lucas7500 [2016-07-12 16:48:58 +0000 UTC]
Nice history, but i fear i've found an error in the third paragraph right in the end it reads: "and therefor also had vast." and abruptly ends, so shouldn't it be: and therefore also had vast power/control?.
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Spiritswriter123 In reply to lucas7500 [2016-07-12 20:51:21 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. You'll find in most of my descriptions either a sentence will abruptly end or goes to another thought in general. I have no idea how I made that mistake though...
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