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sslyd3r — Groom talks to himself
Published: 2008-09-10 01:35:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 87; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description I have a delicacy, a fruit that's not mine.
I see the hurricane upon the horizon of my
sunset, but words still fall unspoken

The eyes that once shined with sincerity,
now stare into twilight, in the face of my love.
I had spun the world in a new direction, rearranged
the stars for her, and now my sun rises on a different coast

The light of my passion and earnest awoke your enthusiasm,
and I forgot the emotion of love.  I brought to you
the realization of beauty (in yourself), and now I'm alone

Come sweetheart.  Our next adventure awaits
We'll walk bound, hand in hand, the proprietors
of hypocrisy.  Time is something to savor with you,
tomorrow may find me a new disaster.
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Comments: 6

detailedillusion [2008-09-11 22:11:17 +0000 UTC]

Nice man, love the imagery in there, could picture the whole thing well done

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sslyd3r In reply to detailedillusion [2008-09-12 02:27:23 +0000 UTC]

thanks, hope you get a chance to read the original

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xalways [2008-09-10 10:03:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh! This is the one you told me about right?
I do love the imagery you've set up and every picture you've painted in my mind because of your words.
You're very good at that.

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sslyd3r In reply to xalways [2008-09-11 02:17:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks I turned it in, and he's gonna read it to the class tomorrow, so i'm anxious to see what the kiddies in my class say.

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xalways In reply to sslyd3r [2008-09-11 09:50:35 +0000 UTC]

Well thats awfully exciting!
I'm sure they'll like it, no worries.

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sslyd3r In reply to xalways [2008-09-11 19:05:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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