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Spining — Miss Strawberry
Published: 2012-10-09 04:14:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 439; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 2
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began this as a sketchafter seeing my friend draw really amazing and cute anime girls, i realized i want to try too
unfortunately my original style is anything but cute
so this is my first attempt
the eyes were a pain though = 3 =
is it cute enough?
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oh and i think im beginning to search for another style again.
my previous one (which i really do like) is very very flawed, i hope i can perfect it before i give up completely haha
with me luck
pointers and critiques are very much welcome!
but please be brutally honest AND friendly at the same time c:
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Comments: 27
w She is the prettiest girl ever!!! I'm in love.
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awwwe looks wonderful, i love the style<333
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aww thank you <3
It's much more painful than the style i had before haha c;
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well i love it, good work^w^
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you are always soo nice c:
thank you ^^
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oh it's nothing^^ oh, my oc anita managed to get her own profile, if you want to talk to her, she's rather lonely right now
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i'd love to chat c:
but uhh, where is she? (or rather, how can i contact her?)
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oh, her link is in my most recent journal, if you wish^w^
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alrighty, hope she likes me c:
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And yes, I forgot, you wanted a critic.
Pros:
I very much like the colors and the unique shading style. Lighting seems right, so do the cast shadows. Awesome hair and golden smile.
I also like the shading of the eyes, they pop out very nicely.
Cons:
Well, short version, collarbones pop out to much, you should rethink the line weight of the colar bones; she looks like giraffe, maybe a thicker or shorter throat area? Where are the eyebrows? Upper torso anatomy seems wrong or at least appears weird to me. Line weight around the mouth needs fixing, atm to blurry and thick. Placement of the nostrils lines could be adjusted, it seems like her nose is broken and leaning towards (image)left. Mouth and nose could be moved more upwards, the chin area would pop out more this way. General line weighting errors (for example chin point area)
The left and right hair areas are kinda disproportioned, you suggest more hair on the left side, but the hair area on the right side is bigger, looks weird and makes the face area look smaller than necessary. Where are the lower eyelashes? The eyeball area could need some eyeball cave shading, you know, our eyes are like inside those caves, thus one could show that with appropriate shadow placement.
PS: I know, the con area sounds sassy, but there is no ill-intention, I promise.
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ah thank you!
i'll try to improve the next time i draw (which will hopefully be soon) c:
and i completely agree with you, especially the nose haha
it is very tilted indeed.
thank you again for taking the time to help out a fellow artist
please take care!
and i hope my next piece won't disappoint c;
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I didn't say this piece disappointed, just for the record. ^^
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i know, but i really do want to do better
and your comment really helps ^^
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I'm glad to have been of help then.^^
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Ahhw, so cute, want to cuddle and give her a pat on the head.
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Asjisdhsud She's so cute. ;u;
I really like your anime style, I really do. ;w; In fact, I'm a little bit jealous of it. The only thing that I would recommend is making the eyes in a more comfortable style. .3. Trust me, eyes aren't as easy as they look. =3=
Did I ever tell you that I adore your coloring style? :'D
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asdfahjksdh thank you > u <
i agree with you on the eyes, haha back to the drawing board
i think your art is completely amazing and i like it very much! c:
my colouring style is equivalent to scribbles of colour on a piece of paper, it's both messy and blotchy XD
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You're welcome~ c:
Asdfghjkl; thank you. ;w;
Aw, but it looks really nice in my opinion. c:
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