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nixequeen45 [2017-08-13 18:35:08 +0000 UTC]
I'd very much like a part two, if you're still interested in writing this story. <3
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SparklinBurgndy In reply to nixequeen45 [2017-08-13 18:52:36 +0000 UTC]
It's up to three now, actually.
Finfolk IIAfterwards, all Reginald felt like doing was going home to a stiff drink and the loving arms of his wife of three years, Amanda. But somehow he didn’t think such a request would please Queen Evelyn Marie Grace of the house of Matin. The hubbub on the viewing platform had not gone unnoticed and now Reginald stood before her Royal Highness. Queen Evelyn was a tiny woman, thin and birdlike. Where most women would make such a build seem childlike, Evelyn gave the impression of being built out of diamond and razors. She was sharp in every sense of the word; sharp of mind, sharp of eye, and sharp of body.
She paced back and forth between Captain Bight and the glass of the underwater viewing station. There was no real sense of rush to her pacing, it was just as if she were plotting out her interrogation.
“They say it spoke to you,” she announced. Unlike her sharp appearance, her voice was actually quite soft and pleasant.
“Yes, Your
Finfolk IIIReginald wondered what on earth they were telling Amanda. The officers’ wives were allowed viewing among the lesser nobles. He wondered if word had trickled down to them yet or if the Royal Guard were going to shock her with an invitation to tea with a creature of legend. Other servants were setting up a metal table in the shallows of the aquarium, the seats just above the water level. He and Amanda were going home with wet clothes, Reginald realized. He could take off his boots and stockings, but his trousers would still be soaked. Ah well; there were graver things to consider.
Out in the deep, Julian surfaced just enough that his eyes were visible. The merman watched the tea set up warily. Places were set for three. Footmen brought out little cakes and delicate sandwiches, wading awkwardly into the water in their shiny buckled shoes and coming out slipping and squelching.
“Captain Bight, what mischief have you g
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bookwormbeth [2016-04-05 17:58:58 +0000 UTC]
What happened to him! How does he want help? To be free of the cage or of the merman-ness of himself. I sense a true friendship/something more between the two.
More, please!
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SparklinBurgndy In reply to bookwormbeth [2016-04-06 18:28:51 +0000 UTC]
That is the question! Oh yes, this is definite tried and true blue friendship.
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sunstroke-art [2016-04-05 16:40:23 +0000 UTC]
VEry intense!!!!
Thanks for posting
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MensjeDeZeemeermin [2016-03-30 20:03:37 +0000 UTC]
Tantalizing. We need and want backstory. This is quite intense and gripping.
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merrypaws [2016-03-30 18:26:09 +0000 UTC]
Wow. That's almost CREEPY.
... More? Please?
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SparklinBurgndy In reply to merrypaws [2016-04-05 15:23:39 +0000 UTC]
Um . . . okay. I wasn't prepared for that, but great!
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