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Published: 2004-09-10 23:41:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 545; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 174
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charger to the new cell phone my wife just bought for me
modeled and rendered in C4D, render time: 7:15 min/sec
no post work
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Comments: 34
i'm currently using your image on my blog page. i've only just started and was wondering if i could cite you.
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Awesome, and holy shit, you made that fast. I wish I was that good in 3Ds max. I am learning through lynda tutorials and from a proffesional graphics designer friend. Anyways this is really nice. a few things could be made nicer but for the time you spent on this it is amazing!
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actually this was made in c4d, before my max era began, this is actually one of my very first models. i am glad you like it.
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thanks man i appreciate you checkin it out.
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gracias. lo siento no hablo espanol
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thanks for lookin man i agree about the reflection. i'll tone it down next time
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maybe a little bit too much reflect on the floor but still quite realistic
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WTF the chord is like that when its new!!! u see when u get summin like that new, its got the black pladtic thing wrapped round it, so wen u take it off its gonna be angular..
so i think GREAT job!!!
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lol thank you so much for the comment, i didnt want to argue with anyone so i didnt mention that that is exactly how the chord was. nice job on picking up on that. i appreciate you taking a look!!
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Looks great man. Id just change the reflection on the prong, looks like its outdoors. Other than that it looks great.
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ya thats a good point, and you are right cause its a hdr of the woods. maybe i could tone it done a bit. thanks for the comment!!
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thanks man, trying my best. thanks for looking.
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great modelling and texturing, apart from the floor - perhaps a bit too "perfectly" reflective, if you are going for realism - try to reduce reflection and add a subtle bumpmap, which adds linear bumps (as if to simulate the "grain" of the varnish)... make the bends in the wire slightly more curved - the bends seem a little unnatural. Very good peice overall though
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wow i really appreciate your in depth comment. i will definetly work on it and you are absolutely correct about the floor reflectivity, and i do need to add a slight bump. by the way i saw your gate model on the 3dluvr site, very interesting stuff...great work.
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did u try sum sweep NURB modelling for the cable? very nice btw
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yes, it is just a simple spline with a sweep on it, then copied and moved over a bit. thanks for looking!!
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ur avatar is what caught my attention
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Very cool - how do you do modeling like that, like with the cord & such....? I'm trying to learn...
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well for the chord i just made a squigly spline and then swept it with a circle spline. then i copied that and moved it over a bit so it looks like 2 wires. let me know if you have any other questions. good luck!
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very cool, the wire/cable is a little too stiff, but seems its new you could let it slide because it was folded up for packeging
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Awesome work, I'd have to pick on the cord as well but everything else looks pretty good!!! I really like the bump map on the wall.
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hey thanx for commenting, ya ill take a look at the chord and see what i can do.
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If i had to be LOOKING for areas of improvement... I'd say that the chord could be a bit
smoother and fluid. It kinda looks too angular and .....(a rushy modeling job) for lack
of better wording 
It's a great job...nice work.
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you are the second person to comment on the chord so ill definetely take a look at it and see what i can do. thanks for taking your time to comment.
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Hehehe... digital art gets highly picked on for flaws... they leave us NO margin for error
Keep up the good work!
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word
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hey thanks alot, appreciate the comment!!
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