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NorthaDawn [2020-05-27 01:34:35 +0000 UTC]
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TheeArtist85 [2020-05-19 01:25:05 +0000 UTC]
Great job with the expression on their faces.
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Ellysiumn [2019-09-12 10:26:53 +0000 UTC]
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Xeplas [2019-06-01 07:14:34 +0000 UTC]
I really like the color scheme and the scenary you made there!
They both look like they're from different timelines though.
It's pretty neat though, good work!
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sphelon8565 In reply to Xeplas [2019-06-01 20:47:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much out there
Enjoy!
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sphelon8565 In reply to leiyue [2019-05-31 21:52:05 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the great compliment you wrote there!
Glad n Happy to hear you love it.
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Vanum-Chan [2019-05-26 17:27:14 +0000 UTC]
you created a realy atmospheric picture, i realy like it
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Slave2Karma [2019-04-08 02:53:03 +0000 UTC]
Lovely contrast of colors!
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suki42deathlake [2019-03-26 07:28:30 +0000 UTC]
Loving how you drew the two contrasting emotion and the strong poses, gorgeous detail in in the folds of the clothing.
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ZachValkyrie [2018-12-10 04:50:30 +0000 UTC]
We all need a little kindness every now and again
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erickramirez [2018-12-06 00:22:47 +0000 UTC]
Love it.
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Seeeks [2018-12-02 09:19:33 +0000 UTC]
This is overall pretty good, but one thing that stands out is that with such a large distance between the woman's eye and bridge of the nose, if her face was turned towards the viewer, the distance between the eyes would be too wide and also the shading implies that the face is more pointed than round.
Sketch in purple is a rough approximation of how the face might look like when rotated.
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Seeeks In reply to sphelon8565 [2018-12-05 05:55:56 +0000 UTC]
Sorry if I came off as blunt or made you feel like I was attacking your style. That wasn't my intention. The reason I didn't write a lengthy review was because the rest of the image works in the style chosen and I wouldn't change anything else. Optimally, most cartoons and anime aim to convey a sense of a believable form, so the positioning of body parts creates an illusion of an object with mass and depth. There are styles that are intentionally flat like Peppa Pig and South Park, but I can tell that you were going for an impression of roundness.
I'll try to refrain from commenting on your works in the future but I might not always remember who I've interacted with or recognize individual styles, so if I accidentally comment on future works, I hope you understand that it's intended as helpful in a way that adapts to the style, rather than implying that everything has to be photorealistic.
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sphelon8565 In reply to Seeeks [2018-12-10 23:57:53 +0000 UTC]
Ah, No worries there and hard feelings there
But thanks for your clarification of about what you said.
you are still welcome to visit and comment my works, should I posted anything new.
Like Art, Even a critique can have a form of development and learning as well if you are ever
lost or something.
Peace out!
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SheReadsALot [2018-11-30 22:23:27 +0000 UTC]
Hello, I’m commenting for ProjectComment
I always love seeing how artists illustrate different characters, and in this artwork you’ve done great job! The characters’ poses look natural and anatomically correct but still have a distinct style, which is always good. I especially like the boy’s pose and the gesture of his right hand, simple things like that can express a lot of emotion, which seems to be the goal of this artwork. Both’s facial expressions are well done as well! You have eye for little details in the face that make up the expression. I can practically empathize with both characters, just based on looking at this painting.
I also like how you painted their clothes. The values seem about right, and the small details really make the characters seem more alive. Shading is soft where needed to be, and a bit sharper just in the right spots. Overall, I think the characters are very successful. The scenery has great depth, with trees on the background at varying distances. The faraway trees are mostly just grey shapes, which amplifies the feeling of depth. The characters seem close to the viewer, and the tree just next to them helps perceiving the scene as a 3D space rather than just a 2D picture. The rays of light look nice.
Personally, I’d add some more detail into the scenery, maybe by adding some sharper/darker lines and shades on the tree trunks or brighter colors on the grass. All in all, the ground seems a bit dull, and could use some more contrast. On the other hand, grey scenery might be what you were going for? The shadows near the girl’s legs could be a bit darker, as well. I also think there should be less light cast on the girl’s face, considering the light is coming from behind her.
It is a beautiful illustration altogether. The viewer’s attention is immediately drawn to the characters and their emotional interaction. Great work!
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brambleclawandjaypaw [2018-09-11 21:29:38 +0000 UTC]
I love everything about this. They are two of my oldest characters, so seeing the two of them together finally is too much for words. The expressions capture them perfectly: Sean a broken and scared soul and Amoret gentle and caring. The background is also really nice and has an ominous feel to it. Thank you so much for having taken the time to join my contest, and I apologize it took so long for me to comment.
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ThatGingerChic [2018-07-15 05:01:05 +0000 UTC]
This really tells a story. Love it
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asari13 [2018-07-14 10:09:07 +0000 UTC]
cute scene
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