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Published: 2016-04-04 20:44:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 5288; Favourites: 110; Downloads: 330
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Yet another CG Remake from a very old picture. This one, to be precise:I really tried to get the skin to be as greenish weird and bright but.. just didn't manage.
Bear with me, I have a lot to learn as well, still !
Anyway, I hope you guys like it somewhat. As I once said, by time, I'll do more of these. Any wishes what you'd like to see next?
Model is from XKammyX
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Arise from the ocean Ayane and complete your mission.
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she looks like she's behind the water not in the water xd
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I know ;_; I suck with photoshop in that regard...
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Do you want to know how to fix this?
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Oh yes, yes I do!! ;_; I mean, it's too late now for this one but for the future, I would love to know..
When I look at your last picture... I feel like a noob. XD
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The water wrapping around Ayane's body is at the same height as the horizon line. This is the most glaring problem with the water. To make it look like she is standing in the water, you have to move the horizon line higher up in your picture. A couple of centimeters (zoomed in size) should do it.
Also, you have water being transparent which is not infront of Ayane. It makes the water look brighter where it should not (see bottom right, and bottom left). Remember, we can only get a transparent quality to water if there is an object close enough to show it. The closest object for the water not infront of Ayane is the sea-bottom. It is far into the distance, and your line of sight should not be able to penetrate that much water. No transparency for those areas in other words.
I think those two things would fix it.
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Wish I would have known this before... *Sighs*
God.. yeah- I didn't think of any of that..
Post-work can be such a "hard task" ;_;
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Yes, it can be difficult at times. I know. But you have a good learning spirit. You will overcome
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Daaang she's so shiny and pretty! I like it! Good work! ^^
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Except for my non existent "make it look like she stands in water" skills. XDD Thank you!
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Yeah.. I could have done something on that regard, true..
Well, still have a lot to learn.
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You always do such awesome work 
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You think?
Thank you so very much!
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Of course!
Look at the two of them side by side, and you will notice major improvement in the newer one.
As the saying goes, there's only one way to go and that's up!
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