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Published: 2013-03-03 02:07:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 453; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 3
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This is karma for stalking Nightbird for all those years isn't it?

So uh....this new submission page. Hm....ANYWHO! So this is a sequel to the comic done by ~kimagetsu ( [link] ) And hey look at that, I promised a sequel and it didn't take me a month to go through with it. Go me, though watch this be my only drawing done during spring break.

Well, hm....you can easily tell that I got lazy near the end of the line art process. I mean this changed so much. In the first panel the two were supposed to be eating at a lunch table (then I said Yolo!) and in the second panel GS was supposed to be shooting an arrow but again....YOLO! Last panel she was actually supposed to be going to bed and Dante was supposed to be hiding on a chandelier but I failed....epically. So meh. But yeah ignore all the hands and the size mistakes. I mean Dante gets smaller each time around. In the first panel lets just say he is standing on a stool! WHY NOT! Makes perfect sense!

But yeah in the first panel GS came over to offer a get togther for lunch and what not, second panel well self-explanatory. Third panel....sure they are at some rich people party. GS is there with Mama BT and Dante is there with Papa Conroy. Sure yes....woo. And yeah fourth panel is self-explanatory too. Not sure if Dante would ever really act like this so sorry ~kimagetsu if the little guy is out of character.

So yeah with that idea of Dante having a crush on GS....I like it! I don't think GS would reject the little guy off the back either, heck I think it would take a bit before she even realized he had a crush on her. She's oblivious guys, she don't understand. But yeah after all this she'd get it. But no this was fun I hope after getting some school work done I can get more Earth-G stuff drawn. Hopefully I can and it'll come out better then this. I feel like it is so bad so BLARG.

Now time for food!

Dante Conroy/Sparrow- ~kimagetsu
Earth-G ~The-G
Green Strike and drawing and what not- ME!
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Comments: 34

AlyssaF [2013-04-10 18:12:57 +0000 UTC]

Nice! Though if he keeps up the stalking, he's probably gonna get smacked down by Blue Thunder.
-Liss

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Violent-Rainbow [2013-03-24 14:40:22 +0000 UTC]

Vanessa your art looks fantastic Your comics are so well organized, unlike mine haha, with mine everyone's all over the place and I don't use panels. You're coloring so well now! very neatly. C:

p.s. I'm glad we're talking more now haha we should be facebook friends :0

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Spoiler-Emblem In reply to Violent-Rainbow [2013-03-24 18:42:58 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha thanks XD I'm still not to confident in my art but it's great hearing it's good from you.

And yeah but I don't have a facebook

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Violent-Rainbow In reply to Spoiler-Emblem [2013-03-24 21:02:52 +0000 UTC]

it'll take time to improve, it took me forever. x.x and I'm still learning (: everyone can improve in some way for their art.
and no problem, it's okay. some people I know just don't like Facebook or just never got into it haha.

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Spoiler-Emblem In reply to Violent-Rainbow [2013-03-24 22:51:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I'm just some one who never got into it I've been thinking about getting one but more so for school purposes since a few clubs and the one class I'm in send most of their updates through Facebook.

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The-G [2013-03-04 16:07:47 +0000 UTC]

Your sequel to the other comic appeared pretty quickly. Maybe this strip was helping you to deal with what has happened to Damian.

Dante looks like such a creeper in that last panel. Apparently he uses his ninja skills for EVERYTHING! But, he looks quite young so I'll go with he doesn't really understand. Crushes were not part of his training so he doesn't really know what the protocol is for situations like this.

I think you did a great job. Their poses really set the scene and the expressions really sell what each person is thinking.

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Spoiler-Emblem In reply to The-G [2013-03-04 17:33:41 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha maybe! I was just in a mood to draw XD I'm still in that mood and I really shouldn't be since I got so much homework to get done.

He's nine. What is privacy to them? It's totally acceptable for when you have a crush to watch their every move. Totally.

Thanks!

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Scholar-K-Hobbit [2013-03-03 22:29:27 +0000 UTC]

I really dig this little comic strip, it is adorable and maybe a little creepy all at once. But it /kinda/ fits the character. Ever heard "I'll be Watching You" by the Police? That must be Dante's theme for Greenstrike. Also, I really love your style. It has it's own unique look, kinda like Phineas and Ferb. You capture expressions and the context of the scene really well. (Seriously, I was mad giggling throughout this.)

I think my favorite panel is the third where he's giving her the flower. So awks and adrobs!

Also, has GS ever met Vice? I think these two could have some serious fun together.

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Spoiler-Emblem In reply to Scholar-K-Hobbit [2013-03-03 22:32:03 +0000 UTC]

I have never heard the song before I'll have to check it out and thank you for the comment about the style, comparing it to Phineas and Ferb does make me happy cause I'm shooting to get more of a cartoony style and get out of the anime/manga phase. So yeah that does make me feel pretty good And thanks for the expression thing too because I always feel like my expressions suck.

Ha ha thanks! Despite the fact it gave me the most trouble I love the second panel the most (How do hands work I just don't know....)

I don't believe she has. I'm sure they could though.

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Scholar-K-Hobbit In reply to Spoiler-Emblem [2013-03-04 23:18:18 +0000 UTC]

I really love how a person can develop an artistic animation style and I think you've managed to do that really well. While anime is "nice", it's cool to see other techniques. Also, I love how in the second panel it's like he's trying to sneakily hold her hand. Hehe.

Vice and Greenstrike have to meet at some point. As GS is part of the Green team who are primarily villains, I am thinking these two could get along. Does GS like to party? lol

I also had a rather random amusing thought but am not sure if it'd work. Let's say Greenstrike (and Dante) encountered a supervillain who wasn't going to cream them because their kids. Would she totally "kidnap" the villain and make said villain do whatever they wanted? (Think an inverse of the kid gets kidnapped and ransomed...)

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Spoiler-Emblem In reply to Scholar-K-Hobbit [2013-03-05 00:41:28 +0000 UTC]

Glad you caught that XD It's actually yes what it is supposed to be. He's trying to grab her hand. I just stink with hands darn it!

Actually even though she may seem it GS isn't a party person XD She gets pretty bored at them. GS and Vice could still chill though.

You mean like take advantage of the situation and mess with the villian? Yeah she'd do that.

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Scholar-K-Hobbit In reply to Spoiler-Emblem [2013-03-05 00:46:36 +0000 UTC]

Party=video games, movies, and lots and lots of food. It's funny, Vice will go to the club and just sit there all night b/c she's a wallflower and is (ironically) shy. And yet she does it anyway... But some of the more private parties at Legacy's pad are pretty cool.

Herm... she would, eh? Good to know. I was kinda thinking a kid heroes kidnap a villain and make said villain do stuff for them would be a lot of fun... now I just need to know what they'd want to do. Chauffeur is definitely one, lol. If GS had a villain at her disposal to cater to her whim, what would she do?

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Spoiler-Emblem In reply to Scholar-K-Hobbit [2013-03-05 00:50:07 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha if that's the defintion of a party than GS would be there. I think GS just hates on parties cause all the ones she goes to are the rich folk parties where ya gotta dress all nice.

FFFF- good question XD Probably make them do her chores and keep Mama BT off her back while she does whatever she wishes.

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Scholar-K-Hobbit In reply to Spoiler-Emblem [2013-03-05 00:52:19 +0000 UTC]

Do arcades still exist? And what does she think of mini golf and movies? (I'm trying to think of things a nine year old could do and might consider a 'date'--unbeknownst to certain parties of course. ) And yeah... rich people parties are /booooooooring/--until you spice it up with a SURPRISE stick up!

Also, I think BT would terrify Vice, lol. (If only b/c parents are dang scary when it comes to kids.)

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Spoiler-Emblem In reply to Scholar-K-Hobbit [2013-03-05 00:54:44 +0000 UTC]

Um....I think but there aren't that many anymore XD Most are just part of family restuarants. MINI GOLF! All hail Mini Golf! She loves that game bro. Ha ha yeah XD

GS responses to that would be 'Yolo bro'

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Scholar-K-Hobbit In reply to Spoiler-Emblem [2013-03-05 00:57:07 +0000 UTC]

And Vice would be all "Yolo sure, but that doesn't man I want to die a very painful death from sharp pointy objects and a man whose almost as good as Legacy himself in the martial arts."

There has to be /some/ kind of ancient arcade. So, what kind of movie would she like? Maybe a rom com zombie romance like Warm bodies? (And YUSH to mini-golf. <3<3<3 the putt putt!)

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Spoiler-Emblem In reply to Scholar-K-Hobbit [2013-03-05 00:59:33 +0000 UTC]

With that she would then respond with a 'Meh'

She'd be chill with anything XD Except horror, she would freak and cling to the nearest person....that may work in Dante's favor though.

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Scholar-K-Hobbit In reply to Spoiler-Emblem [2013-03-05 01:04:28 +0000 UTC]

I hate horror too. -.- And that would be entertaining. (I've actually heard good things about Warm Bodies tho, even if it is a romance, lol.) Maybe something nice and explosive and heroy?

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Spoiler-Emblem In reply to Scholar-K-Hobbit [2013-03-05 01:06:41 +0000 UTC]

I have yet to see the movie no matter how much I want to (School and all that jazz) but I have read the book and the book was awesome.

And yes.

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Scholar-K-Hobbit In reply to Spoiler-Emblem [2013-03-05 01:12:31 +0000 UTC]

Also, if you have time, I am currently hanging in EG chat.

Action is good. Also, ice cream. Does GS (JJ?) like ice cream?

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Spoiler-Emblem In reply to Scholar-K-Hobbit [2013-03-05 01:15:17 +0000 UTC]

The EG Chat hates me and doesn't let me in.

Yes yes. But not a lot.

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Scholar-K-Hobbit In reply to Spoiler-Emblem [2013-03-05 01:18:07 +0000 UTC]

Aww. :/ I swear some days I have to reload the page 100 times before it says 'okay, you can enter'. It's like it needs a secret pass code or something, lol.

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Spoiler-Emblem In reply to Scholar-K-Hobbit [2013-03-05 01:19:32 +0000 UTC]

It just says something about java for me and goes all blonde on me.

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Scholar-K-Hobbit In reply to Spoiler-Emblem [2013-03-05 01:22:16 +0000 UTC]

Java script? I get that too. Have you tried reloading about five dozen times? (I'm not sure that's an exaggeration actually....)

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Spoiler-Emblem In reply to Scholar-K-Hobbit [2013-03-05 01:25:42 +0000 UTC]

Nah I haven't but I rather not have to put up with that.

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Scholar-K-Hobbit In reply to Spoiler-Emblem [2013-03-05 01:29:31 +0000 UTC]

I do wish it were a little less temperamental and easier to access. I know a few times Dakt's been on and couldn't stay due to connection issues.

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Spoiler-Emblem In reply to Scholar-K-Hobbit [2013-03-05 01:32:04 +0000 UTC]

Yeah the chat rooms like to be arses.

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kimagetsu [2013-03-03 09:00:40 +0000 UTC]

i love all of these! stalker dante is creepy, but sooooooo damn adorable!! my favorite is the second one...like he expected not to be caught under her cape or something XD

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Spoiler-Emblem In reply to kimagetsu [2013-03-03 15:37:40 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha thanks XD I hope to do more with this idea cause it's just hilarous and fun to mess around with!

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TakaraxDaydreamer [2013-03-03 02:31:10 +0000 UTC]

I lol'd

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Spoiler-Emblem In reply to TakaraxDaydreamer [2013-03-03 02:33:10 +0000 UTC]

You better have

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TakaraxDaydreamer In reply to Spoiler-Emblem [2013-03-03 02:36:13 +0000 UTC]

I did ^^

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kamikamiya [2013-03-03 02:28:21 +0000 UTC]

It must be rough having a stalker who is also a ninja (Don't know how Nightbird put up with it all these years).

Cute comic!

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Spoiler-Emblem In reply to kamikamiya [2013-03-03 02:29:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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