Comments: 9
Macbow333 [2018-12-20 04:41:06 +0000 UTC]
Neat story prologue. I haven't read FOE, but I've picked up a lot of things from fandom osmosis and a little searching on my own. I've got a real bad feeling about what's just happened to our POV mare and her marefriend in light of what I know about the megaspells.
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MelonSeed11 [2018-12-20 01:08:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow this is really cool! I hope you continue with it! I’m really liking it so far.
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SpokenMind93 In reply to MelonSeed11 [2018-12-20 01:11:59 +0000 UTC]
I'm gonna certainly gonna try to continue it.
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Union4014 [2018-12-19 23:02:00 +0000 UTC]
Just read it. It is certainly more polished, timing of events isn't rushed. If you were to continue I would read it. Overall your story so far is pretty good.
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Union4014 In reply to SpokenMind93 [2018-12-19 23:27:16 +0000 UTC]
I believe it is. Hope you can continue if you have the time.
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