marislily [2008-03-23 17:51:34 +0000 UTC]
I really like her expression. I mean, she looks like after a party, when she's tired after all the dancing and stuff, and now, she just had some sleep on a random couch and Renji just took a picture of her.
You might wanna try to make her hair look more Rukia-like...I mean it's too messy and dense...you know how Kubo draws her, right? Use some reference if you have to, because you have so much potential!
Also, I noticed that you tend to make the lines too thick. Why? Seriously, that's something I do, and I draw horribly...just make them a bit thinner to add some elegance, because when you draw a girl...and the contour for the face is too thick, it gives her this bulky look!
Good luck with school!
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