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ssbbforeva — Hoshi No Kaabii: A Recurring Nightmare #47
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Published: 2014-11-28 07:14:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 8584; Favourites: 73; Downloads: 13
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YAY, UPDATE!this is probably the best Dedede has ever looked in my comic, and of course he has a grand total of two different expressions on the page.
I upped the resolution while scanning on this one, to test it out. notice any improvements? I honestly can't tell much difference (OTHER THAN IT GOT FREAKING HUGE), anyone else have some thoughts?
not my best paced page, to be sure. my apologies if this whole section feels rather drawn out, 'cause any major action will be a few more pages ahead.
Hoshi No Kaabii and characters (c) Nintendo
Forta and story (c) me
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Comments: 38
Why aren't they dragging escargon along when they know the two are up to something?
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I got a suggestion for you. When you're done with the comic, you should do "bloopers" as though they were filming a movie.
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The king's mustache.... SSO FABULOUS!!! Also, looks like he ate aa lot of cheeseburgers in order to survive the trip..
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Escargoon, you disgusting snail cover Tuff's/Bun's mouth. Have you wash your hands?
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Another awesome comic page. Also,Dedede has a handlebar mustache like those 1930's movie villain!
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Dedede: *innocent whistling* Nope, this isn't a trick not at all
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I completely agree with Bun/Tuff at the end XD This is a hundred percent going to lead to trouble either way.
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Ah, the I-have-an-evil-plan mustache. Dedede does that so, so well. XD
Awesome colouring and shading, by the way.
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Kinda makes you wonder what the safest option was =_=
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I really love Kirby here. He's so trusting and happy. This might be a completely random question, but I curious. Can Forta read? I've been thinking about that for awhile especially thinking about the Sentoki race and the fact she doesn't know anything about technology. So yeah, can Forta read?
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I love the shading you're putting into the gold edge of Deed's hat! It looks great! The expressions look great, too!
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Kirby is happy that their buddy DeDeDe is join them
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Wow. King Dedede wants to join them. Great.
BTW, awesome comic though! ^^
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so many comics updated today *_* and it is awesome
anyways!
this page definitely looks better,to me!(though everyone's bodies seem a bit longer for some reason...or i'm just imagining it,i don't know)
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I love Forta's little pout in the last panel. also Dedede's mustache.... i need a plz account of that, it's too good
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OH!! I remember when you were working on this!!! It looks even MORE perfect than it did as a sketch
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well golly gee, things generally look better fully colored then they do sketched 
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Don't get me started on my art. You are so much better!!!!!! I like your style!
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WELL I LIKE YOUR STYLE.
plus you can do realistic art. that automatically puts you one step higher in landing a career in art.
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YOU KNOW THIS TRUTH TO BE TRUE. ACCEPT IT.
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I must appreciate that there is a bring it on plz account from emperor's new groove
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NO. I won't! You are much better so shush and deal with it!!
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Wholly chuck...
These feel like actual episodes!
I really, really like how Dedede Looks!
may I be permitted to draw stuff inspired by the posed you've drawn?
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and I certainly don't see why not, so long as you give credit when due.
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Yaasssss update!!
Each page you make gets artistically better and better
PD:I think that if you could learn to make colors more vivid and stronger in Photoshop or in any image-editing program it would help you A LOT
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well, I kinda like them on the mellow side :/ bright colors get really unattractive for me really fast. also I suck at photoshop when I tried it and don't own any programs related to it.
where do you think the colors need to be stronger?
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You're the only one I know that can draw the kirby anime's style with 99'9% of accuracy
If you like them this way, then I won't say anything. The artist comes first, always. UwU
However, I think the thing that should be seen better is the text. If you could use a pen to trace your text, it would be seen better.
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