weremole [2011-11-26 21:54:20 +0000 UTC]
The problem is that the pose is really rigid when everything should curve with the punch to give it more oomph. The fist and forearm of the punching arm is a bit to straight to imply the curve the force would have been traveling. This idea is called the "line of action". Look it up, it's a very handy guideline.
Your Michael Turner torso is also showing. Nothing wrong with having inspirations, just make sure you know how a real torso looks like so you understand why Turner drew them that way. From this you will later be able to draw your own torsos and your own Supergirl torso.
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spushan In reply to weremole [2011-11-27 00:06:22 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the critic man, I agree with your opinion...this is my first supergirl's drawing and did take me some time decide a pose for she...
I'm really bad drawing torsos...that´s why I take some inspiration from the turner's style
however, thanks again for the comment...draw is my main hobby and your opinion is very useful !!
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