Comments: 23
Gumbogamer [2008-04-30 18:50:57 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh so this is the one. I know you did it first semester and the year's over so I won't crit. But it did turn out nice!
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SquirrelHunter17 In reply to Gumbogamer [2008-04-30 21:44:45 +0000 UTC]
It is one of my favorites, and by all means, crit away.
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gibsart [2008-02-12 23:30:31 +0000 UTC]
That's great, i like the colours you've chosen.
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ROAR-productions [2007-12-11 13:54:41 +0000 UTC]
classic the coolest robot ever undoubtedly i still haven't given the film ago to be honest, was this done in painter?
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BlackPac [2007-11-12 18:39:19 +0000 UTC]
I like the smudgey style, but I think the face could've been done better. but it's still really good
Robbie the Robot sound really familiar, but I have no idea from where...I've never even heard of the movie
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Miss-Rue [2007-11-05 21:19:05 +0000 UTC]
Where is that purple light coming from? Your value range is still a little off as well.
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ParaAbduction51 [2007-10-23 17:57:01 +0000 UTC]
Yeee!
I agree with people telling you to push stuff back.
But the robot.
Ohmigawd.
It's so neat.
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SquirrelHunter17 In reply to AngryPotato [2007-10-23 16:18:12 +0000 UTC]
I'll push the moon back some more, but I like the perspective, it's....odd
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Miss-Rue [2007-10-23 04:53:01 +0000 UTC]
I think you need more solid form in the background objects like the saucer, etc. Your edges are really blurry, too, so sharpen those up. The color palette isnt bad, but you have two different light sources- and the moon wouldnt cast that strong of a light, anyway. Plus, everything is too saturated. Mute some of your colors and you'll have a better value structure.
Hope that helps.
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SquirrelHunter17 In reply to Miss-Rue [2007-10-23 04:56:17 +0000 UTC]
and I just got 3 people telling me to push the saucer back :\
I am going to try and mute the colors a little and define that amorphous shape in the background...
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HomieBear [2007-10-23 04:40:36 +0000 UTC]
I love ole Robbie. I got no criticisms for you it looks good.
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HomieBear In reply to SquirrelHunter17 [2007-10-23 04:42:42 +0000 UTC]
Nah, I'm not a painter or much of a visual artist so anything I could say would be pretty lame.
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SquirrelHunter17 In reply to HomieBear [2007-10-23 04:45:48 +0000 UTC]
Your opinion is still valuable, you will notice things that other's can't...
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HomieBear In reply to SquirrelHunter17 [2007-10-23 04:54:39 +0000 UTC]
Well, maybe move that one moon away from his antenna, just so the antenna has its own . . . what would you call it, point of reference or something. Know what I mean?
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SquirrelHunter17 In reply to HomieBear [2007-10-23 04:57:03 +0000 UTC]
The antenna isn't important enough, I think...
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