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Published: 2010-01-23 05:46:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 196; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 5
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Ok so this is the beginning of the commission my mom made. It's to draw a seraph how I think it looks. Seraphs have 6 wings, two that cover it's face, two covering it's arms and two for flying. This is only a head. I plan to later do a full body when I'm better at bodies. Tell me what you think needs changing now, before I start coloring and it's harder to switch.Related content
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The wing detail is good. The only area I see is the same error I use to make. The shoulders are just a little too narrow. They need to go out a bit more before turning down (almost a straight line but not quite)-use your own shoulders as a guide- it helps.
Will be watching for the extended version.
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Thank you for the comment. I never really realized that... but know it makes a lot of sense. I'll work on it, thanks!
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no prob. that (shoulder area) use to give me nothing but grief.
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I can see it catching up a lot of beginner artist. It's hard to notice but you still see something wrong with the picture. You just don't have a clue what it is.
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true. that is why da is so great- there are others who can help us. i've had lots of help from professionals here and given some assistance of my own where i can. now you will be able to help those coming up behind you! 
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Wow thank you. I plan to help others, but I didn't know my wings where good! I'm glad to hear. I took my a while to get them right.
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it showed. (Actually I am one of the ones you have helped with them.
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Well I'm glad! I'm also glad you learned from this. Isn't it wonderful what you can learn on DA!
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