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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-18 05:55:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh really? How bad was she?
Was she as bad as mine?
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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-18 06:08:38 +0000 UTC]
Let us see how many we can name >D
1. She was a homunculus.
2. She could do alchemy.
3. Roy constantly hit on her (lmao even though she was like 14 xD)
4. It was uber CanonxOC (Like...so much it would make anyone puke rainbows)
5. Ffff she had like 5 transmutation circles tattooed on her.
I can do more, but I'm too embarrassed >3>
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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-18 06:18:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh...oh.....OH O.O
Well.
Then do you think mine (Avery) is a Mary-Sue then?
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[link] LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL FAIL
---------CAUTION THE NEXT PART IS SUPER LONG BECAUSE I AM SUPER SELF-CONSCIOUS ABOUT MY OCS--------
Info:
Name: Avery Lockhart
Age: 15
Gender: F
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Amber (lol Amber)
Height: 142 cm (4’ 8”)
Weight: 92 lbs
Race/Species: Chimera (Fox/Cat-Human)
Skin Tone: Fair
Weapon: Claws, Fangs
Attribute (If Any): Swiftness, Sneakiness
Debut: Forbidden Alchemist
Sibling(s):
* Ivy Lockhart (sister; 12-13)
Worst Enemy: Michelle Fischer
Best Friend(s): Charlotte Green
Love Interest: Alphonse Elric
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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-18 06:47:17 +0000 UTC]
Ffff no she's just interesting
lolz Amber amber >D
Plus I was a bad artist when I made her so it made her even more terrible~~
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FFFFFF
See dat choker on her neck??
Shee waas aa slaaavvve and abused by her dad n like abused by her owner n liek totally is a homunculus because her dad did like experimentz on her N ED LIEK SAVED HER FROM HER OWNER AND ED FELL IN LOVE WITH HER AND THEY WERE IN LOOOOOOOOOVE!!!!!!!!!!!! FFFFABHFVNEIVNJIVN
*Rips out all my hair*
Lol and she lost her memory...
I didn't even know what a mary-sue was when I made her~
I changed her a lot...and that's how Amber was made...
Sorry for the long comment xD
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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-18 07:02:22 +0000 UTC]
EVEN THOUGH she falls for Al and they're together at the end of my story? And she's a cat/fox chimera?
WOW. I did NOT realize that was her. I thought it was someone else. And no offence, but that's REALLY terrible. I love her current design though.
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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-18 08:19:26 +0000 UTC]
FFFF INO xD I sucked back then.
Plus, I think she looks more... FMA-ish now xD
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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-18 09:35:20 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, she does.
So wait, even with the things I just pointed out about my OC, you still don't think she's a sue
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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-18 21:02:19 +0000 UTC]
I don't know, lots of people have chimera OC's like my friends :3 One of them falls for Ed too. But I can't be too sure. I think it's mostly their history that I care about when it comes to being a bit mary sue-ish(lol whut?).
But then there are some who are so worried about it, their character's a bit boring. I think some "sues" are interesting, but then a few people go too far and it becomes a bit ridiculous xD
There are a lot of CanonxOC too, but I don't think it makes them Mary Sue.
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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-19 00:08:28 +0000 UTC]
SORRY FOR THIS EXTRA SUPER EXTREMELY LONG COMMENT
Okay, well, let's see, her backstory is sort-of simple actually. And I don't think it's overly traumatic, I mean she wasn't abused; she grew up in a loving family. And she wasn't a slave. And she wasn't treated horribly; she was treated like a normal person.
When she was ten and her sister was eight, a fire destroyed their house which also killed their father. Their mom disappeared and was never seen after that (but is not dead) and Avery and her little sister got separated. Later Avery decided to look for her sister and her mom, so she wanted to be stronger and have skills that would aide her in her search, so she asked an alchemist to turn her into a chimera of a fox, not knowing it was taboo. She later found out that the woman lied to her and the "fox" was actually already a chimera of a fox and cat, which is why her growth was stunted and she is so short. She hates that she is a chimera and wishes she hadn't done that, but doesn't dwell on it too much, while at the same time, she, like Ed & Al, wants to be separated from the fox-cat. So basically she's looking for her sister and mom and an alchemist who is on the run, called the "Freeing-Life Alchemist" who is the opposite of the "Sewing-Life Alchemist" and separates chimeras into their original forms, and the "Freeing-Life Alchemist" has a Philospher's Stone which allows her to do her alchemy. Basically Avery and Charlotte have a common goal with Ed and Al which is why they accept them in their travels.
Whoo! So sorry about the long comment, but do you think this is Mary-Sue?
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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-19 02:59:30 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, I don't know. It still just sounds interesting, and it's different from most. Have you heard of the Mary sue litmus test?
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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-19 03:04:41 +0000 UTC]
Really? You still just think she's interesting?
Yeah I done a lot of Mary-Sue litmus tests with her and they always say that she's not at all a Mary-Sue, but I'm not sure...
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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-19 04:15:13 +0000 UTC]
Have you tried the FMA one?
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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-19 13:01:24 +0000 UTC]
Yeah
Everything I've tried says she's not a Mary-Sue
And that she's not an FMA Mary-Sue
Actually, normally they say she's a perfect FMA OC--not too boring, but not too unbelievable for that universe either.
I've asked people and they all say the same thing.
Maybe I'm just too hard on her because she's my OC :/
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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-20 03:59:19 +0000 UTC]
[link] I like her hair the best in this one :3
I just really like pigtails
I think I'm gonna go through my art drawer and pick out each drawing of her of where she changed.
Ugh D:< That'll be like 12 drawings
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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-20 04:29:44 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I guess.
Fufu my cat is so gross it's cute T3T
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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-20 04:38:24 +0000 UTC]
SO RANDOM
Bingo, my dog, is so retarded that sometimes it's annoying -.-
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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-20 04:48:42 +0000 UTC]
My cat is such a bed hog D:< she hisses and claws at you if you even poke her...
But she still loves me and knows when I'm sad :3
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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-20 04:52:20 +0000 UTC]
lol
If you tell my dog to do something, he sits there and stares at you like you're stupid -.-
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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-20 04:56:20 +0000 UTC]
I taught my dog how to shake...I gave her food if she did it right.
So now she'll randomly come up to you and start clawing at your bare skin D:<
It's adorably painful.
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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-20 08:23:41 +0000 UTC]
lol
I taught my dog how to do stuff, and he used to, but now he just acts like everyone's retarded
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Srednas-Mas In reply to trixstery [2011-06-20 08:27:28 +0000 UTC]
That's old o3o my oldest dog is like 8 or 9, and his butt is bald cuz he rubs it on the couch so much >.>
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trixstery In reply to Srednas-Mas [2011-06-20 08:31:35 +0000 UTC]
lol
my dog...gets scared to sit on the couch
He usually gets in trouble if he's caught on the couch, but recently he's been allowed to and so when I told him to get on the couch, he stared at me for 30 seconds like "are you sure?" then got on it
It was funny
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DragonKnightMirren [2011-05-23 01:18:00 +0000 UTC]
I like that name, and I look forward to seeing her bio.
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