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                                         voodoo, witchcraft and an extreme flattening
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                                     Pachyderm Peril
                                     by Squishjunkie                      
   

    As the whites of her eyes seems to glow, her pupils rolled back under her eyelids.
Her body convulsed and jittered as the voodoo transformation towards immortality was
almost complete. Her body collapsed onto the dusty ground on her right side in the
middle of the circle the voodoo doctor created for his final chant. The two tribeswomen
chanted louder and stronger as Kristen’s body slowly bent and contorted to the point
where her left arm twisted behind her back and the fingers on her hand spread out,
shaking and pointing in a wild spastic motion. Her legs shivering uncontrollably seem to
bend back further to the point where her dainty small feet were touching the top of her
head. Her neck and back bent backwards even further as the balls of her feet quivered
and slid down her face as her eyes widened and her mouth still wide open from the
coughing earlier during the ritual. The faint smoke coming from the front of her neck
slowly subsided as Kristen bellowed one final scream to which her body went completely
limp and collapsed in her frantic contorted position. The two native women yelled a
final chant as the voodoo doctor shook the glowing oval crystal at the end of his staff over
the still body of Kristen.

The voodoo man leaned over her half-naked contorted body, lightly shaking his staff,
and reached towards the front of her openly exposed throat. The native women looked on
with there eyes wide open and a big wide open grin on their faces as they inched closer
behind the back of the head of the unconscious woman, but not to close to disturb the
voodoo man. He reached slowly towards Kristen’s throat and gently touched the small
gold band around her neck. The band was still warm. With his right hand, he reached at his
staff and pulled from it a razor sharp animal’s tooth not more than four inches long.
He then brought the tooth towards Kristen’s neck and rested the point of the tooth at
the base of the band. With the native women on their knees in the dirt, they watched with
solemn excitement as the voodoo doctor carefully slipped the tooth between the band and
Kristen’s throat. He gave the tooth a twist so that the sharp side was slightly
stretching the band. From that moment the man slowly inhaled. When he exhaled, he gave the
tooth a yank upwards cutting the band. The two native women moved up towards the throat
of Kristen. The voodoo doctor spread his arms wide as he raised his staff and did a quiet
chant smiling as the women knelled down in front of the strange but enchantingly contorted
body of Kristen and bowed. The small band around her neck has burnt an etching of the same
engravings found behind the band as it was removed. The gold lasing burnt completely
around her soft, supple neck with the display of a black crescent moon, the etching of a
gold sunrise on the horizon and a symbol consisting of four figure-eights lined up to
look like a cross. The two figure-eights are stacked vertically, one on top of another, with
one figure-eight laying horizontally on top of the second figure-eight. The last figure-eight
stands vertically on top, completing the cross, and is set burnt in between two circles that
overlap each other on the front of her throat measuring less than an inch wide. The voodoo man
gave a faint smile for he knew the transformation was not complete without a true test from
nature itself.

He thought to himself that the beautiful but limp-bodied woman was a small gift from the
heavens. Her skinny figure, long luscious legs and smooth facial features almost match the
hieroglyphic of the princess on the rock walls before reaching his voodoo covenant. A rush
of dust swirled with the mighty slam of the bottom of his staff in the dirt. The two
native women, while admiring the marking on Kristen’s neck, quickly stood at attention
awaiting the doctor’s orders. In his native tongue, he ordered the women to tie
Kristen’s small wrists together, and then doing the same thing to her daintily toned
ankles. The two women unraveled and straightened out Kristen’s body and did what
the doctor ordered. Then they took a 6-foot long tree limb-like post and stuck it between
Kristen’s smooth luscious legs and in between her delicate arms. The two women split
up to each end of the post, each grabbing an end, and lifting the post in the air while
Kristen’s limp floppy body hung from her hands and feet. They carried Kristen’s body
to a large flat rock far away over a small hill where it can’t be seen from the voodoo
doctor’s cove. The rock was only a foot high and 6-feet round. The two women laid
Kristen’s body on her back in the center of the rock, cutting the ties that bind her
wrists and ankles, and spread her arm and legs wide erotically exposing her 3-inch wide
tan suede-leather tank top that wrapped around her chest showing the bottom half of her
b-cup sized breast while slightly covering her supple nipples.

~                                            

   Kristen slowly woke up with her head in a daze. She looked over her surroundings and
found herself in open safari terrain with a flowing stream in front of her. To her right,
was a small ledge which dropped a foot’s length looking down a small hill. She slowly
got up of the rock and readjusted her g-string loincloth brown bikini bottom which had a
small tear in the crotch area caused by her writhing body during the ritual. Just thirty
feet to her left downstream, she saw a herd of elephants bathing in the hot sun. Kristen
tip-toed quietly without the elephants knowing and went towards the stream for a drink.
Softly stroking her neck feeling dry from thirst she felt something strange. She looked
at her reflection in the water and to her surprise she found her tattooed etching on her
throat. She was immediately startled by the rustle in the trees behind her. She was afraid
to look behind her thinking in her mind, “Could it be a lion or a cheetah?"

  A quick thought entered her head from what happened earlier in the day. She thought
about the talk she had with a village woman who spoke in broken English about an African
natural wildlife safari company that went out of business. She thought of how they left
the safari pristine where only elephants ruled that part of the land. With a slow bite of
her upper lip and thinking the happiest thought possible, Kristen slowly turned around.
Just over her left shoulder, she saw a huge big-headed beast of an elephant poking its
head out of the trees. She recognized the huge mammal as the elephant she fed green leafy
stalks to from outside of the huge shelter that it was in. She remembered his 6-foot long
ivory tusks. She also remembered the light grayish skin colored sun on the middle of the
mammoth’s darkish-gray-skinned forehead. Kristen smiled and went over to the mighty
beast. The elephant reached over to Kristen with his trunk and caressed her small slightly
visible cleavage. His trunk was wider than her nipples were spaced apart from each other.
“You’re such a beautiful elephant.” She said. “But I never had a chance
to see the rest of you. I only saw your head.” She looked up at the tusk of the elephant
knowing she could jump up and barely touch the middle of it like she did outside of its
shelter at the village. She stretched as far as her 5’5” inch body could go.
The elephant gave Kristen a slight push to her chest with his trunk. She stumbled back
and fell on her smooth skinny bottom. She went to lean to the right to push herself up
and looked below the small bushy trees that the elephant was poking his head out of.
Goose pimples jumped all over her skin when she noticed that the elephant was not standing
up. He was still crouched on its knees. The mighty beast slowly got up and looked down
upon little Kristen. She looked in horror at the size of the elephant. Its back was at
least 11 feet high and with a massively round body. Its weight could clear 8 tons easy.

 Two of the elephants at the other end of the stream noticed this freakishly huge pachyderm
and started charging at it. They were male elephants who were very territorial and did not
want any of the females of the herd to be taken from them for it was mating season.
Instinctively, the huge massive beast swiped his trunk towards Kristen who was already
frozen with fear, wrapped it around her body like a coiling python and flipped her 99 pound
body in the air as if it was tossing a toothpick. She landed on its enormous head and
slid down the bridge of its trunk towards the base of its tusks. She quickly climbed up
to the top of its head when she felt a hard jerk from her right side. One of the male
elephants tried push the mighty beast down. To her it felt like a fender bender in a car
accident. The second elephant charged from the left side. By this time Kristen was thinking
of whether to make a jump for it from behind the massive beast for she was so high above
ground she was sure she might twist an ankle. The elephants looked to be young at
4-and-a half tons each but they seemed to be dwarfed by this huge beast. Kristen thought
for sure that she was going to be trampled on.

As wide as the body this beast was, Kristen had nothing to hold on to if she was to stay
on top of this elephant. The only thing she could do was to lie down on her belly with her
arms and legs spread wide on the back of the beast to even her balance so the other
elephants won’t knock her off when they start ramming. The nimble male pachyderms
circled the mighty beast as Kristen watched, too afraid to scream. Just then the mighty
beast stood up on its hind legs and bellowed loudly at the male elephants making Kristen
slide slowly towards the ass-end of the beast. One of the elephants started to ram the
beast from behind. Kristen quickly scrambled stumblingly up the back of the huge mastodon
when all of a sudden, WHAM! There was another jolt coming from the back of the beast from
the charging elephant. The jolt shook Kristen and made her land on her stomach smacking
her face on the back of the beast. With her ears ringing from the jolt, without thought
she laid spread eagle again on her stomach and began to squeeze her arms and her legs
around the back of the mighty pachyderm, but Its massive girth was too wide for Kristen.
If you looked up at Kristen on the beast from the ground on either side, you could barely
see her toes or her fingers. Another jolt came from the left side of the beast. Like a pot
of water boiling over, Kristen’s adrenaline went off the charts. With her heart
pounding heavily, she squeezed her arms and sank her fingers into the beast with all of
her might. Kristen's dainty feet followed as she squeezed her legs like the jaws of an
alligator. Her heels pressed downward hard, sinking into it's skin while her toes spread
out and dug into the back of the beast like a pouncing lion clamping its claws down the
back of its prey. The elephants rammed the beast again and again with the beast returning
the favor.

 With its back to the stream, the beast went to charge at the smaller elephant with bellowing
rage when he was caught of guard by the other elephant ramming at him from his right side.
It knocked the beast slightly off balance towards the ledge. Kristen lifted her head and
turned it to the left to look. Her body tensed up as another jolt shook the beast from the
front which made the beast slip from his left back foot over the ledge causing him to lose
his balance. Kristen’s eyes widened as she seen the earth beneath her sink and then
slowly rise as if she was in the front car of a roller-coaster just before it made its
decent. She screamed and turned her head to the right. The last thing she saw was the two
elephants at the ledge before she saw them slowly sink behind the belly of the beast, for
the beast lost its balance a final time and fell over to the left side of its freakishly
massive body crushing and flattening the left side of Kristen’s foot, slowly rolling
on her heal and up her toes flattening them like pizza dough. With the beast rolling
towards his back, it flattened her shins embedding it while her fingers on her left hand,
still sunken in its skin, began to get crushed and flattened onto the back of the beast
like chewing gum on the bottom of a shoe. In unison, as the elephant flattened her wrist
and lower left arm, her soft delectable calves were mashed flatter than a pancake up
towards the left knee.

The roll of the beast continued as Kristen’s once silky smooth skinned left arm was
a mere squashed toothpaste tube as it squashed and flattened it up to the left shoulder
while at the same time, the roll thinly crushed the knee like paste and squeezed out her
once muscle toned, cheerleader like thighs as thin as paper up to her skinny bodacious
butt. In synchronicity, her left shoulder and her left buttocks was crushed flatter than
tissue as the roll of the beast flattened the middle of her back and squashed the beautiful
flawless face of Kristen not from the front, but from the side. From her right eye, she
could see the ground come up quickly as she could feel the left side of her head slowly
crush onto the massive back of the beast. She could feel her jaws, face, eyes and neck
slowly squeeze together as one as the pachyderm’s roll squashed them flatter than a
soft taco shell rendering. With the sight from her right eye in temporary darkness, the
beast's full weight thinly flattened Kristen's nose while at the same time flattening the
right side of her back and right buttocks embedding the soon to be paper thin girl on the
back of the beast while its feet are in the air. Kristen’s body writhed almost in
ecstasy as she felt the crushing pop in her back. There was a numbing feeling all over
the left side of her body she never felt before. Something was saving her that day. Her
sweat juices slowly expelled from every part her body as the same flattening repeated for
the right side of Kristen only quite the opposite. In unison, it was her right shoulder,
the right side of her back and her right buttocks that was crushed with the same loud
crack and pop. The roll continued, thinly mashing her right arm and flatly squeezing her
right thigh. It proceeded down her elbow squashing it flat while smashing her arm thinly
up to her right wrist the same time her right knee felt the same flattening fate squishing
it like putty, squashing her gorgeous calves like a fruit roll-up towards her right ankle.
The final demise ended with her soft, supple right wrist feeling the crush and crackle,
then the flattening of her right hand and the pulverizing of her right ankle embedding it
onto the beast like a tattoo. Her fingers did its final crack and crunch. Her right foot
made its final sound as the roll of the beast flattened the ankle, rolled the instep and
big toe of her right foot mashing it into the pachyderm’s skin flattening each toe
one by one till the pinky toe was last thing heard with a small “scritch sound.”

 The elephant staggered to get up on its feet when he lost his footing and began to
tumble. As Kristen’s right eye slowly opened all she could see was the sky. The left
side of her face was buried in the back of the beast like a sticker. She thought her
perilous flattening fate was at its end when all of a sudden she saw the earth appear over
the back of the mighty elephant again. She saw the ground as it leveled out in front of
her and then disappear to the right side of the beast. The mighty pachyderm lost its
footing and landed on its left side and continued rolling down the hill again. The beast
did two more complete rolls but there was hardly any crackling and crunching sounds heard
from the defenselessly pasted girl. With the second roll it plastered Kristen’s once skinny
athletic body flat in the skin of the beast like wallpaper. The second roll of the elephant
seemed to reduce her bones to powder. The third roll finalized it. By this time, poor
Kristen looked like a flat, wide decal and the car window was the elephant's back. The
peril was finally over. The elephant regained its footing but felt weary from being
double-teamed by the two elephants and the beating its body took from rolling down the hill.
The beast was so tired that it didn’t notice the sweaty genital juice-squeezed doily
stuck on his back that was once the athletic high school cheerleader body of Kristen. From
the view of the top of her back, the flatly sprawled out body looked peaceful as the
elephant slowly and gingerly walked around the hill back to the tiny village. During the
walk back, a strange thing happened. Could the squished flat head of the cheerleader show
any response? Between the sticky grass stains on her paper thin body, Kristen's right
eyelid slowly rose showing the white of her right eye like a faded crescent moon in the sky.
A faint glow of the baby blue hue of her iris peek out from under her eyelid like a
slowly rising sun. With her vision blurry, her mind was clouded and disoriented as if to
not know if she was alive or dead, but her slow eye movement told her otherwise. She has
no clue of knowing if the transformation was a success or a failure, but the sensitive
feeling from the air breezing off the back of her flattened body tells her otherwise.
Her situation will soon fair up when she and the mighty pachyderm get back to the village.
For now, all Kristen can see are the sky and the tree limbs passing over with some of them
brushing and tickling from her bottom to head of her flattened body.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                               The End?
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Comments: 79

Squishjunkie In reply to ??? [2022-06-09 00:52:18 +0000 UTC]

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LoganBigDumb In reply to Squishjunkie [2022-06-09 00:56:03 +0000 UTC]

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Squishjunkie In reply to LoganBigDumb [2022-06-09 00:56:51 +0000 UTC]

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SkinnyHarry [2016-07-26 18:10:57 +0000 UTC]

That is an out standing description of being squashed!

 I only wish it was me being squeezed and flattened!

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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-27 20:33:32 +0000 UTC]

I did have comments about the flattening being in detail.

You'll  have to be in a safari with the elephant in question.

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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-27 20:41:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeh, all good from what I have read comment wise here

And packing my bags already, next flight booked...

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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-27 20:53:10 +0000 UTC]

Make sure you dress extremely light. It is a scorcher weather-wise
out their in the safari.

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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-27 20:59:22 +0000 UTC]

I'll be in just my shorts, no shirt or foot wear. My thin, slender body will be for all to see, and likely make fun of!

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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-27 21:07:01 +0000 UTC]

I don't think elephants can make fun of your skinny body.
In this situation, the two elephants will be almost the same
weight as the main elephant in the story. Two 8-ton elephants
going after the 8-ton elephant that you're on top of.

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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-27 21:11:37 +0000 UTC]

True, (I was thinking of all the other folks about, from the airport to the safari driver and to the folks in the village)! I think too much!

Well, will the oversized elephant I'm on handle the attack, or will it end up like previous!

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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-27 21:17:19 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, that is funny about the airport. You get a lot of fingers pointing at your
skinny body and you just want to get away from all the people from the
airport and from the village and just want to get away from it all. The safari
would be perfect. The people in the safari bus would make fun of your skinny body
while they ride in the safari park. You get off the bus and run through the safari
park but then you go off the grid away from the park and into an actual safari.
The one involving the elephants mentioned.

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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-27 21:20:52 +0000 UTC]

As I run into the safari park, I can see a thin wisp of smoke rising in the distance and I go towards it.

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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-27 22:11:07 +0000 UTC]

*The smoke that you see has a different color to it
as you run towards it. The smoke gets thick as you 
run into the middle of it. You realize that the smoke you ran into
is actually dust from the sandy dirt on the ground.
The dust starts to clear and you are in a real safari with a lake
on the left of you, a few jungle tree growing in a bunch
close together at the right of you and a heard of elephants at least
8-tons each behind you that doesn't notice you. The trees
start rustling startling you.*

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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-28 01:01:28 +0000 UTC]

I stand frozen in fear for a few seconds, before continuing towards the jungle, sheepishly.

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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-28 23:05:11 +0000 UTC]

*You see a trunk peer out of the trees. A large head appears
in front of you at almost seven feet high from the tusks.*

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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-28 23:08:41 +0000 UTC]

I stop and look up at the huge head in amazment!

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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-28 23:10:54 +0000 UTC]

*You hear the horn bellowing of the three elephants that are 100 feet behind you.
The dust completely settles and they see the elephant in front of you.
You're so skinny and small that they don't notice you from a distance.
They start to come towards the elephant.*

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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-28 23:41:08 +0000 UTC]

I freeze in fear! I need to get away from those 3, if they charge I wouldn't stand a chance. I look up at the learge elephent in front of me straight in the eye, asking for help silently with just eye contact.

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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-28 23:45:02 +0000 UTC]

*The elephant sees the three elephants charging at him.
He stands up. 10 feet tall from the tusks.*

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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-28 23:55:28 +0000 UTC]

I look up at him still, arms out reached, hoping he will pick me up with his trunk and move me out of harms way.

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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-29 22:03:15 +0000 UTC]

*The elephant looks dead at the 3 large elephants coming towards
him. He whips his trunk upwards and stands on his hind legs to give
a bellowing yell. Simultaneously, his trunk catches you between your
legs and smacks your crotch while flipping your skinny body 25 feet up
in the air. The 12 ton elephant bellows and his front legs land on the
ground. You land face first and spread eagle on the back of the beast.*

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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-29 22:09:01 +0000 UTC]

The force of the landing knocked the wind out of me, it takes some moments for me to work out whats just happened. And my privates ache!

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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-29 22:31:28 +0000 UTC]

*Just as you were trying to catch your breath through the pain
in your crotch, the three elephants try ramming the large elephant.
The jolt startled you while on the back of the pachyderm. One
elephant rams the right thigh of the beast while the other rams
the left shoulder, making the elephant spin around enough to have you
slide from his back and have you hanging on the elephant's right tusk
with your shorts.*

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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-29 22:46:13 +0000 UTC]

I see the world spinning around me! But I manage to see enough to try and grab hold of the tusk and make an attempt at clambering back up! The adreniline thats running through me is giving strength I never knew I had! I gotta get back up there or I'm dead!

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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-29 23:00:06 +0000 UTC]

*The elephant whips his head upwards causing your skinny body to fly upwards
once again. As the three elephants converge on main pachyderm from his sides
and his front, you land hard, face first, on the back of the pachyderm with your body
accordion-ed into a scorpion pose with your bare feet almost touching the back of
your head. Your body collapses in a face-down spread eagle position as the three
8-ton elephants struggle with the 12-ton pachyderm.*

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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-29 23:09:45 +0000 UTC]

Dazed, I try shake my head clear, clear enough to do my utmost to hold on, even though the elephant is to round in size for me to get a solid grip. I just try keep pressed against it's back spread out evenly. Ok boy, give those three other elephants what-for!

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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-29 23:19:33 +0000 UTC]

*One elephant, of a bluish gray color, slams into the pachyderm from
the right causing you to slide to the right side of its back, your right
hand manages to go down the right side of the beast. The bluish-gray
elephant slams into the pachyderm, flattening your right hand as you
push your way back to the middle of its back again.*

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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-29 23:29:57 +0000 UTC]

I felt a sharp pain then numbness from my flattened right hand, I re-double my efforts to stay on and try to keep myself in the middle of the pachyderms back. Curse those smaller elephants!

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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-29 23:39:09 +0000 UTC]

*The pushing and shoving of the three elephants makes the large pachyderm
shift and shake. The pachyderm charges into the three elephants with such
force that your skinny body slides head-on to the back of the pachyderm's
head. The elephants has a push war against the might beast causing him to
start standing on its hind legs. Your groggy skinny body starts to slide
towards the 12-ton pachyderm's backside.*

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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-07-30 02:36:37 +0000 UTC]

I try to grip as best as I can with my legs and fore-arms! There isn't even any hair to bite and hold on with! I pray that I can hold on and my elephant can win.

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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-07-30 17:53:03 +0000 UTC]

*Behind the pachyderm is hill that drops at a fifteen degree angle
at the edge of the hill. You hold on to the back of the beast as it
stands straight up on its hind legs and starts to tip backwards
with the the other three elephants pushing the pachyderm. With one
big push, the three elephants push the pachyderm making the 12-ton
beast fall backwards. The three 8-ton elephants lose their footing from
the push and starts to roll on their sides passed the edge of the hill
just as the pachyderm slams on its back, leaving your skinny body
flush between the pachyderms back and the grassy-sandy hill.*

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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-08-01 13:11:28 +0000 UTC]

I held my breath and closed my eyes with fear as the pachyderm stood on it's hind legs. I couldn't hug the beast any harder if I tried, I turned my head to the side and lay my cheek tight against the pachyderms back, eyes still clamped shut!. Then I felt the world tip over, I opened my eyes to the world turning up side down, with the ground racing up towards me!

Everything seemed to go in very slow motion; I felt the crunching squish from my pelvis being squashed and flattened like a soft crunchy dough. , I felt my insides slowly squelch as my thin body was squeezed and flattened like a toothpaste tube onto the beasts back, I felt my chest crunch as my thin rib cage squashed wafer thin and flat, I saw the ground and elephant come together as I felt the sides of my face being squashed together and squeezed flat between them as my head was crushed thinner than a pancake!.

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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-08-01 20:45:25 +0000 UTC]

*The impact of the pachyderms back to the ground was
like a loud SPLAP!! sound. On impact, none of your
skinny body was seen as the squeezed flush between its back
and the ground. The incline of the hill sloped a few degrees more
as the pachyderm's back lifted off the ground. Soon the pachyderm
starts to roll on its neck, which sports a extremely flattened
barefoot spread-eagle skinny boy tattooed on the back of the pachyderm
in an upside-down position. The pachyderm is on its head, but its
momentum causes it to roll on its trunk and tusks. it rolled on its
fore legs and then on its hind legs. Instead of landing on its butt, it continues
backwards and about slam even harder on its back than the first
impact.*

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SkinnyHarry In reply to Squishjunkie [2016-08-04 23:48:04 +0000 UTC]

As feel the sensation of movement almost of flying, and I feel the warm jungle air rushing over my flattened body as the beast rolls over. I then realise the rolling is not going to stop as feel myself tilting into the same position just before I got squished into a sticker on the beasts back. I feel butterflies in my flat tummy with the thought of being squeezed a second time!

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Squishjunkie In reply to SkinnyHarry [2016-08-04 23:50:42 +0000 UTC]

*The impact was more severe but this time it had less
crunching effect on your bones. Your flattened body has become
somewhat wider during the second squishing. Again, your body can't be seen
from the elephant's squish while the other three elephants roll behind it. *

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TikiTako [2014-07-08 05:08:34 +0000 UTC]

I'd love to see you return to the cheerleader and come up with a new way to crush her.  

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Squishjunkie In reply to TikiTako [2014-07-09 20:18:50 +0000 UTC]

You're slowly giving me a brainstorm of an idea.

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Sleeves1991 [2014-06-30 11:29:25 +0000 UTC]

It's really hard to read without any spacing sadly.

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Squishjunkie In reply to Sleeves1991 [2014-06-30 19:34:37 +0000 UTC]

Did you try the "Double A" selection at the top of the story. Click that and then read it. The
letters expand for easy viewing.

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Sleeves1991 In reply to Squishjunkie [2014-07-01 23:25:06 +0000 UTC]

That's better but it's still straining.

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Squishjunkie In reply to Sleeves1991 [2015-06-23 00:11:37 +0000 UTC]

I re-spaced the story a while back. How does it look now?

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Sleeves1991 In reply to Squishjunkie [2015-06-25 04:17:21 +0000 UTC]

Much better! Thanks.

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Squishjunkie In reply to Sleeves1991 [2015-06-26 22:02:04 +0000 UTC]

I did this while reading it. It was easier to follow for me as well.
I'll have to make a mental note of this for future reference.

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DutchieRose [2014-06-18 13:50:25 +0000 UTC]

That story was fantastic!

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Squishjunkie In reply to DutchieRose [2014-06-18 21:16:20 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you liked it. The girl portrayed in the story is Kristen
otherwise known as "Flatgurl". She wanted me to write a story
about her involving a large animal and the elephant immediately
came to my mind. She really got flattened.

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DutchieRose In reply to Squishjunkie [2014-06-18 21:28:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh I see! That's nice hearing this. Did she like it?

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Squishjunkie In reply to DutchieRose [2014-06-18 21:34:04 +0000 UTC]

She didn't like it. She LOVED it.

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DutchieRose In reply to Squishjunkie [2014-06-18 21:39:08 +0000 UTC]

Ohh! I'm happy to hear that!!

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Squishjunkie In reply to DutchieRose [2014-06-18 21:42:20 +0000 UTC]

I'll be back. I have to go and eat.

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DutchieRose In reply to Squishjunkie [2014-06-18 21:42:54 +0000 UTC]

Aww, see ya!

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