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SpiffyInu In reply to oreo5317 [2012-01-20 02:55:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. The white line is the glow from his eye. Most animals' eyes reflect light in the dark. (i.e. cat eyes) It is streaming from his eye, because he is moving forward. The line is like an after glow effect, like when you wave a glow stick back and forward. If you pay attention to it then you'll notice that it is leaving a stream of light behind it. Not really, but that's how your eyes see it. Not sure if I explained that well. Thank you, though, I do try for originality. I've read that book, it was really good, and in a sense my character is fighting the chain for a similar reason; freedom. The chain represents an unrequited love, and he is fighting to move forward, but his feelings keep holding him back. Hearing that means a lot, and I've said it twice already, but thank you. I do appreciate that you took the time to critique this piece.
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oreo5317 In reply to SpiffyInu [2012-01-20 03:06:25 +0000 UTC]
your welcome. and thanks for explaining that. i got confused.
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SpiffyInu In reply to oreo5317 [2012-01-20 03:16:06 +0000 UTC]
No problem, and thanks for all the favs and point. <3
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oreo5317 In reply to SpiffyInu [2012-01-20 03:17:34 +0000 UTC]
welcome. would have given more but i only have 4 points now.
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LinnyIllustrates [2012-01-23 01:15:31 +0000 UTC]
love the intensity of it, really cool
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Wastelands-Knight [2012-01-21 19:20:03 +0000 UTC]
Very very good work!) Great pose and expression! I really like it!
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