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robereth [2016-12-19 03:03:39 +0000 UTC]
Nice cliffhanger, good introduction. A few spelling errors here and there, but you can still understand them in context.
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Spootyheads In reply to robereth [2016-12-19 03:07:27 +0000 UTC]
I'm going to sleep soon, any suggestions any comments, and I ask you, if any mistakes tell me where, I anticipate the criticism! I can handle it!
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Spootyheads In reply to robereth [2016-12-19 03:05:18 +0000 UTC]
Did you read part 1?
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robereth In reply to Spootyheads [2016-12-19 04:45:28 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I've read up to 6
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Spootyheads In reply to robereth [2016-12-19 14:04:23 +0000 UTC]
There's 7 currently, and maybe today I'll submit part 8
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Spootyheads In reply to BrowsingChipmunk [2016-11-19 15:29:38 +0000 UTC]
Ty so much for your feedback. I'm a newbie here, plus my handwriting is horrible, and internet is limited, so therefore I have to hand write the story, spell check, then type it and submit it. I am still working on the story... Any ideas to add, all ears
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