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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-27 21:20:52 +0000 UTC]
As I run into the safari park, I can see a thin wisp of smoke rising in the distance and I go towards it.
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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-27 22:11:07 +0000 UTC]
*The smoke that you see has a different color to it
as you run towards it. The smoke gets thick as you
run into the middle of it. You realize that the smoke you ran into
is actually dust from the sandy dirt on the ground.
The dust starts to clear and you are in a real safari with a lake
on the left of you, a few jungle tree growing in a bunch
close together at the right of you and a heard of elephants at least
8-tons each behind you that doesn't notice you. The trees
start rustling startling you.*
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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-28 01:01:28 +0000 UTC]
I stand frozen in fear for a few seconds, before continuing towards the jungle, sheepishly.
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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-28 23:05:11 +0000 UTC]
*You see a trunk peer out of the trees. A large head appears
in front of you at almost seven feet high from the tusks.*
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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-28 23:10:54 +0000 UTC]
*You hear the horn bellowing of the three elephants that are 100 feet behind you.
The dust completely settles and they see the elephant in front of you.
You're so skinny and small that they don't notice you from a distance.
They start to come towards the elephant.*
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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-28 23:41:08 +0000 UTC]
I freeze in fear! I need to get away from those 3, if they charge I wouldn't stand a chance. I look up at the learge elephent in front of me straight in the eye, asking for help silently with just eye contact.
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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-28 23:45:02 +0000 UTC]
*The elephant sees the three elephants charging at him.
He stands up. 10 feet tall from the tusks.*
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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-29 22:03:15 +0000 UTC]
*The elephant looks dead at the 3 large elephants coming towards
him. He whips his trunk upwards and stands on his hind legs to give
a bellowing yell. Simultaneously, his trunk catches you between your
legs and smacks your crotch while flipping your skinny body 25 feet up
in the air. The 12 ton elephant bellows and his front legs land on the
ground. You land face first and spread eagle on the back of the beast.*
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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-29 22:09:01 +0000 UTC]
The force of the landing knocked the wind out of me, it takes some moments for me to work out whats just happened. And my privates ache!
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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-29 22:31:28 +0000 UTC]
*Just as you were trying to catch your breath through the pain
in your crotch, the three elephants try ramming the large elephant.
The jolt startled you while on the back of the pachyderm. One
elephant rams the right thigh of the beast while the other rams
the left shoulder, making the elephant spin around enough to have you
slide from his back and have you hanging on the elephant's right tusk
with your shorts.*
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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-29 23:00:06 +0000 UTC]
*The elephant whips his head upwards causing your skinny body to fly upwards
once again. As the three elephants converge on main pachyderm from his sides
and his front, you land hard, face first, on the back of the pachyderm with your body
accordion-ed into a scorpion pose with your bare feet almost touching the back of
your head. Your body collapses in a face-down spread eagle position as the three
8-ton elephants struggle with the 12-ton pachyderm.*
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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-29 23:19:33 +0000 UTC]
*One elephant, of a bluish gray color, slams into the pachyderm from
the right causing you to slide to the right side of its back, your right
hand manages to go down the right side of the beast. The bluish-gray
elephant slams into the pachyderm, flattening your right hand as you
push your way back to the middle of its back again.*
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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-29 23:29:57 +0000 UTC]
I felt a sharp pain then numbness from my flattened right hand, I re-double my efforts to stay on and try to keep myself in the middle of the pachyderms back. Curse those smaller elephants!
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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-29 23:39:09 +0000 UTC]
*The pushing and shoving of the three elephants makes the large pachyderm
shift and shake. The pachyderm charges into the three elephants with such
force that your skinny body slides head-on to the back of the pachyderm's
head. The elephants has a push war against the might beast causing him to
start standing on its hind legs. Your groggy skinny body starts to slide
towards the 12-ton pachyderm's backside.*
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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-30 17:53:03 +0000 UTC]
*Behind the pachyderm is hill that drops at a fifteen degree angle
at the edge of the hill. You hold on to the back of the beast as it
stands straight up on its hind legs and starts to tip backwards
with the the other three elephants pushing the pachyderm. With one
big push, the three elephants push the pachyderm making the 12-ton
beast fall backwards. The three 8-ton elephants lose their footing from
the push and starts to roll on their sides passed the edge of the hill
just as the pachyderm slams on its back, leaving your skinny body
flush between the pachyderms back and the grassy-sandy hill.*
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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-08-01 13:11:28 +0000 UTC]
I held my breath and closed my eyes with fear as the pachyderm stood on it's hind legs. I couldn't hug the beast any harder if I tried, I turned my head to the side and lay my cheek tight against the pachyderms back, eyes still clamped shut!. Then I felt the world tip over, I opened my eyes to the world turning up side down, with the ground racing up towards me!
Everything seemed to go in very slow motion; I felt the crunching squish from my pelvis being squashed and flattened like a soft crunchy dough. , I felt my insides slowly squelch as my thin body was squeezed and flattened like a toothpaste tube onto the beasts back, I felt my chest crunch as my thin rib cage squashed wafer thin and flat, I saw the ground and elephant come together as I felt the sides of my face being squashed together and squeezed flat between them as my head was crushed thinner than a pancake!.
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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-08-01 20:45:25 +0000 UTC]
*The impact of the pachyderms back to the ground was
like a loud SPLAP!! sound. On impact, none of your
skinny body was seen as the squeezed flush between its back
and the ground. The incline of the hill sloped a few degrees more
as the pachyderm's back lifted off the ground. Soon the pachyderm
starts to roll on its neck, which sports a extremely flattened
barefoot spread-eagle skinny boy tattooed on the back of the pachyderm
in an upside-down position. The pachyderm is on its head, but its
momentum causes it to roll on its trunk and tusks. it rolled on its
fore legs and then on its hind legs. Instead of landing on its butt, it continues
backwards and about slam even harder on its back than the first
impact.*
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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-08-04 23:48:04 +0000 UTC]
As feel the sensation of movement almost of flying, and I feel the warm jungle air rushing over my flattened body as the beast rolls over. I then realise the rolling is not going to stop as feel myself tilting into the same position just before I got squished into a sticker on the beasts back. I feel butterflies in my flat tummy with the thought of being squeezed a second time!
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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-08-04 23:50:42 +0000 UTC]
*The impact was more severe but this time it had less
crunching effect on your bones. Your flattened body has become
somewhat wider during the second squishing. Again, your body can't be seen
from the elephant's squish while the other three elephants roll behind it. *
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TikiTako [2014-07-08 05:08:34 +0000 UTC]
I'd love to see you return to the cheerleader and come up with a new way to crush her.
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Squishjunkie In reply to TikiTako [2014-07-09 20:18:50 +0000 UTC]
You're slowly giving me a brainstorm of an idea.
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Sleeves1991 [2014-06-30 11:29:25 +0000 UTC]
It's really hard to read without any spacing sadly.
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Sleeves1991 In reply to Squishjunkie [2014-07-01 23:25:06 +0000 UTC]
That's better but it's still straining.
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Squishjunkie In reply to Sleeves1991 [2015-06-26 22:02:04 +0000 UTC]
I did this while reading it. It was easier to follow for me as well.
I'll have to make a mental note of this for future reference.
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DutchieRose In reply to Squishjunkie [2014-06-18 21:28:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh I see! That's nice hearing this. Did she like it?
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