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Goldentendo [2010-11-20 22:31:46 +0000 UTC]
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YIPPEE MY FIRST CRITIQUE~
Anyways....Okay. The picture. ouo
I think the best thing about this picture is that you haven't given it a central focus like what I see in LOTS of pictures. You made it look more of a natural image by having him in a pose that is more realistic than it would be if you were to center him in the middle of the picture, and he has a more serious look this way, too! Keep doing this with different positions and poses in future images.
Also...the fire? AMAZING. You've given it a fantastic flame effect! Although a background color would have made the picture "pop" more, probably a red, hot color along with lots of black to match with the picture's theme as a whole. The wings could have also had a slightly different position, maybe the second wing on the other side of him, but it's not like that matters, lol. Other than that, you kept this at a good tone! The red, furious eyes, the fighting position, the fire, all say "RAGE" to me, it's fantastic. c:
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BlackTheLight [2010-12-29 21:29:22 +0000 UTC]
How thoughtful of you.....o3o
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xela145 [2010-11-28 09:34:48 +0000 UTC]
ouo he's kinda cute. *lolwut*
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Elnamis [2010-11-20 22:43:57 +0000 UTC]
Very Cool!
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Goldentendo [2010-11-20 22:14:41 +0000 UTC]
.....XDD How did I know it was gonna be him? c: lol
GJ on him too. oUo
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