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Published: 2011-05-22 07:13:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 2387; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 9
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Pixels! I was coloring this from a drawing i doodled when internet went down, and couldn't find a good background. So this happened. Her face is a bit chubby and childlike, but she's supposed to look like that

I'll post a bio later when it's not TWO A.M.

Now if you'll excuse me, I'll be passed out on my bed.

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Bio:
Full Name: Amber Marina Swayne
Why did their parents name them this?: Her hair is red.
Why did you, their creator name them this?: Because her hair is red.
Nickname(s): Amy (only by her guardian).
Why they have that as a nickname: He thinks it’s easier than saying Amber.
Do they like their nicknames?: She thinks it’s stupid because Amy doesn’t fit in Amber.

Sex: Female
Race/species: Amestrian, human.
Realm/Universe(Real world, an anime verse, etc.): Anime.
Age(and how old they look): 15 (13).
Birth date: November 16, 1899
Birth place: Dublith

Height: 5’5
Weight: 114 lbs

Describe their voice(Deep, rough, soft, high, etc.): Soft, calm, high-pitched when screaming or yelling at someone.

Eye color(s): Hazel.

General facial structure(high cheekbones, narrow eyes, etc.): A bit chubby with a small mouth and nose.
Face shape: Round.
Describe their eyes: Large and round.
Describe their nose: Small and curved.
Describe their lips: Small and normally smiling.
Ears(pointed, cat, etc.): She thinks they’re big because they stand out with her dark hair.

Body build(slim, muscular, etc.): Slim, a bit like an hourglass as she gets older.
How they smile(Smug, sincere, false, etc.): Smug, genial and caring, happy.
Describe how they walk(Fast, slow, weak step, etc.): Hesitant, long strides while in a hurry but can’t run.
Why do they walk this way?: A bit scared of anything happening to her.

Right/left handed(or ambidextrous perhaps?): Right.
Long fingered/short fingered hands?: Long.
Are their nails taken care of(Decently)?: She chews on them a lot, so uneven.

Hair color(s): Auburn.
Hair length: Long, down to her elbows, but lengths of hair as bangs go down to the middle of her neck.
Dyed?: No.
Hair style: Two locks of hair coming down from her bangs, with shortened bangs that go to her eyebrows on the right side, and brushed to the side away from her eye on the left (After she cuts it).
Skin/fur color(s): Pale, a bit pinkish.
Scars: A few after she’s been in a fight. Or tried to pick up a stray cat.
Tattoos(what they are and where): Painted fire and water transmutation circle on her palms.
Reasons behind tattoos: Thought it would be faster than drawing them when she needed them.

Outfit one: Normal

Clothing-Top: Black tank top under a white long sleeved shirt.
Clothing-Bottom: Black skirt or shorts
Clothing-Shoes: White thick soled combat boots.

Outfit two: While in Resembool

Clothing-Top: Black tank top.
Clothing-Dress: Old faded overalls.
Clothing-Shoes: Sandals.

Outfit three: Cool areas

Clothing-Top: White sweater.
Clothing-Coat: Black thick button up coat.
Clothing-Bottom: Black leather pants.
Clothing-Shoes: Black military knee-high boots.
Clothing-Accessories: Long gray scarf.

Mental|Spiritual|Emotional

Personality: Always happy unless something depressing happens, normally childlike or bored, sometimes lost in thought and trails off while speaking.

Do they have a healthy self image(How they themselves view them)?: She doesn’t really care, but when she’s around cute boys—or boys in general, even some girls she thinks are prettier—suddenly she’s too chubby, her skin is too pale, her hair color is weird, etc.

First impression usually given: Shy and sweet.
How do they handle times of struggle?: Lean on others for help.
Current faith(religion): Atheist

What superstitions do they have?: Pennies found on heads are good luck, and she will pick them up. If they are on tails, she makes a face at it and keeps her distance from people who pick those kind up.

Outlook on life: Sometimes she takes it for granted, but is reminded how precious it is.
General attitude: Happy and energetic.

Emotional trauma(if any, and why): When her father died, and when her guardian left her.
How do they respond when the trauma issue is talked about/touched on?: Doesn’t answer and is lost in her thoughts for a while.
Personal quote and(or) motto: When the rich wage war, it’s the poor who die.

In times of happiness, how do they react/respond?: Is speechless, then grins with bright eyes and squeezes the closest person’s hand (If she knows them).
Why?: Happiness is rare, and she likes to share it.
In times of much sadness, how do they react/respond?: Buries her head into someone’s shoulder, if alone keeps quiet with tears running down her eyes.
Why?: She doesn’t take things like that well.


Drive|Location|History

Current dream in life: Help Ed and Al get their bodies back.
Why is this their dream?: They helped her in her time of need.
Long term goals: To take care of kids or animals.
Why?: She loves them both.
Short term goals: Get money to eat…
Why?: She likes eating pancakes.
Life interests: Alchemy, sparring, cooking.

What country?: Amestris
City?: Central/ East City.
Current residence: Military dorms.
Do they live at their current residence by will?: Doesn’t really have anywhere else to go.

A brief history on them(how they got to where they are now): At Youswell her guardian left her there, and she met the Elrics in panic mode. They took her in just until the military located her guardian (Ed’s agreement for keeping her, since she kind of annoyed him in the beginning), but she ended up sticking with them.
Family background: Father got sick when she was 11, died when she was 12, her mother raised her for a few months, but couldn’t afford enough food, so left her with her Godfather (dad’s friend). They still visited each other until she left for Youswell.
Relationships|Education|Finances


Marital status(Single, married, dating, etc.): Single.
What kind of romantic are they?(easily lovestruck, tough nut, etc.): Likes black and blond hair, but really likes people after getting to know them.
What caused them to become this sort of romantic?: She likes guys that are cute, but like likes guys she’s come to know in personality, if she likes their personality.
What traits do they look for in a possible lover?: Sweet, gentle, shy, cute, smart.

Parents: Marina Swayne, Raymond Swayne.
View on friends: They are like support beams to help you.
Why do they feel this way about friends?: If they don’t help you in a way, they aren’t real friends.

Occupation: Helps out in the kitchen by cleaning (Doesn’t get paid much), hopes to become a State Alchemist.
Why they picked this occupation: She likes to clean to get her mind off things.



Up close and personal

Biggest phobias(Everyone has them): Thunderstorms; she gets so scared she can’t even speak.

What makes them tick(think the way they do)?: Knowing Ed and Al are always there for her.

Good habits: Makes her bed.
Bad habits: Chews her nails.

Eating habits: Healthy, but really likes pancakes and coffee.
Eating disorder(s)(if any): So many pancakes died for her to be half full…

Sleeping habits: Stays up late at night studying, and normally sleeps late unless needs to get up early.
Insomniac?: A bit.
If an insomniac, why?: A stressful life follows anyone associated with Ed and Al.

Special skills: Alchemy, a bit martial arts, high stamina.
Hobbies: Cooking, alchemy, sparring.
How do they spend their free time?: Sparring, studying, or just being lazy and hanging out in Ed and Al’s dorm.
What about their non-free time?: All work and no play makes Amber a dull girl. All work and no play makes Amber a dull girl. All work and no play makes Amber a dull girl. All work and no play makes Amber a dull girl. (Haha sorry xD)

What's their favorite time of day?: Midnight.
Why is this their favorite time of day?: It’s quiet and the night sky is beautiful.

Favorite food?: …Pancakes.
Why is this their favorite food?: It’s so yummy.
Least favorite food: Spinach.
Why is this their least favorite food?: It’s so gross.
Can they cook?: Some what, but—really ironic—she always burns the pancakes she tried to cook.

What is their favorite color?: Red.
Does this color have something to do with their personality?: She just thinks it’s pretty.
Why is this their favorite color?: It’s PRETTY!
Least favorite color: Neon colors.
Why is this their least favorite color?: She needs earplugs just to look at them…

Favorite animal: Ducks.



Indentity

(optional)

Biggest
Fear: What happens after she dies.
Vulnerability: Using loved ones against her.
Weakness: She’s a bit clumsy.
Strength: Anger makes her forget pain and she goes all out on something.
Skill: Alchemy.
Failure: Doing a faceplant while hurrying down the stairs.
Fetish: Sexual? Okay…glasses?

Favorite
Food: Pancakes.
Drink: Coffee.
Color: Red.
Skill: Alchemy.
Item: Picture of her and her friend.
Type of music: Slow and with melody.
Animal: Duck.
Body part: Eyes.
Eye color: Blue.
Hair color: Black or blond.

Least favorite
Food: Spinach.
Drink: Grape juice.
Color: Neon.
Animal: Ants.
Body part: Ears and feet,
Hair color: Pink.



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Know what's funny? I finished this drawing at one a.m., finished the bio at 1:20 a.m.
Someone. Kill. Me.
*Passes out*
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Comments: 38

trixstery [2011-06-18 05:07:08 +0000 UTC]

I really love this OC

She's like....one of the only non-Mary-Sues for FMA I've ever seen

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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-18 05:47:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh thanks she was a huge mary-sue when I made her...it was so funny T3T But I guess we all start off like that/

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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-18 05:55:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh really? How bad was she?

Was she as bad as mine?

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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-18 06:08:38 +0000 UTC]

Let us see how many we can name >D
1. She was a homunculus.
2. She could do alchemy.
3. Roy constantly hit on her (lmao even though she was like 14 xD)
4. It was uber CanonxOC (Like...so much it would make anyone puke rainbows)
5. Ffff she had like 5 transmutation circles tattooed on her.
I can do more, but I'm too embarrassed >3>

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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-18 06:18:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh...oh.....OH O.O

Well.

Then do you think mine (Avery) is a Mary-Sue then?
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[link] LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL FAIL

---------CAUTION THE NEXT PART IS SUPER LONG BECAUSE I AM SUPER SELF-CONSCIOUS ABOUT MY OCS--------

Info:
Name: Avery Lockhart
Age: 15
Gender: F
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Amber (lol Amber)
Height: 142 cm (4’ 8”)
Weight: 92 lbs
Race/Species: Chimera (Fox/Cat-Human)
Skin Tone: Fair
Weapon: Claws, Fangs
Attribute (If Any): Swiftness, Sneakiness
Debut: Forbidden Alchemist
Sibling(s):
* Ivy Lockhart (sister; 12-13)
Worst Enemy: Michelle Fischer
Best Friend(s): Charlotte Green
Love Interest: Alphonse Elric

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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-18 06:47:17 +0000 UTC]

Ffff no she's just interesting
lolz Amber amber >D
Plus I was a bad artist when I made her so it made her even more terrible~~
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FFFFFF
See dat choker on her neck??
Shee waas aa slaaavvve and abused by her dad n like abused by her owner n liek totally is a homunculus because her dad did like experimentz on her N ED LIEK SAVED HER FROM HER OWNER AND ED FELL IN LOVE WITH HER AND THEY WERE IN LOOOOOOOOOVE!!!!!!!!!!!! FFFFABHFVNEIVNJIVN
*Rips out all my hair*
Lol and she lost her memory...
I didn't even know what a mary-sue was when I made her~
I changed her a lot...and that's how Amber was made...
Sorry for the long comment xD

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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-18 07:02:22 +0000 UTC]

EVEN THOUGH she falls for Al and they're together at the end of my story? And she's a cat/fox chimera?

WOW. I did NOT realize that was her. I thought it was someone else. And no offence, but that's REALLY terrible. I love her current design though.

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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-18 08:19:26 +0000 UTC]

FFFF INO xD I sucked back then.
Plus, I think she looks more... FMA-ish now xD

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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-18 09:35:20 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, she does.

So wait, even with the things I just pointed out about my OC, you still don't think she's a sue

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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-18 21:02:19 +0000 UTC]

I don't know, lots of people have chimera OC's like my friends :3 One of them falls for Ed too. But I can't be too sure. I think it's mostly their history that I care about when it comes to being a bit mary sue-ish(lol whut?).

But then there are some who are so worried about it, their character's a bit boring. I think some "sues" are interesting, but then a few people go too far and it becomes a bit ridiculous xD

There are a lot of CanonxOC too, but I don't think it makes them Mary Sue.

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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-19 00:08:28 +0000 UTC]

SORRY FOR THIS EXTRA SUPER EXTREMELY LONG COMMENT

Okay, well, let's see, her backstory is sort-of simple actually. And I don't think it's overly traumatic, I mean she wasn't abused; she grew up in a loving family. And she wasn't a slave. And she wasn't treated horribly; she was treated like a normal person.

When she was ten and her sister was eight, a fire destroyed their house which also killed their father. Their mom disappeared and was never seen after that (but is not dead) and Avery and her little sister got separated. Later Avery decided to look for her sister and her mom, so she wanted to be stronger and have skills that would aide her in her search, so she asked an alchemist to turn her into a chimera of a fox, not knowing it was taboo. She later found out that the woman lied to her and the "fox" was actually already a chimera of a fox and cat, which is why her growth was stunted and she is so short. She hates that she is a chimera and wishes she hadn't done that, but doesn't dwell on it too much, while at the same time, she, like Ed & Al, wants to be separated from the fox-cat. So basically she's looking for her sister and mom and an alchemist who is on the run, called the "Freeing-Life Alchemist" who is the opposite of the "Sewing-Life Alchemist" and separates chimeras into their original forms, and the "Freeing-Life Alchemist" has a Philospher's Stone which allows her to do her alchemy. Basically Avery and Charlotte have a common goal with Ed and Al which is why they accept them in their travels.

Whoo! So sorry about the long comment, but do you think this is Mary-Sue?

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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-19 02:59:30 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, I don't know. It still just sounds interesting, and it's different from most. Have you heard of the Mary sue litmus test?

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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-19 03:04:41 +0000 UTC]

Really? You still just think she's interesting?

Yeah I done a lot of Mary-Sue litmus tests with her and they always say that she's not at all a Mary-Sue, but I'm not sure...

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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-19 04:15:13 +0000 UTC]

Have you tried the FMA one?

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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-19 13:01:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

Everything I've tried says she's not a Mary-Sue
And that she's not an FMA Mary-Sue

Actually, normally they say she's a perfect FMA OC--not too boring, but not too unbelievable for that universe either.

I've asked people and they all say the same thing.
Maybe I'm just too hard on her because she's my OC :/

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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-19 20:59:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, same for me .3.

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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-20 01:46:14 +0000 UTC]

I thought she was a total Mary-Sue and here I am with a good OC

Of course she used to be quite the Mary-Sue...she used to look like a female, dark-haired, short-haired Ed O.o
Right down to the yellow eyes

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Then she turned into this [link] , then this [link] , now this [link]
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Sorry for all the linking, but there was a lot of progression with her character from *extreme Sue* to *not Sue*

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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-20 03:59:19 +0000 UTC]

[link] I like her hair the best in this one :3
I just really like pigtails

I think I'm gonna go through my art drawer and pick out each drawing of her of where she changed.

Ugh D:< That'll be like 12 drawings

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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-20 04:26:33 +0000 UTC]

I kinda hated her hair in that one...Everytime I drew it, it was inconsistent, so I just gave her a different hairstyle...

That'd be pretty cool

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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-20 04:29:44 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I guess.

Fufu my cat is so gross it's cute T3T

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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-20 04:38:24 +0000 UTC]

SO RANDOM

Bingo, my dog, is so retarded that sometimes it's annoying -.-

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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-20 04:48:42 +0000 UTC]

My cat is such a bed hog D:< she hisses and claws at you if you even poke her...

But she still loves me and knows when I'm sad :3

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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-20 04:52:20 +0000 UTC]

lol

If you tell my dog to do something, he sits there and stares at you like you're stupid -.-

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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-20 04:56:20 +0000 UTC]

I taught my dog how to shake...I gave her food if she did it right.

So now she'll randomly come up to you and start clawing at your bare skin D:<

It's adorably painful.

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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-20 08:23:41 +0000 UTC]

lol

I taught my dog how to do stuff, and he used to, but now he just acts like everyone's retarded

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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-20 08:24:42 +0000 UTC]

How old is he? xD

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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-20 08:25:18 +0000 UTC]

7

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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-20 08:27:28 +0000 UTC]

That's old o3o my oldest dog is like 8 or 9, and his butt is bald cuz he rubs it on the couch so much >.>

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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-20 08:31:35 +0000 UTC]

lol

my dog...gets scared to sit on the couch
He usually gets in trouble if he's caught on the couch, but recently he's been allowed to and so when I told him to get on the couch, he stared at me for 30 seconds like "are you sure?" then got on it

It was funny

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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-20 08:36:32 +0000 UTC]

Lol xD

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Awoken-Artist [2011-05-27 22:50:40 +0000 UTC]

awesome ^^

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Srednas-Mas In reply to Awoken-Artist [2011-05-27 23:27:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks :3

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Awoken-Artist In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-05-27 23:28:39 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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Srednas-Mas In reply to Awoken-Artist [2011-05-28 00:44:51 +0000 UTC]

I love your icon btw Emo Ed is so cute

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Awoken-Artist In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-05-28 00:51:01 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^ hehe he is ^///^

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DragonKnightMirren [2011-05-23 01:18:00 +0000 UTC]

I like that name, and I look forward to seeing her bio.

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Srednas-Mas In reply to DragonKnightMirren [2011-05-23 04:02:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh thanks I'm working on it right now.

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DragonKnightMirren In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-05-23 12:11:28 +0000 UTC]

Cool .

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