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ridollstix [2012-10-08 05:49:53 +0000 UTC]

Loving that little splash of water and the different kinds of leaves~

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MusicalCombusken [2012-03-18 01:32:50 +0000 UTC]

I defiantly love the fun colors and movement throughout this piece! It completely reminds me of Autumn trees, lots of warm colors. I'll have to say - the hind legs are positioned oddly. I would have maybe expected the legs to be more bent? Bent or positioned so that it looks as if the legs are facing the opposite of how you're posing the hind legs now. So, behind, I guess. xD The expressions and colors overall are really nice an appealing! Awesome job! =]

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miflore [2012-03-09 22:38:25 +0000 UTC]

they really look great in your style >w<
I'm loving this fall theme ~
It really feets them !

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PrincePizzaParty [2012-02-29 03:13:00 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I'm here for #PokemonDaily to critique your work!

I will start off by saying I very much enjoy your color choices. There is a very nice mixture of warms and cools is relatively well balanced, though the blues and greens get a bit heavy on the lotad. It's a really minor detail, but I think if you maybe lightened its colors just a bit to match the other shades, your eye might not be drawn right to him.

There is a lot of motion within your piece, which I do like a lot! I think it was previously stated, however, that the zigzagoon's pose is a bit TOO exaggerated. It's a pretty challenging angle you're trying to portray, so I think some more work could be placed in getting that to look more like she's jumping forward and not being lifted by her tail.

The style of painterly strokes within the characters and background mixing in with the light line art are very charming. I really, really like the leaves in the foreground. I think that's one of the overall stronger parts of this particular drawing.

Finally, I find your light source to be a bit overbearing. Your shadows and highlights are wonderful, but the sun glaring directly into that corner does bother me a bit. I think if you possibly add more leaves on that tree in the right corner so that the sun peeks in (like you did at other points), it would benefit the scene entirely!

I'm sorry this is so long, but I hope it helped you! I think you've got a lot going for this piece and I enjoyed critiquing it. <:

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starrywish [2012-02-24 23:34:18 +0000 UTC]

Hey there! I saw you wanted a crituqe!

While this is a VERY nice picture and it's FULL of color. Urchin looks like his back is broken.

That body movment isn't very realistic. That one other leg showing ruined it for me. I'm NOT trying to be mean! ;A;

But what I mean is if you made the body scrunch up a little more so the right leg was hidden then it would look more like she's running. The body doesn't fit in with the picture that much because of this.

It kinda looks like she's throwing her body to the side to me. I hope this was okey. I'm not THAT good at this.

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0okami-Rei [2012-02-19 16:54:39 +0000 UTC]

This is like...fantastic.
I'm sorry I took like 10 days to finally comment on this.

ThE COLOURS.
THE COLOURS ARE SO VIBRANT AND WONDERFUL AND HOMGOODNESSLY WARM AND LIVELY AND FULL OF JOY!
I adore, adore ADORE, your use of colours. Just...wow... I could stare at this all day and let let your colours lead my eyes around and around and around. It's eye-candy. But not overwhelmingly sweet.
Warm, and joyous and just right.
I really love your sense of perspective too. This angle of yours really brings a greater depth of dynamism.
And the expression on Urchin's and Kaps' faces are just priceless. XD
I love how you paid attention to the fact that Kaps' lilypad contains Mystic Water. I was really pleased with that.

Thank you for this. ^^

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mystic-blat [2012-02-11 02:47:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is beautiful! I love the colors, and the perspective, and the lighting, and, and, and, and all of it!

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gusfromholland [2012-02-10 21:34:17 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE YOU

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Mad-Zazzy [2012-02-10 21:30:04 +0000 UTC]

Thats awesome!!! I love the warm colours and the character's expressions are adorable! ^^

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PrettyButUnpretty [2012-02-10 02:47:02 +0000 UTC]

You're only ever on here when I'm not, aren't you?

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SpringDragonfly [2012-02-10 02:10:31 +0000 UTC]

Amazing.

The colors are beautiful, and I love the angle and the Zigzagoon's pose. Great job!

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lyndsey96 [2012-02-10 02:00:46 +0000 UTC]

dayum.

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Guardiavoir [2012-02-10 01:23:39 +0000 UTC]

*Leaves

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ForrellianLight [2012-02-10 01:22:45 +0000 UTC]

Your colors are absolutely fantastic, with the way that it plays off of the bark on the trees, the leaves, and the Zigzagoon's eyes! Even the lines against that sun look great! All that I can say in a half-attempt to critique is that the Zigzagoon's hind-legs look a little bit odd when comparing it to the perspective, and I think maybe the light could add a bit more of an effect on the water getting splashed up from the Lotad's head?

Then again, I suck at critiquing, and what I probably said is a load of rubbish ;u;

Either way, this is marvelous!

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lowpolyseagull [2012-02-10 01:02:17 +0000 UTC]

I really love the colors you used in this! <3

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CrashNebulissa [2012-02-10 01:00:01 +0000 UTC]

I love the vivid color in this A+

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