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TiBaY [2009-01-26 17:27:15 +0000 UTC]
Yo! :°D
The global shading line is pretty good, it really gives a club-lights effect, maybe I would have drawn thinner lines on the hips and on the bellybutton, but that's only my sensation. I really like the texture on the skirt and I love the jolly roger on the belt, it's brilliant!
Otherwise I don't like the texture on the hat, it looks flat, like it was made out of paper...I would put some shading into that!
The blue eyes are great but I'd add a little more colour on her face, and again some light/shadow, maybe on her cheek.
You should work on her hair too, but you already said that yourself so...I guess that's all I have to say. lol
Hope my suggestions will help you! ^3^ ~ciao!
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spyderbankai In reply to TiBaY [2009-01-27 01:00:35 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a ton for the hints and suggestions, I can't believe I forgot to shade the hat =O
I worked a lil on shading the face, but when it came out weird I pulled it back a lot and went for light highlights, but I guess they arent really noticable. I've got an idea of somethin to try on the hair too. I'll leave this one up though and put up a v2 when I throw in the addtions. Thanks again though, this is really goin to help me progress. XD
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Spacecowboytv [2009-01-26 06:48:37 +0000 UTC]
Looking good. I think your shading is coming along nicely. Her hip line that you've draw really adds to the form and helps the pose of the drawing. Nice work
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spyderbankai In reply to Spacecowboytv [2009-01-27 00:54:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you Thank you, its great to get confimation of progress from people who really know what they're doin. =3
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