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the hair looks a bit flat/dull in this one, but overall heaps better!
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The 2018,is OF COURSE The best! In every feature, but the hair seems more realistic on 2017. GREAT IMPROVEMENT!
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Great improvement in digital art skill! I love seeing people improve so much, but here are a few critiques to think about.
1. The eye and eyebrow are slanted a little too far down. It looks like it was because the original drawing was like that and you were just copying almost exactly where it was placed.
2. The ear is slightly too small, and at least needs to be elongated. (This ones not too bad, just a small critique)
3. I think the mouth and nose are a little too far down, and just a small adjustment would help.
4. The city in the background looks very pain. Although you've improved in the shape or it, it looks a little lazy, and some windows/perspective would help a bit.
Also, thought I leave some improvements I noticed.
1. The shape of the face is much better
2. You're skills in digital painting have improved greatly
3. The shading and skin is less muddy
4. The eyes and lips are more defined
5. It's much cleaner and/or sharper
6. Clothing looks more realistic
Anyways, hope this helps! Good luck with drawing in the feature.
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I think implementing a general critism list will help you to get better.
Maybe you should make aΒ survey for pro and cons
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Youβre art has improved so much! This looks so good!
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She just keeps getting further and further away from the city....
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ahh, seeing the 2014 and the 2018 drawing in
the same post is so cool! Seeing that you can
go from that.. to amazing in just a few years!
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