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Published: 2004-09-20 00:55:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 444; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 108
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its ok,i like the pen but could not get the plastic lead holder to look good o'well, outa time school is starting so fun level is about to drop. let me know what you think.modled and rendered in c4d.
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This is nice, I really like the detail! Adding to my faves.
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thank you very much, i am glad you like.
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i dunno, it looks pretty damned real. maybe its not very shiny and thats why you're disappointed, lol.
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well thank you, i appreciate you looking...im gonna work on it still so we'll see what happens
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I like it man, nice job
Has a tad of unrealistic lighting.. sorry, being very critical here 
Did you try the sharpen filter??, dunno if that might add some, but you can always try it!
Cheers and keep up the good work..
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you are right the lighting sucks, it was one of those things where i just wanted to finish it, and get it over with. i appreciate you being critical, it is the only way for me to get better. and no i did not use the sharpen filter, are you talking photo shop? but maybe i should. thanks for the constructive critisism!
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Hey. thanks for your reply!
No, i was talking about the sharpness filter in the effecs tab of your render settings.
It's a strong filter so if you are going to use it, set the amount to a max. of 15 wich is prolly already to high.
I got your note...
It's kinda hard to explain lighting since it's a process if trial and error most of the times.
I think a 3 point lighting setup can be very good, but here are some tips.
if you are going to use a 3-point lighting setup, add 2 HDRI sky''s to your scene.
with some reflection on your materials, this will help you give a little more specular to your scene.
I ussually use a GI lighting setup with HDRI for realism, but lights is a process that im not that good at yet.....
To get a nice white background, make a white material for your floor and background object and add a compositing tag to those with compostiting background marked in the attributes of the tag.....
Hope this helped a bit......
Cheers!
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thank you very much for the pointers i really appreciate you sharing. ill try to rework this one when i get a chance.
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No prob man, always willing to lend a hand.
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thanks man, im not 100% happy, but its getting better. thanks for looking!!
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