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Published: 2013-10-23 01:28:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 1084; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 3
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yaaaaaaaaaay more dominus.tried out a new way to do his fingers, going for less of a clawed, stiff look and more of an unnatural, flowing look. feedback, please!
second try at drawing a scroll, and I am quite aware that the writing absolutely sucks. I guess that's what happens when you try writing "Through the power of my desire, under no duress save me own, I solemnly swear to the one and only Dominus any item of his choice, so long as it is mine to give. In exchange for said item(s), I shall receive the right to change exactly twenty-four hours of any past time, so long as the event that is to be edited occurred seventy-two hours before I was approached by Dominus. Should the past be changed and I have failed to deliver the requested item(s), then I will faithfully serve no less than three hundred and sixty-four days under Dominus. I must follow his every order, so long as it is in my power and causes no bodily harm to myself. I fully understand the terms and agree" on a strip of my paper less than an inch thick. and yes, not all of that is actually on the scroll, couldn't fit it
on another note, im starting to really get tired of all of my requests. concentrating solely on them has become more of a job than a pastime, so I might end up putting them on hold for a bit and try and do more pages of ARN. PLEASE GIVE ME YOUR OPINION: DO MORE REQUESTS, OR COMIC PAGES.
similar note, I need to write out new bios for forta, maja, dominus, and another character that ive made but haven't named. CURSE YOU SKYRIM AND YOUR ADDICTIVENESS!
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Why does this character remind me of kyubey
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He's from madoka magica. He asks innocent girls to make a contract with him. The contract is that the girl get one wish, and they became magical girls who fight witches (evil creatures who like to kill people).Β Once they fight witches, the witch's energy is used to purify the "Soul Gem", their source of magic and to give energy toΒ Kyubey. What they don't know is that the wish alwaysΒ has a side effect. (For example,Β Sayaka wishes a boy she has a crush on could heal, but then a friend of her starts crushing on him, and they become boyfriend and girlfriend.) This makes the girls despair, and then their soul gems become so dirty that they die and are brought back to life corrupted as witches, with no memories of past life. This happens over and over again though history in the anime. It's very, very dark
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Great job. I wonder what would happen if someone wanted a loved one back to life and would give anything to see them again? Anyway,if it were me,I would not make any deals with him.
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x3 Dominus! I'm just really enjoying this character~ and every time you draw him i'm like.... fav*
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Γice~
But if you don't mind, I won't sign the contract, too dangerous
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And I vote Comic Pages over requests
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I vote for comic pages!
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Dominus looks awesome, will he have any role in the comic? If so, I'm very intrigued. Well done!
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Maybe the hand can alter from norma to the unnatural one we see here.
As for your opinion, I figure you try to get the requests out the way so no one would get aggravated or anything.
I too must muster up renewed bios for some characters,
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I really REALLY like this.
The text is oddly big for such a small space, but in a way adds a small amount of drama to the contract. The text direction, however is perfect. I don't want to know how much time you put into it. It's striking, and that speaks volume to time.
His eyes were done so well! I can't get over that fact in itself! They are deep! Mesmerizing! As well as the gem on his cloak.
Wonderful^^
One thing I've been curious about is when you draw the area around his neck why is it you cannot see his vest going over his shoulder?
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yeah... thats what happens when you try fitting a paragraph on an inch of paper 
really? i thought it turned out rather crappy. course, that could be just me and my self-insulting ways.
its funny, his eyes are the easiest part. just start the shading heavy, Β then get light really fast, making sure to keep the highlights blank. but thank you
because i cant figure out how to draw in his vest without making it look really crowded?
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No problem!
I understand that one! I've tried it, although the finished product had so many eraser marks it as illegible
Oi, it's much better than you think, and anyways, if this is bad the next time you try it this will be much better, no?
I actually was going to ask if you used white ink to help with highlights. I guess that answered that
Hmm... Likely having it there wouldn't make the shoulder seem crowded. I'm mainly saying that because without the 'sleeve' there the space seems blank, and in reality if you only let enough of the 'cloth' show, to show that it was his vest then the image would make sense and not seem overfilled.
If that makes sense
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DONT LOOK, YOU FOOL! HE WILL MURDER YOU!!!
XD thats the overall opinion, guess ill have to get working on that again.
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I'll sign anything up if I can be with you forever and ever, Dominus~ *fangirl-squee*
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NO! YOU KNOW NOT WHAT YOU DO!
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Hurr~ 
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About the hands, looks great,very natural, I think you did a good job with them
Wow... that scorll shall have took qa lot of time to do O_O It looks good indeed, but maybe the text's size is too big for an small surface. However, the lines are very well, following the paper angles perfectly.
Anyways, great job with this one, and I'll prefer more ARN pages, but you'll be the one who will take the final decision.
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thank you very much for the feedback!
considering that the entire area i had to work with was, like, 5 X 8 inches, and the scroll is less than an inch thick, i dont think i could have gotten the writing any smaller XD
but thank you
well, i have no idea what i wanna do actually. decision making? not my strongest attribute
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Your welcome my friend ^-^
Mmm... maybe a poll will help you to know what we want? However, I'm not sure if that's a premium thing or is avaliable by default. Or you can always flip a coin xD
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NO! YOU KNOW NOT WHAT YOU DO!
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do more comic pages
sorry i'm just eager to see what happens dang...normally i just use squiggly lines for writingX_Xhow long did it take to come up with all of that...? π: 0 β©: 1
fine maybe i will XD
it took me about 5 minutes, hence why there is no creativity whatsoever in the context
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yayXD
ah...still:3
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Do whatever you'd like c: And I love this picture~
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