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Published: 2008-02-01 16:18:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 2099; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 12
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Description Stretching open I feel
exactly how I want to.
The fear makes me tremble
but want
feverishly.

This moon is not full.
I am not wild now.
I wake
and I roll into memories that daze me.
I feel my mouth still full
   of kisses and sweet fruit.

The loneliness is both cruel and dear.

Can I be your earth for a while?
Can I feel shared instead of taken?
Please
There could be merriment
and fire as deep as bone.
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Comments: 18

BenHammonds [2010-03-05 14:50:48 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful image, your word usage is truly beautiful
Hello from Texas
Ben

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somethingstrung [2008-11-08 07:24:15 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful words. I believe I can relate.

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s0ulsurvivor [2008-05-10 23:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Very lovely! You know it is a really stirring piece when your fav to comment ratio is 1:1 Must read more of your stuff!

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pencilsbyjim [2008-03-01 17:17:52 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, a very heart felt glimps.

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xXBehindthedoorXx [2008-02-21 19:27:43 +0000 UTC]

Can I be your earth for a while?
Can I feel shared instead of taken?
Please
There could be merriment
and fire as deep as bone.

very elegant

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spindl In reply to xXBehindthedoorXx [2008-08-01 03:11:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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xXBehindthedoorXx In reply to spindl [2008-08-01 04:04:08 +0000 UTC]

beautiful work

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ec-burner [2008-02-08 00:52:22 +0000 UTC]

ahhh...the feeling of missing the pack...i know how u feel and appreciate u putting it into words

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faust40 [2008-02-03 15:57:06 +0000 UTC]

i have now words to describe how beautiful that was.

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KennethSno [2008-02-02 10:22:39 +0000 UTC]

well done...you should write more.


kenneth

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JackTheRebel [2008-02-02 00:23:41 +0000 UTC]

Not bad...

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SeventhCrow [2008-02-01 17:33:59 +0000 UTC]

The concept of waking half way through and rolling into memories is wonderful, rich and familiar.
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Maxteg [2008-02-01 16:50:56 +0000 UTC]

That was very beautiful and emotional

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spindl In reply to Maxteg [2008-02-01 20:12:02 +0000 UTC]

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Maxteg In reply to spindl [2008-02-01 20:19:32 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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PerryGallagher [2008-02-01 16:37:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh my.. What wonderful verse you are an amazing woman

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spindl In reply to PerryGallagher [2008-02-01 17:53:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Perry. Very much.

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alexsolaris [2008-02-01 16:32:24 +0000 UTC]

beautiful words with an undelying music of longing sighs and trembles...those kind of trembles when one is awaken in the deep skin...

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