Sasuke is a brat and thinks he's too good for his team.

Bottom picture is right before their Chuunin Exam. Ino and Hinata bought new outfits earlier, and I have to say, ~esoteric-memories has got good fashion sense. They're entirely her design; all I did was come up with the cut of Ino's mesh shirt and the embroidered pattern on Hinata's shirt. Anyways, Ino looks much more relaxed and genuine; Hinata looks more confident (her place in the middle reflects her position as team leader, which both Ino and Sasuke decided for her), and her hair is growing out, as per an agreement she had with Ino--Ino will only grow her hair if Hinata grows hers; Sasuke has a smile-smirk hybrid going on and he actually looks content with his team. And the really really slight, squint-to-see-it SasuHina-ness was done on purpose...you have to read the story to get it!

Yamanaka Ino, Hyuuga Hinata, and Uchiha Sasuke belong to Kishimoto Masashi. "HinaSasuIno" belongs to ~esoteric-memories .
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Comments: 51

Rowena-Bensel [2013-08-22 22:01:57 +0000 UTC]

Do you know if there is a place I can read this fic? I tried Fanfic.net and DA and couldn't fid it. You did a awesome job with this, I'm so intrigued.

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wafflecake-ninja12 [2012-04-13 11:01:34 +0000 UTC]

lol it cool good work [ 3000000000 stars]

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JuniorGustabo [2011-10-18 17:01:01 +0000 UTC]

Well done.

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myzzminatonamikaze [2011-02-27 16:08:48 +0000 UTC]

If this was the main team in the canon show it would kick so much more ass

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UllrichAvenger [2011-02-03 23:02:28 +0000 UTC]

Sasuke Looks The Same XDD Anyways, Friggin Awesome Bud! <3

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SpammishRice In reply to UllrichAvenger [2011-02-10 22:43:50 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yeah, Sasuke's only change was his attitude, though one of the more recent chapters in the fic had an outfit update for him.

Thanks! Glad you like it!

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Nekostriker101 [2011-01-22 09:09:33 +0000 UTC]

aaawww man!!!!
i read it which i thought was really good and i'm glad i decided to click on this pick for that fanfiction XP
but i don't see the sasuhina-ness-es in it!!!
please can you tell me hehe.....
(and yes the extra -es was necessary 'cause its how i talk XP )

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SpammishRice In reply to Nekostriker101 [2011-02-10 22:44:39 +0000 UTC]

The extra SasuHinaness in the picture? Or the fanfic? They're both EXTREMELY subtle.

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Nekostriker101 In reply to SpammishRice [2011-02-12 22:35:13 +0000 UTC]

uuuuhhhhh bothz plz......hehe...

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SpammishRice In reply to Nekostriker101 [2011-02-13 01:09:33 +0000 UTC]

Ah, sorry! I'm not the writer of the fic, I only drew the picture. But yeah, Sasuke is for the most part the same, just slightly more accepting of his teammates (bratty 'before' picture, slightly nicer 'after' picture).

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Nekostriker101 In reply to SpammishRice [2011-02-13 08:01:23 +0000 UTC]

ooohhhh haha nowz i getz it XP

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gosetsuke123 [2010-12-20 22:47:02 +0000 UTC]

I like how Sasuke was like
then Sasuke was smiling in the second part XDD
I was thinking that Sasuke likes the new outfit X3
I love the new outfit~ X33
it fits them well

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xspring-delight [2010-12-18 19:35:03 +0000 UTC]

This is adorable! I've always been interested in what a bond would be like with these three, your illustration reminded me of it; and it's so pretty Great job.

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SpammishRice In reply to xspring-delight [2010-12-20 22:02:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I agree, they could've made a great team.

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TaiyouHime [2010-01-10 02:20:54 +0000 UTC]

absolutely beautiful!!!
direct a

matta aou nee!!

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SpammishRice In reply to TaiyouHime [2010-01-25 18:15:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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PerryWhite [2008-07-11 05:03:20 +0000 UTC]

I love your backstory behind Ino and Hinata's hair. I always thought that Ino could benefit Hinata the way she benefited Sakura, but instead of growing their hair out of competition, Hinata and Ino grew theirs out for friendship.

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SpammishRice In reply to PerryWhite [2008-07-11 22:52:23 +0000 UTC]

Ino and Hinata have a great connection and genuine friendship in Esoteric-memories' fanfic! Actually their agreement about growing out their hair is my favorite chapter.

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naru-chan13 [2008-05-21 22:39:06 +0000 UTC]

so AMAZINGishnessity... yeah
i love this fic and ur pic is perfect (have gone to corner of woo b/c can't draw "good")

oh, think u'd like to draw some more before and after shots of the others?
they all developed pretty differently

and sasuke w/ fishnets? sounds good! how about we give him some random colored cargo pants with millions of chains design/weapon

joking-sortof

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SpammishRice In reply to naru-chan13 [2008-05-22 16:55:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm glad you like it! I don't think I'll draw the other young Konoha nin since I don't think I have a strong enough grasp on their personalities in the AU setting, but when Esoteric-memories adds a chapter with Sasuke's new outfit design, I'm definitely going to try to draw it.

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White-Heron [2008-05-19 02:29:03 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh my god! I'm a big fan of that fanfic too! I never could picture her costumes well, but thanks to you, I realize just how great they are now! I also like how more relaxed all the three look!

Sasuke should get a costume change too! ^^

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esoteric-memories In reply to White-Heron [2008-05-19 21:41:42 +0000 UTC]

oh my, hello! if you want him to get a costume change, sasuke shall get a costume change. ^-^

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White-Heron In reply to esoteric-memories [2008-05-20 01:03:50 +0000 UTC]

Yes please! P: Maybe with some sexy fishnet too!

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esoteric-memories In reply to White-Heron [2008-05-20 05:20:20 +0000 UTC]

sasuke and fishnet...hmmm, okay, gonna get to it... i've been trying to post the new chapter but the log in option is no good right now so two new chapters should be up soon ^-^ the second on should have the fishnet

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White-Heron In reply to esoteric-memories [2008-05-20 08:38:12 +0000 UTC]

Is that why there has been so few fic updates recently? I found that rather strange...

Sasuke with fishnet. P: And nothing else on.

Okay. Maybe not the last part. Maybe. P:

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esoteric-memories In reply to White-Heron [2008-05-21 12:53:58 +0000 UTC]

kinda, i just posted ch.20 and ch.21 (which is for you) has just been finished. should be up by the end of the week ^-^

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White-Heron In reply to esoteric-memories [2008-05-21 15:54:30 +0000 UTC]

I saw and commented!

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esoteric-memories In reply to White-Heron [2008-05-23 12:12:44 +0000 UTC]

new chapter up, but as mentioned the mesh thing didn't quiet get across as sexy. so, i'll just have to write a new chapter with possible threesome hints and sasuke in a sex slave outfit.

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SpammishRice In reply to White-Heron [2008-05-20 15:21:07 +0000 UTC]

This outfit change sounds very much like something Ino would pick out for Sasuke, whether he likes it or not.

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esoteric-memories In reply to SpammishRice [2008-05-21 12:54:52 +0000 UTC]

.............earhm....i think i've become predictable then --; because he's been so coerced into his new outfit... -snickers- but there is plot!... i think

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SpammishRice In reply to White-Heron [2008-05-19 20:16:02 +0000 UTC]

I know you! You leave those really awesome reviews on HinaSasuIno! Is it weird that I like reading your reviews?

Yes, Sasuke definitely needs a new outfit, but not that black bodysuit!

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White-Heron In reply to SpammishRice [2008-05-20 01:03:26 +0000 UTC]

Ahahah! You recognized me? XD What gave me out? X'D

Sasuke can start by replacing those white things around his
arms by sexy fishnet. P:

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DanielaUchiha [2008-05-19 01:13:20 +0000 UTC]

wow!!... your drawing are almost like the real ones}!!!

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SpammishRice In reply to DanielaUchiha [2008-05-19 20:11:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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xxjeffxhardyxx [2008-05-18 23:53:57 +0000 UTC]

pretty! ^^

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SpammishRice In reply to xxjeffxhardyxx [2008-05-19 00:11:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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hinatalovers [2008-05-18 21:27:33 +0000 UTC]

Aw
They look so nice on the second one ^^
(the first one is also nice, but that's who they look in the anime so it's not really new)

Ino looks a little tomboyish. Which is not really like her but it looks nice
And Hinata looks more confident and more comfortable. She looks better like this
And Sasuke looks actually happy
I somehow can see the difference in their eyes
Is that weird considering this is a pic ?

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SpammishRice In reply to hinatalovers [2008-05-19 00:10:52 +0000 UTC]

I like the second picture as well. I would've left it as just the second picture, but I wanted to get the changes across.

Ino would have to be at least a little tomboyish to nab the title of top kunoichi of her class...I can't see her being prissy and still having the skills to be at the top. And I'm glad to hear the facial expressions were effective in reflecting their changes!

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PrefectOfHogwarts [2008-05-18 15:05:46 +0000 UTC]

I remember I started reading that fic! But then I forgot about it... But I'm gonna re-start now. :] I like the second set of the fanart better than the first, but who doesn't? I like Ino and Hinata's new outfits.

And I like how you made them all away from eachother in the first set, then they coem together in the second! Does that make any sense? Oh well! x]

Jenni
PoH

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SpammishRice In reply to PrefectOfHogwarts [2008-05-19 00:07:58 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I like the second picture more as well...probably because the first picture is just them straight out of the anime. Thank you, glad you like it!

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LightningFlash [2008-05-18 10:44:02 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, I think I'll have to give that fic a try. :3

Awesome pic, I like how you've gone about maturing them. I think your shine on Hinata's work looks great, too.

Aahh, but I miss Kiba and Shino. I think I like Team 8 best just as it is.

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SpammishRice In reply to LightningFlash [2008-05-19 00:06:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! That was my aim, to show them right when they're assigned their team, and the changes they experience after they've been a team for awhile.

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Warrior-of-Ruin [2008-05-18 10:07:03 +0000 UTC]

love the pic
they all look v cute wiv their poses and smiles
gd colouring and clothes designs (the writer does have a gd fashion sense XD)
will make sure to read dat fic

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SpammishRice In reply to Warrior-of-Ruin [2008-05-19 00:04:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I was pleasantly surprised that the girls' outfits turned out so well...and all I did was follow exactly what was written.

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Warrior-of-Ruin In reply to SpammishRice [2008-05-19 17:45:31 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome
cool

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esoteric-memories [2008-05-18 07:00:30 +0000 UTC]

looks great ^-^ you know, the colours for sasuke and hinata look very good together here. and also, coloured, you can really see the difference in their eyes before and after. i'm not very coherent right now because of giddiness. they look so much happier! much more relaxed... and i have to say... the sasuhinaness here is very nice too, very natural. those two look good together here ^-^ and might i add that ino does NOT look as background charactery as she does in canon?

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SpammishRice In reply to esoteric-memories [2008-05-19 00:01:23 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy to hear you like it! I was really aiming to show the characters changes through their facial expressions and body language, and I'm glad it came through.

If Ino looks more like a main character, it's thanks to you. I pretty much drew her how I pictured her while reading your story.

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esoteric-memories In reply to SpammishRice [2008-05-19 21:40:22 +0000 UTC]

^-^ this is brilliant. and as per request of the wonderful white heron, i shall be working on an idea of sasuke's new clothes... -snicker-

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BlueQuartzFoxy [2008-05-18 03:28:10 +0000 UTC]

Aw! This is so cute and awesome. I'm going to read this fic right now- since you rec it so highly. I have to say I agree, I love Ino and Hinata's outfits from the fan fic, so kudos to the writer for having good tastes in clothes- much better than Ino's Timeskip Tramp...I mean kunoichi outfit in Shippuden. And Sasuke...still a smug little brat; but at least he doesn't look quite so mean/moody in the second set of the fan art. Awesome job Spam! -wanders away to read the fan fic-

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SpammishRice In reply to BlueQuartzFoxy [2008-05-18 05:09:16 +0000 UTC]

Yay! I'm glad you're going to read it--it's hard to find good stories, and I get really excited when I find one.

Ino's Timeskip Tramp look and Sakura's new outfit aren't all that different, actually. I noticed they both now wear sleeveless tops, elbow coverings, short shorts, and apron type thingies over the shorts. I had a comic idea involving it too...and I was going to have Tenten and Hinata hand Ino and Sakura two bandaids and a cork each and tell them, "Studying your outfit changes through the years, we've deduced this is the next step."

Thanks Blue, glad you like it, and I hope you enjoy the fanfic!

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